2016届高考英语二轮短文改错专项突破：短文改错集训（7）

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（七）

　　【专项突破】短文改错

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Passage 1

　　My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

　　One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

　　That day I didn't learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity!

　　Passage 2

　　Dear Miss Li,

　　I’m one of your student in Class Six, Senior Three. Nowadays I meet a great many difficulties when studied English. To begin with, it is very difficult of me to memorize a large number of new words. In addition, grammar is too complex to understand, that has influenced my English writing seriously. And my performance on reading and correcting are not satisfying. Faced with such a dilemma, you hope that you can give me a hand. Would you provide me with some effectively approaches? Secondly, I believe that I will have good command of what you teach, if you will slow down your speed in the class. There is no doubt whether I will achieve great progress in English learning with your assistance.

　　Thank you.

　　Yours,

　　Wang Min

　　Passage 3

　　My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day. Last

　　Saturday, as usual, she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study at home until deeply into the night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn’t work effectively. In Sunday morning, she was abut to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside. Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On the Monday，Mary was energetic but active in class. She spent the whole day in the countryside, and Mary said what she had done was worthwhile.

　　Passage 4

　　It is three years now since I graduate from Xinhua High School. Last Sunday, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in touch with everybody and set a properly time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.

　　Passage 5

　　Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! I’d like tell you something about the holiday we have arranged it for you. For those who wants to ski, you can rent skis on the spot, and boots too. Surely it is better if you have your own boots. Don’t forget it can get quite cold in the day, so warm clothes are must. The ski-poles are often very hot when it is sunny, so be care not to get burnt. The hotel booking for you is very comfortable, and the nights do get very cold sometimes, so be prepared. For those looking for another activities, there are lovely walks, good views and interesting birds up the hill. Finally, I’d like to mention what we offer excellent opportunities to try delicious and unusually food

　　Passage 6

　　Here is a introduction to Beech School of English. Comparing with the other schools, I will think it is the best one that you can go to. First, it is very convenient of you to get there by train. Second, the school is small and the classes are very small, either. There are 24 teaching hours a week. Stay with an English family will provide you with a chance to practise your speaking English and know more about the English family life. After class, you can enjoy sports and other activity with your classmates. The price is reasonably. I will get in touch with them you are interested in it.

　　Passage 7

　　Last summer I went on holiday to Canada. I thought it must be an amazed place but everything seemed to go wrong with myself. Fristly, the weather was awful. It rained every day but it was terribly cold. The hotel which I stayed was noisy any dirty and also very expensive. During I was out walking one day my wallet and some other thing were stolen. When I go to the police they said they couldn’t do anything about it.

　　Fortunate, I had a credit card in my room so I could pay the rest of my holiday. This year I’m staying at the home!

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（七）答案

　　Passage 11. wanted后加 to    2. come改为 came     3. have改为 having    4. immediate 改为immediately   5. on改为 at  6 Neither改为 None  7 was改为 were  8. 去掉were 或looked    9.but改为 and    10. 将learnt后的a改为 an

　　Passage 2

　　1.student改为students

　　2.studied改为studying

　　3.of改为for

　　4.that 改为which

　　5.are改为is

　　6.you改为I

　　7.effectively改为ettective

　　8.have后加a

　　9.去掉well

　　10.whether改为that

　　Passage 3

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　　Passage 4

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　　Passage 5

　　1.like 和 tell中间加to;

　　2. 去掉it

　　3.wants改为want

　　4.must前加a

　　5.care改为caerful

　　6.booking改为booked

　　7.and改为but

　　8.another改为other

　　9.what改为that

　　10.unusually改为unusual

　　Passage 6

　　第一句：a改为an

　　第二句：comparing 改为compared;

　　去掉will

　　第三句：of 改为for

　　第四句：either改为too

　　第六句：Stay改为Staying;

　　speaking改为spoken

　　第七句：activity改为activities

　　第八句：reasonably 改为reasonable

　　第九句：you前加if

　　Passage 7

　　Last summer I went on holiday to Canada. I thought it must be an amazed place but

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