2016届广东省天河区高考英语二轮语法复习精讲精练：短文改错05

　　短文改错精讲精炼05

　　22.

　　George,

　　It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home．Thank you very much

　　for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals．After we said

　　goodbye to you, we went to Washington D．C．, where we stayed for three days．My brother

　　was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple

　　of day．Therefore, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday

　　afternoon．It was really a nice experience．If you'd like to make trip to our city some

　　day, I will be better than happy to be your guide．

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　　George,

　　It's been a week after we left your family and we are now back home．Thank you very much

　　Since

　　for showing them around your city and providing us for the wonderful meals．After we said

　　us

　　with

　　goodbye to you, we went to Washington D．C．, where we stayed for three days．My brother was so much fond of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying another couple of day．

　　stay

　　days

　　Therefore, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon．It

　　However

　　flew

　　was really a nice experience．If you'd like to make trip to our city some day, I will be better than

　　a

　　more

　　happy to be your guide．

　　MikeTime and tide wait no man. My mother is becoming a middle-age woman

　　quietly. She had been busy running after us all the years. My father is very busy every

　　day outside. But the heavy burden falls on my mother’s shoulder. Because my school is

　　far from my home, I have to go to school by the train and my mother sees me off at the

　　station every time. I often choose a seat where is close to the window, so I can see her.

　　However, I always can’t help run tears from my eyes. All the buildings and people

　　outside the window disappear. I wave gentle to my mother and I look at her till the

　　view of her back disappears . Up to now, even if he is busy, she still does it as usual.

　　The view of my mother’s back will never change in my heart.

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　　24.

　　假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号【∧】，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线【＼】划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者【从第11处起】不计分。

　　It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.

　　China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for

　　them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has

　　caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the

　　Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of

　　shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.

　　They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use

　　these cloth bags instead plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help

　　第一节：

　　It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free.

　　got

　　China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for

　　and/so

　　them. The Chinese once use about 300 million plastic shopping bags a day, which has

　　used

　　caused environmental pollution because plastic bags are not easily to break down. So the

　　easy

　　Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of

　　are

　　shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea.

　　students

　　an

　　They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use

　　these cloth bags instead ∧plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help

　　of

　　their

　　protect the environment.

　　23.

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线()划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　Dear Mom，

　　Mother’s Day is coming.I’m sorry that I am abroad

　　66．________

　　and can’t send your flowers，so I’m writing to you.

　　67．________

　　Mom，I know I have never expressed my thank to you

　　68．________

　　before.But on today，at this special time，I just want to tell

　　69．________

　　you loudly：I love you ，Mom! Thank you so much by not

　　70．________

　　only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good

　　71．________

　　person.Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom，though

　　72．________

　　I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your

　　73．________

　　part in my heart.Whenever I am，I will always love you.

　　74．________

　　Hope you good health and much happiness every day!

　　75．________

　　Your little girl，

　　Jennifer

　　[解析]

　　66. √

　　67. your改为you。考查代词。此处动词send接双宾语，应使用宾格形式，构成短语send sb. sth.。

　　68. thank改为thanks。考查名词的数。“表示感谢”应为：express one’s thanks。

　　69. 去掉on。考查介词。在副词today之前不用介词，故去掉。

　　70. by改为for。考查介词。Thank sb. for…为固定短语“因……而感谢某人”。

　　71. teach改为teaching。考查非谓语动词。此处是but连接的用于介词之后的并列的动名词形式。

　　72. had改为have。考查动词的时态。全篇文章属于现在的时态，故将过去完成时改为现在完成时。

　　73. may后加not。考查句意衔接。句意为：妈妈，虽然我可能没有经常说，但我确实很爱你。

　　74. Whenever改为Wherever。考查连词。根据句意：无论我在哪里，我总是爱你的。

　　75. Hope改为Wish。考查动词辨析。动词hope后不能接双宾语，而wish可以，wish符合语境和语法规则。