2016届高考英语二轮短文改错专项突破：短文改错集训（12）

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十二）

　　【专项突破】短文改错

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Passage 1

　　From the picture, we can see that there are many students are wearing glasses, that is, they are short-sighted.

　　As we all know, which is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your

　　eyesight? First, don’t keep your eyes work for a long time. You’d better have rest after you have studied an hour

　　or so. Second, pay much attention to the following. Don’t read under the sun or in a poorly light; don’t read in

　　bed or in a moved bus. Third, do eye exercise every day. It will also help you keep good eyesight. But last you

　　should have enough sleep. Only you obey the rules above can you prevent your eyesight from becoming

　　short-sighted.

　　Passage 2

　　Dear Mom,

　　The Mother’s Day is coming. I’m sorry that I am abroad  and can’t send your flowers, so I’m writing to you. Mom, I know I have never expressed my thank to you  before. But on today, at this special time, I just want to tell you loudly: I love you, Mom! Thank you so much by not only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good person. Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom, though I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your part in my heart. Whenever I am, I will always love you.    

　　Hope you good health and much happiness every day!                                

　　Your little girl,

　　Jennifer

　　Passage 3

　　Life on the land probably was started about 430 million years ago, though it has existed in the water for perhaps so much as 3,000 million years. When we think of the first thing on the land, we probably think of strange animals come out of the oceans. In fact no animals can have been living if plants had been on land first. Plant had to be on land after animals arrived. They supplied the first land animals with the surroundings and food necessity, since the plants, them are the only form of life who are able to get and store energy.

　　Passage 4

　　When I walked into the classroom, the teacher was handing in the tests. I was feeling very nervous. I had not studied at all the weekend as I had thought it would be easy test.

　　I went through the test for many times but I could only answer three out from the twenty questions. I did not want to fail the exam. Then , I put my book under my desk, opening it and started looking for the answer. The teacher wasn’t looking at me ,but I copied something. Suddenly, I felt a hand in my shoulder! The teacher caught me cheating. I don’t know what to say. Luckily, the teacher did not punish for cheating but instead gave me a second chance.

　　Passage 5

　　I went to England last summer as a exchange student, and stayed there for three months. I used to thinking we had pretty various after-school activities. However, I was surprised to find they had even ∧diverse projects. I made friend with the daughter of my home-stay family, which was a college student. He was a member of different kinds of clubs, so I took the chance to join in some clubs, too. Can you believe I make a robot in the Lego Club?

　　I felt very proudly because I got the first prize with my Lego robot.

　　Time spending in England is so memorable that I will treasure it forever.

　　Passage 6

　　As I was leaving the grocery store this afternoon, I saw a poor family — a mother and her four kid sitting in the cold, it brought back memories from when I was a child. The little girl, about 13, told me he liked my Under Armour sweater. I said, “thank you.” When I am walking to my car, I started to feel sadly. Put the groceries in my car, I suddenly thought the little girl might need a sweater at the school. So I went back to find the little girl, take my sweater off but gave it to her. I knew she would get much use out of it than me.

　　2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十二）答案

　　Passage 1 1.students后加who/that或去掉are

　　2.which改为it

　　3.work改为working

　　4.have后加a

　　5.under改为in

　　6.Poorly改为poor

　　7.moved改为moving

　　8.eye-exercise改为eye-exercises

　　9.But改为And

　　10.Only后加if/when

　　Passage 2

　　1.去掉the

　　2.your改为you

　　3.thank改为thanks

　　4.去掉on

　　5.by改为for

　　6.teach改为teaching

　　7.had改为have

　　8.may后加not

　　9.Whenever改为Wherever

　　10.Hopw改为Wish

　　Passage 3

　　Life on the land probably was started about 430 million years ago, though it has existed

　　in the water for perhaps so much as 3,000 million years. When we think of ∧

　　as

　　the

　　first thing on land, we probably think of strange animals come out of the oceans. In

　　coming

　　fact no animals can have been living if plants had ∧been on land first. Plant had to

　　could

　　not 或had改成hadn’t

　　Plants

　　be on land after animals arrived. They supplied the first land animals with the

　　before

　　surroundings and food necessity, since the plants, them are the only form of life who

　　they

　　forms

　　that

　　are able to get and store energy.

　　Passage 4

　　71. in—out

　　72. an easy

　　73. for（去掉 for）many times

　　74. from-of

　　75. Opening-opened

　　76. In-on my shoulder

　　77. answer-answers

　　78. but-so

　　79. don’t-didn’t

　　80. punish me

　　Passage 5

　　I went to England last summer as a exchange student, and stayed there for three months. I

　　an

　　used to thinking we had pretty various after-school activities. However, I was surprised to find

　　think

　　they had even ∧diverse projects. I made friend with the daughter of my home-stay family, which

　　more

　　friends

　　who

　　was a college student. He was a member of different kinds of clubs, so I took the chance to

　　She

　　join in some clubs, too. Can you believe I make a robot in the Lego Club?

　　I felt very proudly

　　made

　　proud

　　because I got the first prize with my Lego robot.

　　Time spending in England is so memorable that I will treasure it forever.

　　spent

　　Passage 6

　　第一句 kid-- kids

　　第一句 it--which，或者it前面加and

　　第二句 he-- she

　　第四句am-- was

　　第四句 sadly--sad

　　第五句Put-- Putting

　　第五句school前面的the去掉

　　第六句take--took

　　第六句but--and

　　最后一句much--more或者much后面加more