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6.
On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”, was having an
environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They
picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. Under
their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. When time came for them to fly the bird, they
felt a bit of pity but very delightful I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the
public to show respects for the nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we
get along well with it.
【答案】
On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members from “Green Eyes”, was having an
were
environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They
caught
picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it should die without timely help, they took it home. Under
up
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their treatment and care, the lucky bird got recovered soon. When time came for them to fly the bird, they
felt a bit of pity but very delightful I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the
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delighted
them
public to show respects for the nature. Only by changing the way which we treat the environment can we
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in which/ that/去掉
get along well with it.
7.
Our English teacher is a middle-aged woman,who had been teaching English for more than 20 years.She is always working hard.For a model teacher for many years, she is kind and friendly to us and very strict with us. In class,she always encourages us speak and read English as much as possible. She is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interesting.In her spare She In time,she often teaches us English song and helps us to put on English short plays.She loves us so 10 much as she is always ready to help us.In the fact,she is not only our good teacher but also our good friend.We all respect and love him.
Our English teacher is a middle-aged woman, who had been teaching English for more than
has
20 years. She is always working hard. For a model teacher for many years, she is kind and friendly
As / Being
to us and very strict with us. In class, she always encourages us ∧ speak and read English as
but
to
much as possible. She is quite good at teaching and try to make her lessons live and interesting. In
tries
lively
her spare time, she often teaches us English song and helps us to put on English short plays. She
songs
loves us so much as she is always ready to help us. In the fact, she is not only our good teacher but
that (删除as亦可)
also our good friend. We all respect and love him.
her
8.
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加上一个漏词符号【∧】,并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线【\】划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者【从第11处起】不计分。
The day is my Dad’s birthday. This afternoon I went to the shopping center downtown, and bought present for him. Then I took the subway train to home. Sitting on the train, I thought my dad will be very happy when she saw the present. At the next station, an old lady with two heavy bag got into the train and stood in front of me. She looked tiring. I hesitated for a moment, and then offered my seat to her. The old lady thanked me a lot and sat down. Seen her smile, I felt happily. I will always ready to help others in the future.
第二句present前加a;第三句home前的to去掉;第四句will改为would,she改为he; 第五句bag改为bags,into改为on;第六句tiring改为tired;第九句Seen改为Seeing, happily改为happy;第十句always 后加be
9.
【2017·银川一中模拟】I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.
短文改错:
I just come back from Britain last week . I was luckily enough to be
came
lucky
one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb.16 to
students
28. We paid a visit to many places ,like London, Oxford or
and
the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in
London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much
which
many
more old buildings . The Lake District was beautiful, but it was ∧pity
a
that it
rained heavily
when they were there. The most excited thing
we
exciting
for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.
10.
Nowadays more and more people are concerning about their health, but how to keep health? First,
it is necessary to take any exercise every day.Research shows that get plenty of exercise makes
the heart beat fast and the lungs work harder.Second, eat more fruits, vegetable and less meat.
Third, getting rid of bad habits as smoking and drinking is also important way to keep healthy.
Smoking and alcohol drinking injures one’s health a great deal, and therefore should be given up.
If people follow these three ways of keeping fit, they’ll great improve their health.
【参考答案】
第一句中的concerning改为concerned,考察词组be concerned about sb./sth.关心、挂念某人/某事;health改为healthy,因为keep为连系动词,后面要跟形容词。
第二句中any改为some,any一般用于疑问句或否定句中,在肯定句中意为“任何”。
第三句中get改为getting,在句中作宾语从句的主语;fast改为faster,与harder保持一致。
第四句中改为vegetables,这是可数名词
第五句中as改为like,as作介词用意为“作为,当……时候”,like作介词用意为“像,比如,诸如……之类”;important前加an,因为way是可数名词。
第六句中injures改为injure,smoking and alcohol drinking为并列主语,动词要用复数。
第七句中great改为greatly,修饰动词improve要使用副词。
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