2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：8（含解析）

　　1．[写作内容]

　　假如你是个中学生， 你发现大街上随地吐痰的情况很严重。请你就此事用英文给某报社编辑写一封信，信的开头及结尾署名已给出。信的内容要点如下：

　　1. 随地吐痰传播疾病，有害健康，污染环境；

　　2. 政府应该采取措施，对在公共场所随地吐痰者处以从重罚款并加强教育；

　　3. 希望人人都关心爱护环境，使城市更加美丽。

　　[写作要求]

　　只能使用五个句子表达全部的内容，但不得把五句分开写；

　　[评分标准]

　　句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。

　　Dear editor,

　　I am a middle school student. I often see some people spitting in the street. ______________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　2．和睦的家庭有利于孩子的个性发展和家人的身心健康。请你根据表格中的信息和自身的感受，以How we can build up a harmonious family 为题用英语写一篇短文。

　　主要特征 充满温暖、爱心和欢笑； 相互关爱、尊重和理解

　　主要益处 生长在和睦家庭环境中的孩子会乐观向上；

　　生活在和睦家庭中的父母会健康快乐

　　父母该

　　怎么做 言行举止上做好表率； 充分尊重、信任孩子； 经常与孩子沟通交流

　　你该怎么做 ……

　　注意：1.对所有要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

　　2．词数120左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

　　3．作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。

　　How we can build up a harmonious family

　　A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health. _______________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________

　　3．书面表达（满分30分）

　　古话说：民以食为天。目前，粮食问题依然是世界范围内急需解决的问题。请以Food Shortage为题，写一篇100词左右的英语短文。简要描述下面的漫画内容，并结合生活实际，发表自己的感想。

　　4．

　　5．请以 Is Failure a Bad Thing 为题写一篇短文，要点如下：

　　失败是常有的事。

　　人们对失败有各种不同的态度。

　　你对失败的态度。

　　参考答案

　　1．

　　One possible Version:

　　Dear editor,

　　I am a middle school student. I often see some people spitting in the street. I think it’s a bad habit (bad manners) to spit here and there. As we all know, spitting carries and spreads diseases, pollutes our environment and does harm to our health. The government should take tough measures to protect the environment. If someone spits in a public place, he or she will be fined heavily and educated. For my part, I believe that our city will become more beautiful if all the people care about the environment and do their bit for it.

　　(81 W)

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】 略

　　2．

　　harmonious family

　　A harmonious family is essential to our personal development and our physical and mental health. A harmonious family is always full of warmth, love and laughter. Parents and children love and show concern for each other. They also respect and understand each other. If a child grows up in a harmonious family, he is more likely to be cheerful and optimistic. Otherwise, he may be miserable and pessimistic. Meanwhile, parents in a harmonious family are sure to live happily and more healthily.

　　Since a harmonious family plays a very important role in our life, it is up to every family member to contribute to the building of such a family. First of all, parents should be a role model for their children and pay more attention to their own words and behavior. Besides, they must trust their children and often communicate with them.

　　As children of the family, we should also respect and understand our parents, and try to share their burdens. If we do so, our home will always be harmonious.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：题目要求以How we can build up a harmonious family为题写一篇英语短文，来谈谈家庭和睦的重要性以及怎样建立和睦的家庭。写作要点以表格的形式给出，清楚明了，可以从和睦家庭的特征、家庭和睦的好处、父母怎样做、孩子怎样做这四个方面来写。使用第一人称进行写作，时态以现在时为主，注意语法知识的正确运用。

　　【亮点说明】

　　考点： 提纲类作文

　　One possible version:

　　Food Shortage

　　From the very interesting cartoon, we can see many people are crowding on earth. Food on earth is far from enough to feed the surprisingly increasing population.

　　As you know, food shortage has hit many countries in the world and even caused social unrest in some areas. There are many reasons for the current world food crisis. First, annual world grain output has declined because of climate change. Besides, lots of farmland has been lost due to the rapid development of industry and urbanization.

　　Then what should be done about the problem? On one hand, we should focus on the environmental protection and improve the ecology. On the other hand, strict measures should be taken to protect farmland. In fact, the developed countries should take their responsibilities to help the poor ones suffering food shortage.

　　【解析】略

　　4．

　　【解析】略

　　5．

　　【解析】这是一篇表述观点的短文，内容要点已经给出，学生写作的时候切入点容易找。内容贴近学生生活，可以有感而发。要求学生作文涵盖所有要点，并做适当补充或者拓展，使用多种句型和高级词汇，在个人观点方面要紧扣主题，观点明确，做适当发挥。