2016届高考英语写作分类掌握复习课件：30 说明重要性（新人教版）

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　　责任心的重要性

　　[提出观点] Responsibility is essential to us. [论证] (正面)It

　　not only represents one’s noble quality, but also enables one to be steady-going. Being responsible, you will gain many precious things, such as true love.

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　　(反面) Without responsibility, however, you will be an annoyance and can’t do anything successfully.

　　What’s worse， people will lose belief in you if you are irresponsible. [总结]In short, only when we are responsible will we be respected and loved by others.

　　说明某事物的重要性是读写任务常考的写作要点, 写作时, 首先指出该事物非常重要, 然后紧接着说明其之所以重要的理由, 也可通过举实例来说明其重要性。可以只从正面进行论证, 也可正反两方面来论证; 最后, 还可以用一两句话作总结。

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　　一、句式模板 (1) I do think handwriting is still important today. 我的确认为书法在今天依然是重要的。

　　(2) Hobbies and interests play an important role in one’s growing.兴趣和爱好在人们的成长过程中起着重要作用。 (3) I think it is very important for parents to cultivate their children’s independence. Firstly,... Secondly,... Finally,... 对家长来说，培养孩子的独立性非常重要。首先……其次……最后…… (4) Protecting water is of great importance to the life in the future. First and foremost,... Secondly,... Only by protecting our valuable water resource, can we... 保护水对未来生活非常重要。首先……其次……只有保护珍贵的水资源, 我们才能…… (5) Modesty is of great significance in our life. 谦逊在我们生活中有着重要的意义。 1.说明目标的重要性。 二、超级仿写

　　[提出观点] In my view, goals are crucial in guiding our lives. [论证] To begin with, as goals often go with hopes, they have the magic to enable us to be positive towards ups and downs.

　　Moreover, bearing goals in mind, we are less likely to be blind to the ideals of our life and won’t deviate from normal track.

　　Finally, as goals are what we are longing for, they thus can motivate us to strive for greater achievement.

　　[总结] Since goals are so significant to our lives, it is worthwhile for us students to set up goals and accomplish them with every effort.

　　Despite the fact that computer is very convenient to us, [提出观点]I do think handwriting is still important today. [正面论证] Good handwriting will surely leave others a good impression; it also can represent your personality and attitude. [反面论证] People with terrible handwriting will be easily considered as careless and irresponsible guys.

　　2.说明书法的重要性。

　　As we all know, a better result of study can be brought by a better study environment. As a result, it is necessary for us to build the green campus. The green campus can not only provide a good environment for our study, but also be a part in building harmonious society.

　　3.读写任务 阅读下面短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　The green campus is not only environmental green, but also spiritual green, which means we should help each other or care for each other. Therefore, we should beautify the campus.

　　As students, we enjoy the campus time while we have responsibility to build our green campus.

　　In spiritual term, we should respect teachers, classmates and other people who work for the school. In environmental term, we should have good habits to keep campus in a clean surrounding.

　　[写作内容] 1.以约30个词概括上文中的主要内容； 2.然后以约120个词就学生会举办“建设绿色校园征文活动”的主题谈谈你的理解, 要点包括：

　　(1)建设绿色校园的重要性； (2)你认为建设绿色校园应该采取哪些措施？ [写作要求] 1. 在作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事, 也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子; 2. 标题自定。 [评分标准] 概括准确, 语言规范, 内容合适, 篇章连贯。 On Creating a Green Campus

　　The passage tells us the importance and significance of creating a green campus. Since “green” means something not only environmental, but also spiritual, we make every effort to take the responsibility.

　　[提出观点] It is of great importance to build a green campus.

　　[论证] Obviously, a growing number of people are beginning to realize that it is our duty to do the job, since the concept of building a green world has become the focus of society. Not only is green campus environmentally-friendly, but also it has a great influence on students’ health. [总结］Therefore, creating a green campus is of great benefit to us.

　　In order to build a green campus, we should take the following steps. On the one hand, the school should make rules and regulations to prevent students doing something harm to our campus. On the other hand, students should take some classes to raise their awareness. I have no doubt that our campus will be more beautiful if we work together.