2016届江西省莲花高考英语二轮复习基础品析：书面表达（5）

　　江西莲花县2016高考英语书面表达（二轮）基础品析（5）

　　【2016高考训练题】书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你是李梅，你的好友Kathy给你发了一封邮件，请根据邮件内容给Kathy写一封回信。

　　内容包括：

　　1．介绍你勇敢面对挑战的经历；

　　2．你的合理建议。

　　注意：120词左右。短文的开头及结尾已给出。（不计入总词数）

　　Dear Li Mei,

　　I have a problem, and I don’t know what to do. Our school is going to hold an English Drama Contest. I am interested in it and I have signed up for it. But now as the contest is drawing near, I feel more and more nervous and anxious and I even want to quit ... Have you ever had such experiences? When you face challenges, what do you usually do? I will be very grateful if you give me some advice.

　　Yours,

　　Kathy

　　Dear Kathy,

　　I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs. _________________________

　　Yours,

　　Li M

　　【参考范文】书面表达（满分25分）Dear Kathy,

　　I feel greatly honored to be trusted with your personal affairs.You are not the single person who has had such an experience. When I participated in a speech contest last year, I also felt very nervous and even thought of withdrawing from the contest. After a painful struggle, I decided to face up to the challenge. And finally I made it, overcoming my fear and anxiety, and showing my confidence on the stage. It was through this challenge that I realize the importance of being brave and optimistic.

　　Every challenge is our opportunity to grow, no matter how difficult it is. So my suggestion is that you should face this challenge bravely because we know that on the other side of a challenge, there is always hope. As long as you have tried your best, you are great, whatever the results are.

　　Yours,

　　Li Mei

　　书面表达

　　假如你是李华，你发现部分同学每次遇到重要考试，都会出现一些焦虑症状。请你用英语写一封信，向某学生英文报编辑反映该问题并提出建议。信的内容应包括下列要点：

　　焦虑症状：头晕、乏力、食欲不振等。

　　建议：1制定计划；

　　2．正常作息；

　　3．保证睡眠。

　　其他建议(内容由考生自已拟定)。

　　注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　2．要准确使用语法和词汇；使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；

　　3．词数：120左右；

　　4．开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　5．参考词汇：头晕dizzy(adj.)

　　Dear editor，

　　I'm a Senior Three student of Changsha No.1 High School.I'm writing to tell you about some symptoms of anxiety among us students before exams.______________

　　_____________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　【参考范文】

　　Dear_editor，

　　I_am_a_Senior_Three_student_of_Changsha_No.1_High_School.I_am_writing_to_tell_you_about_some_symptoms_of_anxiety_among_us_students_before_exams.

　　Most of us feel nervous whenever we're taking an important exam.Some will feel dizzy or tired，some will suffer from lack of sleep，and some will lose their appetite.In fact，all these symptoms have terrible effects on our exams and we are all eager to get rid of them.

　　First of all，it's important for us to have a right attitude towards exams.They are only a means of checking how we are getting along with our studies，so there is no need to worry too much about the results.

　　Study hard every day and make careful plans for every exam.In this way we can avoid suffering from the pressure of exams.Besides，enough sleep can make us energetic and enable us to perform well in an exam.

　　From my experience，going out for a walk or taking some outdoor exercise before going to bed can also keep ourselves relaxed.

　　Yours_sincerely，

　　Li_Hua

　　书面表达

　　根据漫画，请以“烟”为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述下面的内容，并就此发表你的评论。

　　要求：1.文章必须包括描述和评论两部分；

　　2．根据内容适当发挥，注意行文连贯；

　　3．词数120左右。

　　______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【参考范文】

　　Smoke

　　This is a funny and instructive picture.In the picture，a young man is smoking happily in a factory when he sees a sign which means “No smoking”on the wall.But he finds that the factory is giving off large quantities of heavy smoke which makes him feel very puzzled，“Why does the factory forbid people to smoke while the factory itself emits so much poisonous smoke？”

　　Nowadays，many factories know the danger of smoking to themselves and don't allow people smoking in the factory.However，they don't pay any attention to the danger that they cause to the whole society.And they let out lots of polluted smoke which does great harm to our environment.

　　In my opinion，we could live without most of the industrial products，but we could not survive without nature！Therefore，something must be done to prevent the pollution caused by all factories！

　　【2016高考训练】书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你即将参加你校主题为“Preparing Myself for College Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据提示写一则简短的英语演讲稿。构想一下你的大学生活和你打算怎么做来适应大学生活。内容要点应包括：

　　1. 确定新的学习目标；

　　2. 学会独立生活；

　　3. 参加各种活动；

　　4. 处理好与同学的关系。

　　注意：1. 短文的内容要连贯、完整；

　　2. 字数：100 左右(开头己给出的单词不计入单词总数）。

　　Preparing Myself for College Life

　　Hello, everyone! My college life is right around the corner and I’m getting ready for it.

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　That’s all. Thank you!

　　【参考范文】书面表达

　　One possible version:

　　Preparing Myself for College Life

　　Hello, everyone! My college life is right around the corner and I’m getting ready for it. As for me, college life is a brand new experience. In order to get used to college life as soon as possible, I should prepare myself for that from now on.

　　To begin with, after entering college, I intend to set new goals in my studies and stick to them until I succeed. What’s more, since I am away from home, it is necessary for me to learn to live independently. Without doubt I should do laundary and clean-up all by myself. In my spare time, I will take part in a diversity of activities, such as going to the English Corner to practise my spoken English. In addition, getting along with my classmates and teachers at college is another challenge for me, but for sure I’ll make it.

　　I have a strong belief that my college life will be fabulous.

　　That’s all. Thank you!

　　【2016高考训练】书面表达（满分25分）（见答题卡上）

　　假如你是李夏。你看到关国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话

　　(Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请银据以下提示用英语给她写一封电于哪件。

　　1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿；

　　2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由；

　　3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议；

　　4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。

　　注意：

　　1.

　　词数120左右，开头语已为你写好；2.

　　可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.

　　文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；

　　Hi Sharon,

　　This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Li Xia

　　【参考范文】书面表达（满分25分）

　　Hi Sharon,

　　This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think I’m fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I’m quite confident that I can help you learn Mandarin.

　　Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese、see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.

　　In your post, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. I’m eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English. We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.

　　Hope for you early reply!

　　Yours Sincerely

　　Li Xia