2016届广东省天河区高考英语二轮语法复习精讲精练：短文改错03

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　　11.

　　One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.

　　while—when

　　us—him

　　so-but

　　has-had

　　checked-check

　　call in 去掉use-using

　　little前加a

　　that—what

　　really-real

　　12.

　　Like many teenagers in China, most of my spare time was spent doing my homework. As a result, I don’t have enough times to do that I’m interested in even on weekends or on holiday. The first thing which I enjoy when I have a few spare minute is to listen to music. It’s the best way for me to escape the stress of their study. When I listen to music, it is like go to another world. Sometimes, the words of the songs seem to express exact how I’m feeling. Besides, I’m also interested in a fashion and I’m always searching something special that can reflect my personality.

　　1. was spent--- is

　　2. enough times --- time

　　3. do that --- what

　　4. thing which --- that

　　5. spare minute --- minutes

　　6. their study --- my

　　7. like go --- going

　　8. express exact --- exactly

　　9. in a fashion

　　10. searching∧something --- for

　　13.

　　The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what to stop wasting water. One of the step that we should take is to find ways of reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials by the workers so that it can reused. But even if every large city purified and reused it’s water, we still would have enough water.

　　【参考答案】

　　The water we drink and use was running short. We all have to learn what

　　is

　　how

　　to stop wasting water. One of the step that we should take are to find ways of

　　steps

　　reusing it. Today in the most large cities, fresh water is used only once and

　　去掉

　　then it runs in waste system. But that is possible to pipe the used water to a

　　into

　　it

　　purifying factory, there the used water can be treated with chemical materials

　　where

　　by the workers so that it can ∧reused. But even if every large city purified and

　　be

　　reused it’s water, we still would ∧have enough water.

　　its

　　not

　　14.

　　One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the

　　ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent

　　that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a

　　while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what

　　shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to

　　her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.

　　【参考答案】

　　One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I∧told that the

　　for

　　was

　　ticket had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent

　　tickets

　　strong

　　that he had a spare ticket. I didn’t know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a

　　去掉

　　hesitating

　　while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what

　　But

　　shall I do? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to

　　should

　　the

　　off

　　her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me.

　　15.

　　In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. More

　　and more school in China require students to take part

　　community service during the vocations. Students are often

　　seeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and visit orphanages. Community service is of the great benefit to both those in

　　need and society. Moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. As modern middle

　　school students, we should get active involved in community service. By participating, we can learn what to work well

　　in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. Undoubtedly, both of these are important to

　　our development. Therefore, they should treasure all such chances.

　　In recent years, the volunteering spirit has spread among the Chinese people, especially among youngsters. More

　　and more school in China require students to take part ∧ community service during the vocations. Students are often

　　schools

　　in

　　seeing to sweep the streets, plant trees and visit orphanages. Community service is of the great benefit to both those in

　　seen

　　need and society. Moreover, community service is helpful to cultivate our socially responsibility. As modern middle

　　social

　　school students, we should get active involved in community service. By participating, we can learn what to work well

　　actively

　　How

　　in a team, how to improve our interpersonal skill and organizing ability. Undoubtedly, both of these are important to

　　skills

　　all

　　our development. Therefore, they should treasure all such chances.

　　we

　　16.

　　例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend ∧ weekend with you. Luckily I

　　the

　　was completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday.

　　am

　　on

　　Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious

　　influenced people daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces

　　of advice is put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads are built. By this

　　way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.

　　Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic

　　flow. But on the other hand, this will effect the consumption and makes buses more crowded.

　　In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under the control. And at the same time，

　　buses should have their own special routes cannot be used by other vehicles. 

　　Nowadays，people in many big cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. It has seriously influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problem，some pieces of advice are put forward. Some people suggest that more streets and roads should be built. In this way，the traffic density can be reduced, thus speeding up the flow of buses and cars.

　　Some people advise limiting the number of bikes and cars. This can decrease the traffic flow. But on the other hand，this will affect the consumption and make buses more crowded.

　　In my opinion，the number of private cars should be put under control. And at the same time，buses should have their own special routes which/that cannot be used by other vehicles.