2016年高考英语高效书面表达专题卷：9（含解析）

　　1．书面表达（满分30分）

　　现象

　　观点 高三部分住校生搬离学生宿舍，在学校附近租房住

　　多数学生 1．宿舍吵闹，影响学习和休息

　　2．熄灯制度限定了学习时间

　　许多家长 1．提供好的学习环境

　　2．方便照顾饮食起居

　　你的看法 ……

　　注意：

　　1．陈述所有要点，可适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

　　2．词数120—150（开头已写好，不计入总词数）。

　　3．参考词汇：熄灯制度—blackout rule

　　With the college entrance examination approaching day by day, some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in a rented apartment near their schools.

　　2．

　　第二节 读写任务（共1小题，满分25分）

　　阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150左右的英语短文。

　　It is exciting to visit different places. As you travel, you will see beautiful sceneries typical of the region. Besides, you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races. Today people are so fond of traveling that tourism has become one of the developing industries in most countries.

　　Recent years have seen a tendency in China that tourism is growing faster. According to a recent survey made by some experts, about 47% urban residents travel regularly, and 28% rural residents also make their tour across the country. The survey also shows that more people are interested in tourism, and will join the army in the future.

　　Facing this tendency, we can't help exploring some underlying factors that are responsible. In the very first place, with the policy of reform and opening up, Chinese people's living standard has greatly been improved, and therefore, most of them can afford to travel around. What's more, it is believed that people now take a more positive attitude to tourism. In addition, tourism facilities are becoming better and better. For example, transportation develops fast, and many scenic spots are available now.

　　Though there are still some problems with tourism, I personally believe that tourism should be playing a key role in our life. I also hope that our government will make policies to create a better environment for tourists.

　　[写作内容]

　　(1) 以约30个词概括短文的要点；

　　(2) 然后以约120个词就“旅游的好处”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：

　　① 体验不同地方的美景、美食，出国旅游更是给人们提供一个远离祖国的机会；

　　② 了解风土人情，拓宽历史、地理、生物等知识，增强爱国意识。

　　[写作要求]

　　(1) 可以使用实例或其它论述方法支持你的论点，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

　　(2) 标题自定；

　　(3) 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

　　[评分标准] 概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

　　3．今年，你将高三毕业。为使即将升入本校的高一新生的高中生活更顺利，学校的《英语学习园地》请你给他们留言，提出一些中肯的建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一篇短文。

　　1．合理分配学习、锻炼和休息时间；

　　2．搞好与老帅和同学之间的关系；

　　3．积极参加校社团活动。

　　注意：1．词数：不少于100词；

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　假设你叫李华，与好友周凯分别升入不同的高中，开学两周后你对自己的所见所闻感受颇深。请你给周凯写一封邮件，简述你对新学校的印象。要点包括：

　　学校概况 新校园干净美丽；有大型操场和电子阅览室

　　教师 最喜欢英语老师，他是一位帅气的男老师，他的教学方法与众不同，从不让人尴尬

　　同学 友好、勤奋

　　感受 高中新生活开始了

　　，要积极上进

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　参考词汇：电子阅览室：digital reading room

　　Dear Zhou Kai，

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　5．据调查，人们对学生网上交友持不同意见。请以Should students make friends online?”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍不同，并表达自己的。

　　赞成 反对 你的

　　1．广交朋友 1．浪费时间

　　(请考生列举到点)

　　2．自由表达思想 2．影响学习

　　3．利于学习 3．上当受骗

　　1．对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

　　2．词数120左右。

　　3．作文中不得提及考生所在班级和本人姓名。

　　参考词汇：网络朋友 online friends)；上当受骗

　　Should students make friends online?

　　Some people say yes.

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　　参考答案

　　1．With the college entrance examination approaching day by day, some senior three students are moving out from their dorms and living in a rented apartment near their schools.

　　Most students think although school dorms bring them fun and friendship, the blackout rule to guarantee students sleeping hours doesn't leave them enough time to finish homework．Worse still, the noise in the dorms not only influnces their studies but also ruins their rest．To many parents, they'd like to provide a better environment for their children so that they can study more effeciently．Besides, they can take care of their children's daily meals and laundry, so their children can eat better and have a comfortable life．

　　In my opinion, whether a student should rent a house outside his school depends on his need．I am in favor of renting a house for the sake of study．After all, time is pressing．But I strongly recommend that parents should care much about their children while they are outside school．

　　【解析】略

　　2．

　　Traveling can bring us a lot of benefits, which in turn promotes the development of tourism. Though it has some disadvantages, more and more people now show great interest in traveling.

　　People travel both for pleasure and for learning.

　　By traveling we can enjoy the beautiful scenery in different places. We will visit many famous cities and scenic spots with our own eyes and taste different delicious foods. Traveling abroad is an especially satisfying experience for those who do not have much of an opportunity to be away from their homelands.

　　We will meet people with different interests and see strange and different things when we travel. Travel will not only help us to know about customs of other people, but also will help us gain knowledge of history, geography, biology, and other knowledge of the places we visit. In this way, we can understand how differently other people live and arouse our deep love for our motherland

　　【解析】

　　3．

　　One possible version:

　　Here are some suggestions for you ,which may help you enjoy your school life better.

　　As senior high school students. You will be living a very busy life. So first of all ，you should arrange your time properly .You’d better make a timetable so that you know when to study, exercise and rest. Only in this way can you make good use of every minute .Besides ,while in school，it is wise to develop a pleasant relationship with teachers and classmates .When you have a problem that you can’t work it out alone ,you’d better turn to your teachers or classmates for help .Of course you should lend a helping hand when necessary .Last but not least ,I advise you to take an active part in societies at school ,which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves.

　　I hope the suggestions above will help you go through a rich and colorful school life .I’m sure that a beautiful future is waiting you.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：本文是一篇提纲式命题作文，要求给学校的《英语学习园地》请你给他们留言，提出一些中肯的建议

　　【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如life, take an active part in;短语Only in this way can you make good use of every minute的句及wh等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：So , Besides，等等。

　　4．Dear Zhou Kai，

　　We haven’t seen each other for over two weeks. How are you doing？I can’t wait to tell you something about my new school life.

　　My new school is really clean and beautiful. There’s a large playground and an amazing digital reading room. I like my English teacher best，who is very popular with all the students. He is really good-looking. His teaching method is nothing like that of the other teachers. What’s more，he avoids making us feel embarrassed in class. All my classmates are friendly and hard­working. We’re living a new life and trying to make greater progress in our lessons.

　　Would you please tell me something about your new school? I’m looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours truly,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】本文首先是一份书信，应注意书信的格式

　　然后可以分点介绍学校的情况。

　　然后可以写自己在这个学校的感受（可从同学，老师，生活习惯，学习环境等方面叙述），还可以写希望自己能在这个学校去的什么样的成就，什么目标

　　最后可以询问对方的看法，对方的情况以及对对方的问候

　　5．

　　Should students make friends online?

　　Some people say yes. The Internet helps students make many friends. Chatting online, students can express their feelings and opinions more freely and even get help with their foreign language studies.

　　Others, however, think students should not make online friends. They think it a waste of time to make friends online, which should be spent more meaningfully on their studies. Otherwise, their normal studies will be much affected. Besides, some students may even get cheated online.

　　From my point of view, making friends online is harmful rather than helpful. Students should think of their study, health and safety first. As for friendship, we can easily find it in our classmates and other people around us.

　　【解析】略