2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：27（含解析）

　　1．读写任务 (共1小题,满分25分)

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

　　A Little Hero

　　A group of Italian soldiers led by a captain were advancing slowly toward the position of the enemy. They arrived at a farmhouse, in front of which sat a small boy, cutting a branch of a tree with his knife.

　　"What are you doing here?" asked the captain. "Why didn't you leave with your family?"

　　"I don't have any family," said the boy. "I'm an orphan. I used to work for the family that lived here. They've gone, but I stayed in order to see the fighting."

　　"Have you seen any Austrians pass by here?"

　　"Not within the last three days."

　　"Do you think you could climb that tree and tell me whether you see anything of the Austrians in the distance?"

　　"Sure!"

　　In a few minutes the boy was at the top of the tree.

　　"Look straight ahead," cried the captain, "and tell me what you see."

　　"Two men on horseback - nothing else."

　　"How far away?"

　　"About a mile and a half. They're standing still." ….

　　"They're shooting at me," said the boy. "but don't worry. Let me tell you what's to the left. Well, there's a church and I think I see... "

　　A third bullet passed, and the boy was seen to fall suddenly from the tree, dead.

　　"Poor boy!" said the captain, covering the boy's body with a national flag and saying, "He died like a soldier and we must bury him like a soldier."

　　Soon it was covered with flowers. He gave his life to his country.

　　【写作内容】

　　学校最近组织了一次中美学生交流活动，你参加其中的“童年生活”讨论。听完Joe讲的故事“A Little Hero” 之后，你准备写一份发言稿，题目是“After Listening to ‘A Little Hero’ ”，内容要点包括：

　　1. 以约30个词概括你听完A Little Hero的故事；

　　2. 然后以约120个词谈谈你的童年生活，内容包括：

　　(1) 对自己童年生活的感受；

　　(2) 你的童年以及现在的生活和故事中那位小英雄的童年生活有什么不同？

　　(3) 作为一位高中学生，你未来的理想是什么？

　　【写作要求】

　　1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　【评分标准】

　　概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　(共两节,满分40分)

　　第一节

　　基础写作

　　(共1小题，满分15分)

　　以下是一则关于足球世界杯介绍的主要内容。

　　内

　　容：

　　1. 世界杯是两个国际性的足球锦标赛, 分为男子和女子世界杯,每四年举行一次。

　　2．男子世界杯创立于1930年，当时仅有13支队伍，时至今日，这个锦标赛已经吸引了多于140个国家参加。

　　3．参加比赛的队伍必须在自己的大洲内参加淘汰赛，顺利晋级32强的国家才可以参加决赛。

　　4．男子世界杯被认为是世界上最受欢迎的体育盛事。

　　5．女子世界杯开始于1991年，从那时开始，受欢迎程度稳步上升。

　　参考词汇:

　　淘汰赛：elimination games

　　请根据以上内容给学校英语墙报写一篇通讯

　　只能用5个句子表达全部内容。

　　[评分标准]

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　3．在一位名叫Puzzled Mom的学生家长的博客上，你看到了以下内容。请根据该博客，给这位家长回复，词数为120左右。

　　I’m the mother of a 16-year-old. I have set a rule for my daughter: be among the top five students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?

　　要点：1．陈述自己的看法。

　　2．说明理由(可举例子)。

　　3．提出建议。

　　4．阅读下面一则广告，按照要求完成写作任务。

　　ETL International English Summer Camp

　　Volunteer Wanted

　　EIL was founded in Britain in 1936 with the fundamental aim of international understanding“Learn to live together by living together”.

　　Requirements: Over 16; good knowledge of English; outgoing; working well with children between 7-12

　　Activities: Language study, outdoor recreation and travel

　　Campers： Students from different countries

　　Camp site：Mount Wuyi, Fujian

　　Time: July 26-August 9

　　Application deadline： July 15, 2017

　　If interested, please e-mail to info@eiuk.org

　　假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。

　　要点如下：

　　1.对夏令营主题的理解；2.根据招聘要求自我介绍；3.参加夏令营的目的。

　　注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2.词数120左右。

　　Dear Sir,

　　I’m Li Hua from Fujian.

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Hua

　　5．请以“我们为什么上大学”为题，写一篇议论文。（字数100－120）

　　提示：1.不同的人对此有不同的看法。

　　2.有些学生以为大学是最理想的地方，上大学就是为了获取好的工作和高额工资，但结果是大学的生活和毕业后的工作往往使他们失望。

　　3.事实上，大学给那些渴望学到更多的知识以便将来报效祖国的人提供了良好的学习机会和必要的条件，这才是大学真正的吸引所在。

　　1．参考范文：

　　This passage is about a little hero. Being an orphan, he lived a hard life in early years. He helped the captain and his soldiers but lost his very young life for his country.

　　After listening to “A Little Hero”, I was moved and encouraged .The little hero was homeless. He had neither parents nor brothers nor sisters. He lived a poor and hard life by working for another family in his early years. He didn’t study at school, but he loved his country. Compared with the little hero, I had a happy childhood. I have a happy family with many good books, TV, two computers, a car and so on. My mother is a nurse and my father is a teacher. I have a ten-year-old brother. We are studying at school. At weekends, we often play basketball, play the computer games or go shopping. We can enjoy traveling in our summer holidays.

　　As a high student, I should study hard to be a scientist. I will make my contributions to my motherland.

　　【解析】略

　　2．

　　World Cup (soccer), two international soccer tournaments, one for men and one for women, each held every four years. The men＇s World Cup is considered the most popular sporting event in the world. Founded in 1930 with just 13 teams, the tournament now attracts entries from more than 140 countries. The teams must participate in elimination games within their own continents before qualifying to become one of the 32 nations participating in the final tournament. The women＇s World Cup was first played in 1991 and has gained popularity steadily since then.

　　【解析】较易

　　3．

　　Puzzled Mom,

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that what you do may not be right.

　　Though grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health and life attitudes should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

　　I suggest that you take your friends’ advice. Let your daughter take part in more social activities and let her make mistakes, which is quite normal.

　　Yours,

　　XX

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：本文是篇材料作文，材料非常简单，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，要求是人们对90后的评价，所以要用一般时。本文必须用第一人称。再有就是应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

　　【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如还运用了等。并注意了句子的衔接如：等等。

　　考点：提纲作文

　　4．

　　Dear Sir,

　　I’m Li Hua from Fujian, When I was reading the advertisement, the aim of this activity impressed me greatly. I think it instructive to learn to live together by living together. It is a good opportunity for the only child like me to learn to share and work together. Therefore I recommend myself to you without hesitation.

　　As a boy of 17, I am outgoing, good at English and have experience of working well with children aged from 7 to 12. I think it is a kind of win-win activity. For one thing, I can help take care of the children. For another thing, I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Sincerely yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：这是一篇话题类作文。假设你是李华，这则广告引起了你的兴趣，请用英文写一封自荐信。要点如下：1.对夏令营主题的理解；2.根据招聘要求自我介绍；3.参加夏令营的目的。需要写的内容已经粗略给出，需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子，适当添加些内容，使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数120词左右，不要太多也不要太少。

　　【亮点说明】I think it is a kind of win-win activity.这里含有一个宾语从句。

　　考点：话题类书面表达

　　5．

　　Why Do We Go To Universities?

　　Why do we go to universities? Different people have different views.

　　Some students may have many colorful dreams and regard universities as the most ideal places. They think that good jobs and higher pays will certainly result from a college education. In fact, the university life often makes them feel disappointed, and after graduation many of them will find the jobs aren’t the ones they like and the pays are not higher than they expect.

　　I think that a university provides good chances for those who are eager to learn more knowledge so that they can serve their motherland better in the future. This is why universities have a strong attraction.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：本文是一篇议论文。话题是：为什么不上大学？文章的要点基本上都给了出来，考生基本上只需要翻译即可，写作的时候注意使用高级词汇如result from..; be thirsty to do sth等提高文章的层次。同上也要变化使用高级句式，让文章不那么的平淡。