2016届高考英语二轮短文改错专项突破：短文改错集训（9）

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（九）

　　【专项突破】短文改错

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Passage 1Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.

　　Passage 2

　　Television plays important part in our life. It shows us information program, like the news and sports events. We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the sounds of events that happened far away. Television teach us about countries and cultures but we can enjoy entertainment. A television set can be used for another things as well. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or even play video games. Television was being developed over 80 years ago, influenced our influencing lives ever since.

　　Passage 3

　　Before I left my hometown to come to study in England,1 was partly terrified, and mostly I was excited.

　　I was travelling all on my own to a place that I don't know any person at all. I couldn't even say the language well, but l wasn't going to let that stop me.

　　Within a few month. after arriving in London, I fall in love with the city .I met some of the most amazing people from all over the world.1 wasn't quite preparing for the culture shock of a different place at the beginning of. But after one and half years ,I am accustomed to living there .I have realized our views and ideas have changed completely in this country.

　　Passage 4

　　Cheetahs(猎豹) are the fast land creatures in the world. Why would a cheetah need to be able to running so fastly? The only animal that comes close to the cheetah’s amazed speed is its best favorite food, the gazelle(瞪羚). In order to catch up a meal that’s as swift as the wind, the cheetah had to develop the ability. It must run as fast as, or faster as, the gazelle. Otherwise, it will face starvation. Cheetahs are a excellent example of the effects of natural selection. There is several species of large cats in the world, but none of them can match the speed of the cheetah.

　　Passage 5

　　Dear Andy,

　　I’m glad to hear from you. You ask about my health in your last email. So I’m going to tell

　　you about diet. I’m a very health person. That’s why we live near the sea and we often have fish. I don’t know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probable be fish and vegetables. And of course there will also be some rices. If you come to visit me in China on one day, you won’t eat many sweets. So I hope you don’t have sweet tooth.

　　I’m going to ask my father to take some photos for the football match and I’ll email them

　　to you. I think you’ll like our team’s clothes.

　　Passage 6

　　I took a trip to a big lake in Indonesia with my family two years before. It was really huge lake with beautiful scenery all around. People were amazed by the endless view in front of our eye. Later on, unlike other girls, I was volunteered to go waterskiing alone. I took on the life jacket, got off the motorboat immediately and started my engine as soon as possibly.

　　The lake seemed broad and endless. I was so exciting to appreciate the beauty of the mountains and waters that I speed my motorboat. Then, after some time, I found me in the middle of the endless lake. I really enjoyed the unforgettable experience!

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（九）答案

　　Passage 181 去掉had 82.of后面加the

　　83.and改成but 84.lucky改成luckily 85.late改成later 86.car改成cars 87.去掉for 88.tried 改成trying

　　89. am改成was

　　90.that改成which

　　Passage 2

　　Television plays∧important part in our life. It shows us information program, like

　　an

　　programs

　　the news and sports events. We can watch films, listen to interviews and hearing the

　　hear

　　sounds of events that happened far away. Television teach us about countries and

　　happen

　　teaches

　　cultures but we can enjoy entertainment. A television set can be used for another

　　and

　　other

　　things as well. You can record shows and films for late viewing, watch DVDs, or even

　　later

　　play video games. Television was being developed over 80 years ago, influenced our

　　influencing

　　lives ever since.

　　Passage 3

　　1.and改为but

　　2.that改为where

　　3.say改为speak

　　4.month改为months

　　5.fall改为fell

　　6.preparing改为prepared

　　7.去掉beginning 后of

　　8.half前加a

　　9.there改为here

　　10.our改为my

　　Passage 4

　　1. fast——fastest

　　in the world提示我们要用最高级。2.running——run

　　be able to 后用动词原形

　　3.fastly——fast fast 既可以做形容词，也可以做副词，英语中无fastly。4.amazed——amazing –ed修饰人，-ing修饰物5.去掉best favorite=like…best，这里重复，去掉best。6. catch up后加上with

　　catch up with 追上；赶上7.had ——has 短文整体时态用一般现在时。8. as——than 句中出现faster比较级，故用than。

　　9. a——an

　　excellent example元音发音前用an。10. is——are several species是复数，故用there are。

　　Passage 51.ask改成asked

　　2.diet前加my

　　3.health 改为healthy

　　4.why 改为because

　　5.and 改为but

　　6.probable改为probably

　　7.rices 改为rice

　　8.去掉on

　　9.have 后加a

　　10.for 改为of

　　Passage 6

　　1. before→ago

　　2.really ∧a huge lake

　　3.eye→eyes

　　4.was volunteered 删掉 was

　　took →put

　　6.off→ on

　　7.possibly→possible

　　8.exciting→excited

　　9.speed→sped

　　10.me→myself