2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：24（含解析）

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　　读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文：

　　Anna really wanted to do something significant for her school before she went to college. But she couldn't think of anything meaningful that would influence the lives of her schoolmates.

　　One day, Anna saw a girl sitting by the school pond crying. Anna went up to her and said, "Are you okay? Is there anything I can do to help?" Anna found out that the girl was in her first year and was having trouble coping with her schoolwork. Then, Anna had an idea. She would start a tutoring group where seniors could help juniors who were struggling in their subjects.

　　Before long, many seniors volunteered to join Anna's tutoring group. Soon, Anna also started other support groups like "I'm not Alone" which provided counseling for students whose parents had been divorced and "Crime Fighters" where students helped prevent theft. Anna was happy that she made a difference in her peers' lives. She was showered with flowers of appreciation from her friends at her graduation!

　　[写作内容]

　　1．以约30个词概括上面短文的主要内容；

　　2．以约120个词就“帮助他人”这一主题发表你的看法，并包括以下要点：

　　(1) 你在日常生活和学习中经常帮助别人吗?请举例说明，

　　(2) 帮助别人之后你有何感想?

　　(3) 以你的亲身经历说明应该如何去帮助别人?

　　[写作要求]

　　你可以使用实例或其他论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

　　2．

　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　距离高考剩下不到一个月的时间了，紧张的高考备考已经进入尾声，但是很多同学不知如何处理学习、健身和休息与高考备考之间的关系。请你根据图中的内容写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对这一问题的看法和建议。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100字左右，开头语已为你写好。

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams

　　We are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one month. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　3．

　　书面表达

　　(满分25分)

　　高考文理分科与否在不同人群中反响各一，请根据图画所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，发表自己的感想。

　　注意：

　　1. 仔细品读图画中的文字，要突出自己的感想，不要作简单描述；

　　2. 词数150左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

　　3. 参考词汇：全能的 overall

　　高考 CET

　　Whether to cancel the division of science and art in senior middle school is an issue of controversy nowadays.

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　　4． 情景作文（20分）

　　美国中学生jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文，经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华，请给Jeff写一封信，按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

　　注意：1. 信的开头已为你写好。

　　2.词数不少于60。

　　11月的第四个星期四是感恩节。2017年的感恩节是11月27日星期四。假如你是李华，为了感恩母亲，请你依据所提供的信息，给你妈妈发一封电子邮件。

　　提示：1、感谢母亲多年的养育和教育之恩；

　　2、美好回忆：惹她生气时，她总能理解我；生病时，她总能

　　给我最好的照顾；考试成绩不好时，她总能鼓励我；教会

　　我要帮助有困难的人及如何做人等；

　　3、向妈妈谈谈你的理想和打算。

　　注意：1、词数150左右，开头与结尾已写好，不记入词数；

　　2、语言通顺，结构严谨。

　　be grateful to

　　Dear Mum,

　　How are you? Thanksgiving Day is drawing near, and I would like to say “thank you” here.

　　I hope you are happy every day.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　【解析】

　　2．

　　How to Get Prepared for the College Entrance Exams

　　We are going to attend the College Entrance Exams in less than one year. However, many students still don’t know how to arrange their study, rest and physical exercise when preparing for the Exams. They usually devote too much time to their study, which results in poor health and low efficiency of learning.

　　As the proverb goes, early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise. We’d better leave ourselves enough time to sleep since it enables us to learn our lessons more efficiently. What’s more, a strong and healthy body is the base for our further study and our future work and creative activities.

　　Therefore, as we are preparing for the Exams, don’t forget that rest, exercise and study are equally important.

　　【解析】

　　3．

　　Whether to cancel the division of science and art students in senior middle school is an issue of controversy nowadays. We have heard many different voices about it.

　　Some experts hold the view that the division of science and art limits the overall development of the students, and they believe students can develop their overall abilities if such division is canceled.  They strongly believe that only when students learn both science and art subjects can they develop in all round way, which lays a solid foundation for their future study.

　　However, as we can see from the cartoon, the student is still heavily loaded with lessons when there is no such division.   The students think that it makes no difference whether to cancel the division of science and arts if the CET system is not changed, as students have to learn more subjects than before.

　　From my point of view, I suppose that it may have more advantages than disadvantages to learn both science and art subjects. Although it will take us more time and energy, it’s beneficial to students in the long run.

　　【解析】

　　Dear Jeff,

　　I’m Hua from Beijing Hongxing Middle School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

　　While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing ball games or swimming. It’ll be a lot of fun.

　　If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

　　Best wishes,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感；用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然。

　　5．

　　Possible version:

　　Dear Mum,

　　How are you? Thanksgiving Day is drawing near, and I would like to say “thank you” here. I love you and thank you so much for everything you did for me. Thank you for educating me and bringing me up. I’m very grateful to you for taking care of me.

　　In my heart are many beautiful memories. When I was young, I always made you angry, but you were always very understanding. When I was sick, you were always looking after me. When I failed an exam, you encouraged me. You always encouraged me to help others who are in trouble. When I did good deeds, you were always praising me. I am really thankful to you for your teaching me how to be “a real person”.

　　Now I have grown up. I will work harder and make greater progress in my study. Mum, I am doing very well on my study. My schoolmates and teachers are all very nice, so don’t worry about me.

　　I hope you are happy every day.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：本文属于提纲类书面表达，主要为了感恩父母。以第一人称和一般现在时为主。要点为：1、感谢母亲多年的养育和教育之恩；2、美好回忆：惹她生气时，她总能理解我；生病时，她总能给我最好的照顾；考试成绩不好时，她总能鼓励我；教会我要帮助有困难的人及如何做人等；3、向妈妈谈谈你的理想和打

　　亮点说明：范文里较多运用了高级词汇，如bring up, be grateful to等；另外本文中高级句式的运用也很到位，如时间状语从句When I failed an exam, you encouraged me.定语从句You always encouraged me to help others who are in trouble.

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