2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：15（含解析）

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　　书面表达（25分）

　　结合所给提纲以“Success”为题写一篇150字左右的短文，要求中心明确，条理清晰，不要逐句翻译。开头已给出，但不计入字数。

　　人们对成功的不同看法 挣很多的钱；获得高的社会地位；

　　取得很好的学术业绩。

　　达到成功的重要途径 具有成功人士的品质；善于总结；乐于合作;……

　　我对成功的看法 ……

　　社会地位：social post 学术业绩：academic achievement

　　合作：cooperation (n)

　　Success

　　What is success? Different people hold views on it. ________________________

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　　2．假定你是北京的李华，三年前出国留学，学成回国后发现北京发生了巨大的变化。现在请你用英语给美国的笔友John发一个e-mail, 告诉他这里的变化。你介绍的具体内容包括：

　　1·风景优美，交通便利；

　　2·高楼林立，住房改善；

　　3·旅游业发展迅猛；

　　4·汽车，计算机进入千家万户；

　　5·大量的外国公司到中国投资。

　　6·欢迎他来中国参观

　　注意：1.词数：100左右（信函的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入词数）,

　　2.可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;

　　3. 参考词汇: 投资 make an investment

　　3．请结合材料，按要求用英文写作，不少于60。

　　It is reported that some teenagers don’t respect their parents, quarreling with them or even using violence.

　　要求：

　　（1）就此材料发表你的感想

　　（2）应紧扣材料，有明确的观点

　　(3) 请在答题卡上作答。

　　4．假如你叫李华是一位高学生。请用英语给校长写封信，反映同学在教室使用手机的情况建议。

　　要点提示：

　　在课堂上经常听见手机的铃声；

　　有的同学还在课堂上发短信息。

　　注意、要适当发挥，使信的内容充实；

　　、词数：

　　3、开头已给出

　　4、参考词汇：手机的铃声the ringing of mobile phones

　　短信short messages

　　Dear principal,

　　I’m Li Hua, a student in Senior Grade One. Recently some students bring their

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　　5．假定你是李华，在一个英文网络论坛上， 你看到一个名叫Grown-up的中学生发帖(post)寻求帮助，请根据帖子的内容、写作要点和要求回帖。

　　Grown-up

　　Post at 20-11-2011

　　21:18

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　　Hi, everyone,

　　I’m a Senior Grade Three student, and I am suffering from mental pressure these days, what should I do?

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　　写作要点：

　　告诉Grown-up心理压力不可避免； 2.

　　告诉Grown-up心里压力的危害；

　　建议Grown-up应正确面对心理压力；4.

　　介绍你面对心里压力时所采取的措施。

　　注意： 1. 词数100左右。2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Hi, Grown-up,

　　It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life.______________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________

　　Hope my ideas will work.

　　参考答案

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　　Success

　　What is success People hold different views on it. Some think that one is successful if he can make a great deal of money. Others argue that success means holding an important government post. Still others believe that whoever has got high academic title is successful.

　　However, successful people usually have some good qualities in common. You should first of all be both perseverant and hardworking. As you know, whatever you do, there are always two possible results: success and failure. When you fail, you should never lose heart. You should always keep in mind that failure is the mother of success. In addition, you should pay great attention to your work method. It is necessary for you to sum up your experience constantly and improve the efficiency of your work. Also, it is important for you to get along well with your co-workers, care for each other and help each other. Finally, ...

　　In my opinion, success means achieving brilliant results in one's work, that is, making outstanding contributions to the development of the country and bringing happiness to the people. That's the success in one's life.

　　【解析】

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　　Dear John,

　　Glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in Beijing in the past three years. First the natural scenery of Beijing is very beautiful. More highways have been built, which makes it very convenient for people to travel. There are also many modern and beautiful high buildings. As a result, people’s living conditions have been greatly improved. Besides, a great number of people enjoy themselves traveling and more people can afford and will go abroad to travel with the increase of income. By and by, cars and computers have made their way into millions of homes. With China’s economy developing quickly, more and more foreign companies have come to make an investment here. I’m looking forward to your visiting China soon.

　　Best wishes to you.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一封电子邮件。做题前一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义。这篇作文的要点是以提纲列出的，而且很详细，考生要做的是将要点全面的合理的解释清楚，应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。多使用高级词汇和重点句型。

　　【亮点说明】范文使用了高级的短语和各种多变的句式：made their way into 进入，By and by不久， looking forward to盼望， Glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in Beijing in the past three years. 这句话使用了宾语从句，More highways have been built, which makes it very convenient for people to travel.这句话使用了非限制性定语从句和it做形式宾语， With China’s economy developing quickly, more and more foreign companies have come to make an investment here. 这句话使用了with复合结构，还有范文还使用了First，As a result, Besides,这样的关联词使文章更加连贯。

　　考点：考查提纲类短文

　　3．Respecting parents is a traditional virtue in China. No matter how old we are, we should respect our parents.

　　Wherever we go or whatever we do, we should always remember that it is our parents who gave us lives and brought us up. Therefore, we should love and respect them. We can do a lot of small things to show our respect, such as doing some housework for them, expressing our thanks to them.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文结合材料，按要求用英文写作要求考生（1）就此材料发表你的感想（2）应紧扣材料，有明确的观点在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。

　　I’m Li Hua, a student in Senior Grade One. Recently some students bring their mobile phones to the classroom and we often hear the ringing of mobile phones, which has a bad effect on our study. What’s worse, some of them even waste precious time in class typing short messages on the mobile phone. In my opinion, the classroom is a place for students to study, so quietness is badly needed for us to learn our lessons.

　　To keep the classroom quiet, I suggest our school make the following rules about the use of mobile phones in the classroom. First, those with mobile phones should turn them off in class. Second, they should not talk on the phone or send short messages in the classroom. I think, if anyone breaks the rules, proper ways should be thought of to punish him or her.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇建议信，文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生只需要翻译即可，难度不大，在写作的时候要运用合适的连接词把要点串联起来，选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇，也要运用多种句型，让文章更有变化。注意改变文章的样式。难度在于选择合适的词汇和句型表达文章需要的意思，可以变换使用一些容易驾驭的句子或者词汇实现同样的目的。要使用合适的连接词来连接各要点，使文章成为一个整体。

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　　Hi, Grown-up,

　　It’s a fact that we face more and more mental pressure in our life. In my opinion, everyone will meet some mental pressure in their life. But if it lasts a long time, it may do harm to our body.

　　Whenever I meet pressure, I try to keep calm and think how to overcome it. Sometimes it is very effective. When I’m stressed out, I listen to music or do some sports. After that, I often find that my moods become much better. If I can’t overcome it, I will turn to my parents, teachers or good friends.

　　To sum up, we should face pressure bravely and overcome it actively.

　　Hope my ideas will work.

　　【解析】本文是关于高三学生学习压力的文章，这个话题是学生所分词熟悉的话题，具体很强的可写性，同时这也是一篇半开放性的作文，要点给的并不全，给了考生教大的发挥余地。在写作的过程中注意使用合适的连接词如：To sum up等；也要使用一些高级的句型如强调句型，状语从句等，让文章更有层次性。

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