（三年模拟一年创新）2016届高考英语专题复习：专题17 短文改错（全国通用）

　　专题十七 短文改错

　　A组　2015～2017模拟基础题

　　Passage 1　(2015·曲阜4月)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautifully.Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting rubbishes into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights and close the doors.We should not leave the tap water run or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe we'll turn our school in a better place to study and live in.

　　How I wish we can enjoy a better school life!

　　Thank you for listening!

　　答案　

　　we can do for our school，and I think small actions can make

　　big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more.Every one of may plant a tree in the school or

　　organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting

　　into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights

　　close the doors.We should not leave the tap water

　　or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe we'll turn our school

　　a better place to study and live in.

　　How I wish we

　　enjoy a better school life!

　　Thank you for listening!

　　Passage 2　(2015·潍坊3月)

　　假定英语课上老师10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Welcome to my school！Upon your arrivalyou can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.

　　The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isn't that a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.

　　Li Hua

　　答案　

　　Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival party for you

　　by my classmates.You may attend

　　English classes to feel a

　　learning style.After that，you can go to your host family you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever

　　you.

　　The host family will also show you

　　some famous scenic spots.You can see people selling kites everywhere because our city home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose ∧from.So isn't

　　a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　Passage 3　(2015·淄博模拟)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　erything about it.

　　In the past，some people kill antelopes for their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive.As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day.Now things are begun to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die in the future.They had taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws to protecting antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，it's strong prohibited to buy or sell anything made of antelopes fur.

　　Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China.What's more，their living conditions have greatly improved.

　　答案　

　　ou are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，so I'd like to tell you

　　about it.

　　In the past，some people antelopes for their free fur which can be made into many beautiful things that are very expensive.As

　　result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day.Now things

　　/ to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will not die

　　in the future.They

　　taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws / antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，it's prohibited to buy or sell anything made of

　　fur.

　　Nowadays，to our joy，there are

　　more and more antelopes in China.What's more，their living conditions have greatly improved.

　　Passage 4　(2015·大连一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多11处起)不计分。

　　re cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted.Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too careless when crossing the street.

　　答案　

　　visit to my uncle there.It's a long and journey.But the moment I arrived，I in love with the city.It's beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind

　　blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as as it is permitted.，I think the there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too when crossing the street.

　　Passage 5　(2015·山东省实验中学模拟)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处

　　As we all know，everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life go rapidly，many people suffer from different kind of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save people's lives.Although to be a good doctor was very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true，I have told me over and over again that I'll concentrate more to studies.After all，only by working hardly can one succeed.

　　答案　

　　a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life rapidly，many people suffer from different of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save people's lives.Although to be a good doctor very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone.To make my dream come true，I have told over and over again that I'll concentrate more studies.After all，only by working can one succeed.

　　Passage 6　(2015·枣庄一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Marie Curie set us the good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.Then to get the new element become her dream and goal of her life.After four years' hard work，Marie and her husband last saw the dim blue light of the new element—radium.

　　Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big and small they are.The path to your dreams may not be smoothly and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end.

　　答案　

　　se dreams can come true.People give up dreams for this or that reason.Those

　　dreams have come true have at least one thing in common， is，they always hold fast to their dreams.

　　Marie Curie set us good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and it to the world.Then to get the new element her dream and goal of her life.After four years' hard work，Marie and her husband / saw the dim blue light of the new element—radium.

　　Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big small they are.The path to your dreams may not be and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end.

　　Passage 7　(2015·泰安期末)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practising with your fellow students.Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!

　　Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.

　　答案　

　　on how to learn Chinese well.

　　First，it important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and with your fellow students.Then，it also to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!

　　Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more.You can also make more Chinese friends， will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as as possible.

　　Passage 8　(2017·昆明一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　energetic than the others in class and can't always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm for their health.

　　Obvious，it's important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my advices can help you.

　　Thanks for listen.

　　答案　

　　pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found that some of my classmates study into the night.What's more，they not spare any time to exercise during the day. they are less energetic than the others in class and can't always stay on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm their health.

　　，it's important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must learn to make wise use of our time，and only in this way can we keep fit and study well.I hope my can help you.

　　Thanks for.

　　Passage 9　(2017·西铁一中诊断)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线(

　　)并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　usy prepare for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling real stressed due to the exam，but I don't take them so seriously.I always learn in a relaxing mood and I'm making a great progress.Now that I had tried my best，it doesn't matter much to me what the result is.

　　In my opinion，we should keep a good balance among our study，rest or exercise.I believe we can be succeeded if we prepare for the exam in a proper way.

　　I'd appreciate it if you could give me some good advices.

　　答案　

　　very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell you truth，I have been busy for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling stressed due to the exam，but I don't take so seriously.I always learn in a mood and I'm making a great progress.Now that I tried my best，it doesn't matter much to me what the result is.

　　In my opinion，we should keep a good balance among our study，rest exercise.I believe we can be

　　if we prepare for the exam in a proper way.

　　I'd appreciate it if you could give me some good.

　　Passage 10　(2017·沈阳一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　our plants were very small several years before, but now they are large and very beautifully. On top of our roof there is a larger glass－enclosed green－house. All our friends love to come to our house

　　see the beautiful world my mother had made for us. Every morning and evening we see my mother taken care of her plants like little children. As her real children have grown up, and my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is the

　　very good way of spending her free time.

　　答案　

　　raising plants and flowers. We have plants and flowers indoors and outdoors all the round. Some of our plants were very small several years, but now they are large and very. On top of our roof there is a glass－enclosed greenhouse. All our friends love to come to our house made for us. Every morning and evening we see my mother care of her plants like little children. As her real children have grown up, and my mother devotes more time to her garden. This is

　　very good way of spending her free time.

　　B组　2015～2017模拟能力题

　　Passage 1　(2015·青岛一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　o put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use for your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and don't do enough exercise，it's certain that you can't understand the language perfectly.But if you real practise a lot，maybe you will understand them much better.In this way，you can apply that you have learned better.

　　答案　

　　that after you have plenty of practice in what you doing，you will be perfect in it.If you want improve your study and work， that the most important thing is how to put the knowledge you have learned into practice.For example，when learning a language，though you can make full use your talent，practice is necessary.If you only learn grammar rules by the heart and don't do enough，it's certain that you can't understand the language perfectly.But if you practise a lot，maybe you will understand much better.In this way，you can apply you have learned better.

　　Passage 2　(2015·贵阳模拟)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　oud of my every improvements.I still remember once I was seriously ill.They were so worrying and almost kept me company the whole night.Now I'm Grade 3. Lucky for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition but often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate it so much.

　　I should study hard.When I grow up，I will become an useful person and make my parents lived a happy life.

　　答案　

　　my parents.They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with endless love and support， so proud of my every.I still remember once I was seriously ill.They were so and almost kept me company the whole night.Now I'm Grade 3. for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition often communicate with me with encouraging words.Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate it so much.

　　I should study hard.When I grow up，I will become useful person and make my parents a happy life.

　　Passage 3　(2015·保定联考)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　h the housework instead going out a lot.In her eyes，I'm just a lazy boy whom only loves playing.The fact is that some of my friends and I are going to different school soon.So I want to spend as many time as I can with her now.I know I should try to understand the situation from her point of a view.But I hope she can understand how important these friends are to me.

　　答案　

　　fighting.We used to get so well.But these days，she has been arguing with me about me not home.She thinks I should spend more time her with the housework instead going out a lot.In her eyes，I'm just a lazy boy only loves playing.The fact is that some of my friends and I are going to different soon.So I want to spend as time as I can with now.I know I should try to understand the situation from her point of a view.But I hope she can understand how important these friends are to me.

　　Passage 4　(2015·兰州摸底)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　drive off.As a devoted Christian，he told his dad he real forgave the thief.What's more，he wanted the thief know he was forgiven.So the next day，he posted the message on a poster－board and put it in the front yard：“To the person who stole my bike；You hurt my feeling.But I am a Christian and I forgive him！”When he left for home the next morning

　　答案　

　　Joshua got a bike for Christmas， he rode it every day.One morning，he suddenly found the bike gone. to his front yard，he saw a man loading it into his car.He shouted，but the man off.As a devoted Christian，he told his dad he forgave the thief.What's more，he wanted the thief know he was forgiven.So the next day，he posted message on a poster－board and put it in the front yard：“To the person who stole my bike；You hurt my！”When he left e end of the driveway，the bike was back with new brakes.

　　Passage 5　(2015·洛阳质检)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　As we all know it，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，you cannot do everything even if you are a millionaire.In order keep healthy，it's necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.

　　First of all，eat a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You should eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich of vitamins.Secondly，getting enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise make you feel great all day long.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.

　　As long as you form health habits and keep them，you'll have a strong body and live the healthy life.

　　答案　

　　，which do great harm to their health.

　　As we all know it，health is more important than wealth.Without a healthy body，you cannot do even if you are a millionaire.In order keep healthy，it's necessary to get rid of unhealthy habits and form good ones.

　　First of all， a healthy breakfast is a great way to start the day.You should eat more fruit and vegetables，which are rich vitamins.Secondly， enough sleep.Early to bed and early to rise you feel great all day long.Lastly，take exercise every day to make your body strong.

　　As long as you form habits and keep them，you'll have a strong body and live healthy life.

　　Passage 6　(2017·宝鸡一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线(

　　)并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　ey have all sorts of course.I'm sure you will find one you like it.I know you are particular interested in Human Rights.So I will see that there is anything in their websites.I'll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport when you arrived.You met him a few years ago，but he has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look forward to seeing you again.

　　答案　

　　the information about Manchester University.It is about 200 miles far away from London，and it has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school or near the school.They have all sorts of.I'm sure you will find one you like it.I know you are interested in Human Rights.So I will see there is anything their websites.I'll send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport when you.You met him a few years ago，but he has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt I look forward to seeing you again.

　　Passage 7　(2017·黑龙江摸底)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Our friend Li Ming will leave to Shanghai to study.So we are going to have a get－together on 3：30 this Friday afternoon.He lived at No.225 Dongfeng Street.It is not very difficulty to find your way to your home.Take a No.2 buscond crossing.There is a cinema cross the street.Turning right at the corner，and you will find Dongfeng Street.Li Ming's home is 200 yards down the street on the right.There is a post office is opposite to Li Ming's home.

　　Yours，

　　Zhang Hua

　　答案　

　　Our friend Li Ming will leave Shanghai to study.So we are going to have a get－together 3：30 this Friday afternoon.He to find way to your home.Take a No.2 bus，the stop of is on the left of your university，and get off at second crossing.There is a cinema the street. right at the corner，and you will find Dongfeng Street.Li Ming's home is 200 yards down the street on the right.There is a post office is opposite to Li Ming's home.

　　Yours，

　　Zhang Hua

　　Passage 8　(2017·金华十校联考)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　ent from my mum and dad when I was 12.It cost about 1，200 yuan，that was half of my father's monthly salary.The bicycle was made in Shanghai and it's color is red，my favorite.Which is important is that my bicycle plays an important part on my school life.It also represent the deep love from my parents.But I ride it to school every day.I have made up my mind to work hardly so that I can repay them in the future.I will buy a car to drive them to wherever they want when I grow up because the car is faster and very convenient than the bike，especially when it rains.

　　答案　

　　birthday present from my mum and dad when I was 12.It cost about 1，200 yuan， was half of my father's monthly salary.The bicycle was made in Shanghai and

　　color is red，my favorite. is important is that my bicycle plays an important part my school life.It also the deep love from my parents. I ride it to school every day.I have made up my mind to work so that I can repay them in the future.I will buy a car to drive them to wherever they want when I grow up because the car is faster and convenient than the bike，especially when it rains.

　　Passage 9　(2017·陕西安康一模)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线(

　　)并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　is Sunday.The sky is full of sunshine，so does my life.At about 9：00 a.m.：00lled The Earthquake of Tangshan but some people were waiting outside the booking office.It took us about two hours to see it.Having been seen the film，everyone was deeply moving.Some of my friends even burst into tear.That's a really wonderful film.It is very worth seeing.

　　What a happy day！I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.

　　答案　

　　my life.At about 9：00 a.m.to the bookstore with my friends.There a lot of new books.I didn't know one to buy because these books were all useful to me.At 10：00cinema.The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan some people were waiting outside the booking office.It took us about two hours to see it.Having been seen the film，everyone was deeply.Some of my friends even burst into.That's a really wonderful film.It is worth seeing.

　　What a happy day！I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.

　　Passage 10　(2017·成都名校质检)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　I'm one of your customer.The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop.

　　Before I left，I do check it carefully and everything was all right.When I got home，therefore，I found a fault with it.The problem is what the “Play” doesn't work at all.Probable it's not your fault and so is mine.Anyhow，I can't solve the problem in person.

　　You see，a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved.Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay，when you accept my letter.

　　Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　答案　

　　I'm one of your.The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your shop.

　　Before I left，I check it carefully and everything was all right.When I got home，，I found a fault with it.The problem is the “Play” doesn't work at all. it's not your fault and is mine.Anyhow，I can't solve the problem in person.

　　You see，a walkman is of great for me to learn English and I cannot wait for too long before this problem is solved.Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay，when you my letter.

　　Hoping to hear you in the earliest possible time!

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua.

　　C组　一年创新导向

　　Passage 1

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　It's great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job，but I learn English in some difference ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and take efforts to understand the texts under the help of our English teacher.After the class，I do a lot of exercises prepare for the college entrance examination.You also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other source.I have a lot of fun especial when learning English with cartoon movies.

　　Thanks for listening!

　　答案　

　　It's

　　great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job， I learn English in some ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and efforts to understand the texts the help of our English teacher.After the class，I do a lot of exercises for the college entrance examination. also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other.I have a lot of fun when learning English with cartoon movies.

　　Thanks for listening!

　　Passage 2

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允许修改10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　ch many books to read.Nowadays，many a parent expect too much of their children.They hope their sons or daughters study hard in order to get great colleges.It is the reason what parents are strict with their children.They don't know what they do with has become a heavy burden on their children.On my opinion，that isn't right.Instead，I think parents should create a proper learned environment for the children and allow me to play from time to time.Only in this way can the child do their best and succeed at last.

　　答案　

　　that everyone is studying hard for the College Entrance Examination.There are many books to read.Nowadays，many a parent too much of their children.They hope their sons or daughters study hard in order to get great colleges.It is the reason parents are strict with their children.They don't know what they do with has become a heavy burden on their children. my opinion，that isn't right.Instead，I think parents should create a proper environment for the children and allow to play from time to time.Only in this way can the do their best and succeed at last.

　　Passage 3

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　只允10处多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　ntil both of them were drunk.My father didn't realize the serious of driving a car after drinking.He decided to send his friends to their home.And then he drove home.While driven home，my father felt uneasy.Before he realized that would happen，my father run into a house near the road.The police came and examined the amount of alcohol my father had drunk.It was over the normally standard.So the police fined my father.After that，my father regretted what he had done but made up his mind never to drink again before driving.

　　答案　

　　invited to a restaurant by his good friends.At the restaurant they didn't stop drinking until of them were drunk.My father didn't realize the of driving a car after drinking.He decided to send his friends to their.And then he drove home.While home，my father felt uneasy. he realized would happen，my father into a house near the road.The police came and examined the amount of alcohol my father had drunk.It was over the standard.So the police fined my father.After that，my father regretted what he had done made up his mind never to drink again before driving.