2016届高考英语写作分类掌握复习课件：20 提出建议类（新人教版）

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　　I’m sorry you are having trouble in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice. [引出建议] Here are some tips to help you.

　　晨读狂背语篇模板

　　[列举建议] First, why not go and talk to people standing on their own? I agree this is difficult but that person may be lonely too. If you do this, I am sure you will soon have a new friend. Second，you can begin the conversation by asking about their likes and dislikes, (理由) which will make you find people with the same interests. Finally， you should try to join in a discussion, (理由) letting people know how friendly you are.

　　I hope you find these ideas useful. 一、篇章结构 引出建议 → 列举建议与理由(→ 希望)

　　二、句式模板 1.引出建议可以用：

　　⑴ Here are my suggestions on how to ...

　　灵活运用超级模仿 ⑵ Suggestions on ... can be listed as follows.

　　⑶ The ways for you to ... can be suggested as follows. 2.列举建议可以用：

　　⑴ first of all/first/to begin with；second (ly)/then/besides/in addition/what’s more；finally/lastly/last but not least

　　⑵ for one thing ...and for another (thing) 3.在列举的建议后常常会用起补充说明作用的分词短语、定语从句等说明提出此建议的理由或原因。 三、语篇模板

　　It is known to us all that nothing is more important than to keep healthy. [引出] The ways for us to keep fit can be suggested as follows. [列举] Firstly, we should have a healthy diet, which means a variety of food including meat, fresh fruits and vegetables.

　　Secondly, drink more water instead of a lot of drinks. Lastly, do some exercise every day, such as running, swimming, playing basketball and so on, for they help to relax ourselves as well as benefit our health a lot. 四、超级仿写 基础写作

　　假定你是李华。在一个英文网络论坛上, 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助：

　　[写作内容] 请根据以上帖子内容, 给Grow-up回贴, 并包括以下要点：

　　1.你对这一问题的看法(已给出)；

　　2.告诉Grown-up要理解而不要伤害母亲；

　　3.给Grown-up提出解决问题的具体建议: 多与母亲交流;

　　行动上证明自己已成年。 Hi, Grown-up， ... Hi, Grown-up，

　　As a student of your age, I understand your situation and the problem you are facing is common among us teenagers.

　　However, you should understand your mother and it is wise not to do anything that may hurt your mother’s feelings.[引出建议] Suggestions on how to deal with the problem can be listed as follows.

　　[列举建议] First， it’s advisable to talk more with your mom， (理由) which

　　will help you understand each other better. Second， you should learn to do your own things well by yourself， (理由) proving

　　to your mom that you are already a “grown-up”.

　　It’s even better if you could share more of the housework，

　　(列举) such as

　　cleaning， washing and cooking.

　　读写任务 阅读下面的短文, 然后按照要求写一篇150个词左右的英语短文。

　　Shi Fang spends more than 4, 000 yuan a month shopping, but she rarely goes to the shopping mall. “Why need a shopping mall if you have Taobao? I am a Taobaoer, ” says Shi, 28, a freelance writer (自由作家) in Beijing. Taobao, China’s largest online shopping site has become an essential part

　　of Shi Fang’s life.

　　She spends half of her monthly salary to Taobao, logging onto the website every day, even when she doesn’t need anything, simply to “stay updated to the latest items”.

　　A growing number of Chinese Internet users like Shi have discovered the joys of online shopping.

　　The China Internet Network Information Center (CNNIC) announced in December that more than 87million Chinese made purchases on the Internet in the first half year, which means one out of four Chinese netizens (网民) have online shopping experience.

　　It is estimated that the annual consumption from online shopping will reach more than 250 billion yuan this year, and 80 percent of this is carried out through Taobao. com, China’s fast-growing e-commerce hub (电子商务中心) established in 2003.

　　[写作内容] 1.以约30个词概括短文的内容要点； 2.然后以约120个词就“网购”为主题发表你的看法, 内容包括:

　　(1) 叙述你自己或身边朋友的一次网购经历。 (2) 分析现实购物与网购的各自的好处。 (3) 对于购物你有何建议?

　　The passage mainly tells us that more and more netizens in China like Shi Fang buy goods on the Internet, among which Taobao is the largest online shopping site.

　　Almost two months ago, I wanted to buy my mother a birthday present, but I didn’t have much time to go shopping. I surfed the Internet and found a pink handbag which I thought would fit my mother perfectly. I

　　paid and received it seven days later. To

　　my delight, my mother liked it very much.

　　There is no doubt that shopping online has some advantages. First of all, it’s quite convenient to shop online for we needn’t go from one shop to another, so we can save lots of time. In addition,, shopping online is also cheaper and more colorful to us and the Internet provides us with the goods coming in all shapes, sizes and colors, which can meet our demands.

　　However, traditional shopping also has its own benefits. For one thing, our personal information may be let out when shopping online. For another, when going shopping in person, you can experience the color, shape, and quality of goods and enjoy discussing your choices with friends.

　　In my opinion, shopping on the Internet and buying in stores are both important to us in our daily life. We should consider carefully and choose what we want to buy according our own situations.