2016届高考英语写作分类掌握复习课件：12 叙事经过类（新人教版）

　　* * 典例： 参观清华大学(日记或游记)

　　[总述]Today we visited Qinghua University.

　　[过程] Early in the morning we arrived at the gate of Tsinghua University, where we were warmly welcomed by an old professor, who

　　then showed us around the campus.

　　晨读狂背语篇模板

　　In the library, we saw some university students reading attentively in the reading rooms.

　　After that, we came to the lab building.

　　At the end of the visit, the old professor gave us a lecture on science in the afternoon, which interested us very much.

　　Time passed so quickly that

　　before we knew it, it was time that we had to say goodbye to the professor.

　　[结果] Since then, I have worked harder at my lessons than usual and made up my mind to be a student of Qinghua University. 一、篇章结构 总述 → 过程 → 感受

　　二、写作技巧 叙述活动或事件的过程, 包括日记和游记。写作时应注意以下几点：

　　灵活运用超级模仿 1.一般应包括记叙文的六要素。如游记, 一般包括旅游的时间(when)、地点(where)、参加的人员(who)、交通工具(how)、所见所闻(what), 以及感受和体会(feeling)。

　　2.一般用过去时, 但也要灵活使用其它时态。如描写景色或议论时, 可能用一般现在时; 表示个人感想, 打算或决心, 可能用一般将来时。 3.以时间或地点为线索, 描述事件或活动过程。表示时间的词有:

　　one day, the next day, last Friday, (early) in the morning, (late) in the afternoon, at noon, upon arrival, at first, then, (shortly) after that, after a short while, after a short rest, afterwards, ten minutes later, soon, soon after, after, before, when, while, during, immediately, in the end, finally等。 三、句式模板 1. Today I paid a visit to ...with my classmates. 今天我和同学一起参观了……

　　2.Time passed quickly before we knew it， we had to ... 时间不知不觉过去了, 我们不得不……

　　3.How glad/happy/excited I feel today! 今天我感到多么高兴啊！ 四、超级仿写 1. (2009北京)假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班4月12日去郊区植树。活动过程如下图所示:

　　［写作内容］ 请根据以上四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇日记，记叙植树活动的全过程。 参考词汇: 郊区 suburbs April 12

　　Tuesday

　　Fine

　　［总述］Today is memorable because our class had a meaningful experience.

　　［过程］In the morning, we bicycled to the suburbs to plant trees, talking and laughing all the way. Upon arrival, we began to work immediately. Some were digging holes, some were carrying and planting young trees, and others were watering them.

　　After getting the work done, we put up a board reminding people to protect the trees. Before leaving, we took some photos to record our green action.

　　［感受］Seeing the lines of trees, we all had a sense of achievement. We feel it’s our duty to protect and beautify our environment. 2.(2008北京) 假设上周你们班举行了春游活动，活动过程如下图所示:

　　［写作内容］请根据以上四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇短文，叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程。 提示词: 游乐园amusement park

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　　Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.

　　［过程］The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view.

　　However, when

　　we reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.

　　［感受］We were tired but happy.