2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：16（含解析）

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　　书面表达(满分25分)

　　最近，某中学英语报向学生征文，主题New Look of My Hometown。请你根据以下内容提示，用英语为该报写一篇短文，介绍家乡的情况并发表自己的看法。

　　概

　　况 1．气候夏热多雨，冬冷多雪，冬夏温差很大

　　2．近年经济发展迅速，城市面貌一新，高楼林立，道路宽敞，环境优美；

　　3．人民生活条件不断改善，不少人搬进新居，拥有私家车。

　　你的看法 家乡人民将更加努力工作……

　　注意：1．可适当增加细节，使短文连贯、通顺；

　　2．短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

　　3．词数100左右。

　　参考词汇：economy经济

　　New Look of My Hometown

　　My hometown lies in the east of

　　Liaoning ，with a river flowing through．_____________

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　　2．假如你是李华，你在英国的笔友上周来信说自己性格内向，不善与人沟通相处。并为此苦恼不已，请你以此为话题给他写一封回信安慰他。

　　注意：1.词数100左右。

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3.开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Jim,

　　I’m glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.

　　_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　Best wishes to you !

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　3．在最近学校组织的一次社会实践活动中，你班同学参加了进行了关于一项青少年课余活动情况的调查，调查结果如下。请用英语写一篇短文， 简要介绍调查情况，谈谈你的看法，并提出建议。

　　注意：1. 词数150个左右。

　　2. 文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

　　Recently my class took part in the social practice organized by our school, in which we

　　conducted a survey among kids aged 5-14 about their extra-curriculum activities. _____________________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　4．书面表达（满分25分）

　　(Sunshine Nursing Home)开展志愿者活动(送水果、打扫、聊天等)。假如你是校

　　英语报的记者李华,请按下列要点用英语写一则100-120个词的资讯报道.

　　注意:

　　1.时间、地点、人物活动；

　　2.老人们的反映；

　　3.简短评论；

　　4.报道的标题和记者姓名已给出.(不计词数)。

　　Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

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　　________________________________________________________________________________

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　　By Li Hua, School Newspaper

　　5．假如你是李华，是高一某班班长。为了丰富同学们的课外生活，班级准备成立一个自行车俱乐部(cycling club)。请你根据下面的提示，用英语写一则口头通知。通知如下：

　　每周训练一次，由体育老师辅导。

　　安排在每周三下午第三节的课外活动时间；

　　自行车自备；

　　活动免费；

　　到班长那里报名（sign up）。

　　注意：1. 可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　2. 词数100 左右。

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　One possible version：

　　New Look of My Hometown

　　My hometown lies in the east of

　　Liaoning ，with a river flowing through。It is a beautiful

　　city。The climate here is warm with plenty of rain in summer and cold with plenty of snow in winter 。There is a sharp difference in temperature between summer and winter。

　　In recent years，the economy of the city has been developing rapidly。The city is taking on a new look with high buildings，wide roads and better surroundings。People's living conditions are improving day by day。Many people have moved into new apartments and some even have cars of their own。

　　I'm sure people in my hometown will work still harder to make my hometown more beautiful and our life happier。

　　2．

　　Dear Jim,

　　I’m glad to have received the letter you sent me last week.

　　As to your question in your letter, I’d like to tell you it’s very common for us students of middle school. I suffered from the same problem

　　at one time. Therefore, you don’t have to worry about it too much. If you want to make a difference, you can do the following things ：

　　Most important of all, you should try to communicate more with your friends and teachers actively to throw light on what you think of. .Only in the way can your friends understand you more. And you can talk about what others care about and the things and persons they are interested in. Besides, helping others is of great importance for you, for others can be kind to you if you are friendly to them.

　　Best wishes to you !

　　Yours faithfully,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　3．One possible version:

　　Recently my class took part in the social practice organized by our school, in which we

　　conducted a survey among kids aged 5-14 about their extra-curriculum activities. The results are as follows.

　　As is illustrated in the chart, both boys and girls have a strong preference for watching TV or videos with the percentage ranking first at 100%. More boys than girls enjoy skateboarding or rollerblading, bike riding and electronic or computer games as leisure activities, each accounting for nearly 40% , 70% and 80%. However, girls outnumber boys by almost 20% when it comes to art and craft.

　　We can draw a conclusion from this survey that according to the data, passive pursuits are far more popular nowadays than active ones and that those who opt for creative pastimes are in the minority.

　　In my opinion, since the addiction to watching TV or videos or playing computer games is likely to do harm to children’s health, parents should be responsible for limiting the children’s time spent on passive leisure activities. In addition, more emphasis should be attached to activities that can encourage children to develop their creativity and build up physical health.

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　　【解析】略

　　4．Student Volunteers Brought Sunshine to the Elderly

　　On May Day,Li Yue and Zhuang Hua, students from Class Three, Grade Two, went to Sunshine Nursing Home and did some voluntary work. Upon their arrival, Li Yue and zhang Hua were warmly welcomed, and respectfully, they presented the elderly with flowers and fruits. Then, they started working at once, cleaning the windows and sweeping the floor. Everything done, they sat in the yard chatting with the elderly people.

　　When it was time for the volunteers to leave the elderly people thanked them for their kindness. They said it was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever.

　　Li Yue and Zhang Hua were very happy. What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构，（2）句子的时态（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是半开放性作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。

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　　A’ve burdened ourselves with a lot of work. To make ourselves enjoy a colorful life and keep fit through physical exercise, we’ve decided to found a cycling club and organize some activities.

　　We plan to offer basic training once a week, which will be instructed by our PE teacher. It will fall on the third period in the afternoon, when students are having after-class activities.

　　It is desired that you take time to join our club, as it is a great way to keep healthy and a good chance to relax ourselves. What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge, but you should bring your bicycle along.

　　Those who have interest can go to the monitor and sign up.

　　That’s all. Thank you.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：

　　试题分析：口头通知一般没有标题Notice和出通知的单位及时间。但开头要说：Attention, please! I have something important to tell you.结尾是That’s all, thank you!通知的正文要写明所做事情的具体时间、地点、概括性内容、出席对象及有关注意事项。布置工作的通知要把工作内容和要求写清楚。口头通知要注意格式，正文是根据要点交代清楚，语言要简洁明了，不能拖沓。

　　【亮点说明】范文叙述的逻辑顺序清晰；时间、地点状语的安排得很巧妙，充分显示了作者的语言功底。范文用时态运用准确。范文以简单句为主，复合句为辅，非常符合口头通知的特点。范文灵活表达要点的方法最值得我们效仿。We plan to offer basic training once a week, which will be instructed by our PE teacher.这句话运用了非限定性定语从句；What needs to be specifically noted is that the activity is free of charge, but you should bring your bicycle along.这句话运用了名词性从句；Those who have interest can go to the monitor and sign up.这句话运用了定语从句。

　　考点：口头通知