2016届高考英语考前必做黄金易错点：专题15 短文改错（易错练兵）（原卷版）

　　Passage 1

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线(—)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Tim，

　　I am Li Hua.This is my last year of high school，and I'll graduate this summer.I'm eighteen year old.

　　There is three people in my family and I'm the only one child，who is very common in Chinese families.My father work in a factory and my mother is a teacher.We lived a happy life together.

　　I'm cheerful boy.Besides my courses，I have much hobbies，like playing football，basketball and swimming.In the past，I collected in a lot of stamps，which are very preciously now because we seldom post a letter nowadays.I wonder if you can tell me something about myself，your family and daily school.

　　Best wishes，

　　Li Hua

　　Passage 2

　　Today，my foreign teacher Tim and I went to the People's Park together.We take a taxi and it wasn't long before we arrived at the park.At seeing the green trees and beautiful flower，Tim couldn't wait to take pictures.It was at that moment when we found his camera was missing.He was very worried but searched all over his backpack.Sadly，he just couldn't find it.Suddenly it struck to me that he might have left it in the taxi.So I immediately got touch with the taxi company.About half an hour later，the driver returned the camera.Both of us were gratefully to the driver，and Tim，in particular，insisted on have a photo taken with him.Tim and I enjoyed themselves during the rest of the day.

　　Passage 3

　　Travelled abroad，you should follow the customs of the country where you are visiting.When you invited，it is good manners to refuse or accept an invitation，either by writing or by telephoning.If you go to the party，it is polite to reach on time.It is good manners to shake hand with your host.You can take a present if you like，possibly a bottle of wine，a box of chocolates and some flowers.However，it was not bad manners to take nothing.It is not polite to stay too late before the other guests have gone.Also ，it is suggested to write or telephone a day or two late to thank your host.

　　Passage 4

　　Last summer I went to Xi'an with my parents.We had visited many places of interest as the temperature was over 38 ℃.Finally we climbed Mount Hua.It is very high and steep.We had to be careful in case we might fall off the cliff.It took us six hour to get to the summit.How beautiful scenery it was! You could see many mountains and rivers in distance.In the night we stayed in a cave hotel.I couldn't go to asleep because the wind was blowing heavily.I am afraid the mountain would break down.The next morning we got up early in order to see the sun rise from the east.The sun was very big and red.How exciting we were!

　　Passage 5

　　When I was a child，I spent more than ten years learn the violin.Therefore，I couldn't understand “real music”.After I graduated at high school，a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool.I will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store.There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar，which I really enjoyed.He became my the first guitar teacher.It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model.Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

　　Passage 6

　　Dear schoolmates，

　　In order to get high school students to attaching importance to the environment and improve our sense to protect the environment，and China Daily is planning to hold an interestingly knowledge contest.A contest starts on October 14 th and end on 31st.Remember，you can take the contest in China Daily newspaper，that is very popular among high school student.The answer sheet must cut from the newspaper and sent to China Daily after the deadline.

　　Please pay more attention to the related information of the contest and take an active part in them on time.

　　Students' Union

　　Passage 7

　　Dear David，

　　I have been expected to travel to the UK.Thus，I can experience the English Culture personal.I'm writing to ask for some advices.My family plan to travel there during a coming winter vacation.We were to spend a week in London，where is a large city，and this is the first time for us to travel abroad.I want to know what places of interest there are worthwhile seeing.Can you offer to me some suggestions and recommend some attractions？I would appreciate if you could reply to me soon.I'm also looking forward to see you in London.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　Passage 8

　　I've learned from the newspaper that your company is looking for receptionist.I'm very interesting in the job and I'd like to apply to the position.

　　First of all，allow me to introduce myself.I had just graduated from high school and taken the University Entrance Examination.I want to find out a part－time job in the summer.I'm 18 year old and have a good command of English，especial in terms of speaking and listening.In fact，I once won the first prize in the English speech competition hold in our school.Besides，I'm quite easy－going but therefore very popular among my classmates.

　　I sincerely hope you can give us a chance.I'm looking forward to your early reply.

　　Passage 9

　　Dear Brown，

　　Last summer I take a part－time job in the International Camp for children.I have told one more worker will be needed in this year and I think you are fit for it.How about join us？The camp is at the foot of a small hill closed to a river.It is such beautiful a place! We can hear birds singing happy all around.Everybody sleeps in tents，that is very exciting.We usually work only five hours a day，so we will have plenty of spare time to visit the area and have fun.I am sure it will be a unforgettable experience.If you have interests in it，write to me soon.

　　Yours，

　　Mary

　　Passage 10

　　Not only our parents give us endless love，but they also give us enough support，always sharing their happiness and sorrow.I'm very grateful to my parents.They give me so much love and spare no efforts to support me.I still remembered once I was seriously ill，they were so worrying and almost accompanied me the whole night.Besides，they are considerate.Now I'm the Senior 3 student.Lucky for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition and often talk to me by encouraging words.Furthermore，I am given enough personal space，what I appreciate so much.

　　Now I have made up my mind to study hard.When I grow up，I will try my best to make my parents to live a happy life.

　　Passage 11

　　More and more foreigners like to come to China.Last Friday our school was invited a foreign teacher in our city give a class to the students of Senior Grade Two.We found his class interested.I learned a lot from him.The teacher had a free talk to us with easy English.He spoke slow so that we could understand him well.Sometimes he repeated what we don't understand.My classmates were all active in the class.To his joy，I understood everything the teacher said.And I was able to ask question in English.This class encouraged me very much.I'm sure that until we keep on practicing，it will be easy for us to learn speaking English well.

　　Passage1 2

　　Manager，

　　I am an exchange student from China.Yesterday，I went to your cinema to see a film.The film was very well，but I did not enjoy it because there were some problem in the cinema.

　　First，the film was delayed as there were so much advertisements

　　at

　　the

　　beginning.It

　　was

　　rather annoyed.Second，the sound of the film was too loud that I could hardly bear.The EXIT signs could not be seen clearly，which presented potential safety problems.If something terribly should happen，it will be difficult for people to get out quickly.

　　As a visitor to your city，I'm disappointed with my experience in your cinema.I am writing a letter in the hope that you can consider on these problems and make some improvements.

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　Passage 3

　　I feel it is pity that you didn't want to take part in the speech contest.In my view，the speech contest can benefit from you in different ways.Firstly，it makes you look for more informations about

　　your favorite

　　scientists

　　on

　　the Internet or in the library，and learning more about them.Secondly，it is a challenge to prepare for a speech contest.You not only have to write a good article，and also have to perform them properly.What's more，after the contest，you can find yourself with some newly good friends，or even a prize.I suggest you consider participating in the contest，that will really do good to you.If you change your mind，please let me know as sooner as possible.

　　Passage 4

　　We are what we eat.So it is less important to form good eating habits.However，bad eating habits existed among students.Some of us often go

　　to

　　school

　　without

　　breakfast，and

　　some

　　are particularly about food，for example.To keep healthy，we should have healthy diet，which generally include proper amounts of fish，meat，fruit as well as the main food.Besides，we'd better have meal regularly.We should

　　try

　　develop

　　good

　　eating

　　habits

　　to

　　build ourselves，preparing ourselves for which our future may require.Only in this way can we have enough of energy to study or live better.

　　Passage 15

　　Last weekend my sister went to the supermarket to buy some groceries.Three hours ago，with full bags of goods in both hands，she headed for nearby bus stop，tired and hungry.She was waiting for the bus while it began to rain.After what seemed ages，came a bus，crowded of passengers.When it was her turn to getting on the bus，someone said，“Sorry，no more rooms.”

　　Quite disappointed，my sister had to take a taxi.Half way home，however，the taxi broke out.Hardly had he got out of the taxi when a bus passed by.It was empty，but she had been missed it! What an unluckily day!

　　Passage 6

　　Mr.Wilson likes fresh air more than anybody else's.He likes nearly all the other games in the fresh air.He always sleeps with his windows fully open.He has an open car with no roof，but he drives it madly through the fresh air.Whenever he enters a room where the windows were shut，he will immediately open it.He does this even when snow is fallen outside.If someone shut the windows again，he will walk out the room angrily at once.Once on the freezing night，after he failed to open the windows at a hotel，he became so angry that he broke the glasses with his shoe.