2017届高考英语一轮复习写作辅导课件：第11讲《解读图表信息《稳固构建图表作文》（全国通用）

　　However, 30 percent don't agree, arguing that they feel it uncomfortable and old­fashioned. What's more, its style is too simple, lacking personality. The rest of the students don't care about it, saying it is the only best choice to obey the school rules.

　　In my opinion, it's better to have a discussion about the school uniform, and if possible, to hold a DIY competition among students beforehand is even a better way. 走向高考 · 英语 路漫漫其修远兮 吾将上下而求索 人教版(课标卷地区) · 高考总复习

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　　第三部分 第十一讲　解读图表信息， 稳固构建图表作文 第二部分

　　图表作文是高考书面表达较常见的考查形式之一，要求考生通过对数据、文字内容进行分析，对前后变化、正反观点进行对比，或者对某产品进行介绍，系统而准确地表达出图表所示内容，并得出令人信服的结论。从体裁看，主要有说明文、议论文和应用文。在该文体中常常使用一般现在时。 一、试题特征 1．表格式 表格式书面表达就是将统计数据或被说明的事物直接以统计表的形式呈现出来。这类题目往往是介绍某种情况或辩论某种观点与看法，体裁以说明文和议论文为主。 2．图形式 主要有以下三种形式： (1)表示数据变化的曲线图。 (2)表示数据大小或数量之间差异的柱状图。 (3)表示总体结构变化的饼状图。

　　二、写作步骤(三段论) 1．开门见山，点明图表要反映的主题。 2．中间段落对图表的内容进行分析，可采用分类或对比来表现主题，并阐明必要的理由。在叙述中切忌反复使用同一句型，忌反复出现图表中的数据。 3．发表自己的观点，对全文进行小结。

　　三、注意事项 1．认真阅读和掌握图表提供的信息，弄清设计者想通过图表来反映的信息、问题或现象。对于曲线图形式，要认真观察坐标系所显示的数据信息，并密切注意交汇在坐标横轴和纵轴上的数字及单位；对柱状图和饼状图，要通过宽度相等的柱形的高度差别和各部分所占比例来判断事物的动态发展趋势，关注坐标线的刻度单位及图表旁边的提示说明。 2．在掌握了全部信息的基础上，着手分析这些信息或数据，通过分析对比，找出不同点和相似点。

　　四、常用句式 1．描述图表中的变化与发展趋势 快速上升：rise(increase/go up)sharply(rapidly/quickly/ dramatically) 缓慢下降：decrease(reduce/come down/decline/drop/fall) slowly (gradually) 2．阐述事实的句式 ①As is apparently shown in the pie chart/graph/table above... 正如上面饼状图/曲线图/表格所明显呈现的…… ②As far as...is concerned，much progress has been made. 就……而言，已经取得了很大进步。 ③There is an increase of about...percent，compared with... 与……相比较，大约增加了……

　　④50% of the people surveyed express the satisfaction with...，while only 40% of them are satisfied with... 在调查中有50%的人对……满意，而仅有40%的人对……满意。 ⑤By comparison with...，it decreased(fell)/increased from...to... 和……相比，从……减少/增加到…… ⑥It is obvious from the graph/chart that...rank the first /highest，while...turn out to be the lowest. 图中清楚显示……是排在第一位/最高的，而……结果最低。

　　3．表达原因的句式 ①The reason why/for...is that... ……的原因是…… ②One may think of the change as a result of... 人们可能把这种变化认作是……的结果。 ③The change in...largely results from the fact that... 在……上的变化很大程度上是由……的事实造成的。

　　④First/Firstly/To begin with...；Second/Secondly/And then/ Next...；Finally/Last but not least/Apart from the above reasons... 首先……；其次……；最后/最后但同样重要的是/除了上述原因…… ⑤It is because of...that... 由于……才…… 4．归纳总结或发表评论的句式 ①in a

　　word(总之)/in short(简而言之)/generally speaking(总的说来)/to sum up(总之，概括地说)/in conclusion总之，最后/in summary总之 ②From what has been discussed above，we can draw the conclusion that... 从以上的讨论我们可以得出结论，…… ③Obviously/Apparently，if we want to...，it is necessary to do/that... 很明显，如果我们想……，……是有必要的。

　　④There is no doubt that attention must be paid to... 毫无疑问，我们必须注意…… ⑤I suggest the government take effective measures to... 我建议政府应该采取有效措施来…… ⑥All in all，it is...that leads to the phenomenon. 总而言之，是……导致了这种现象。

　　下图是某大学教授对其学生是否成功的判断标准以及人们对于这种观点的看法。请根据所给内容用英语写一篇短文。

　　核心词汇： ①做一个调查：conduct a survey ②衡量成功：judge one's success ③耻辱和失败：shame and failure ④反对某人的观点：oppose one's view ⑤挣钱：make money ⑥发表观点：voice one's opinion ⑦用合理的方法：in a reasonable way 要点四：在接受调查的人群中，观点不同。 Opinions are divided/different/vary among the surveyed people. 要点五：正如上面饼状图所示，70%的人反对这位老师的观点。 Just as the pie chart shows,70% of them oppose the teacher's view. 要点六：他们认为老师不应该用金钱来评判他们的学生。 They think that teachers shouldn't judge their students' success by money. 要点七：25%的人认为这是鼓励学生多赚钱的好方法。 25% of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money. 要点八：还有一些人没有发表他们的观点。 There are also a few people who don't voice/express their opinions. 要点九：就我看来，我们应该用一种理性的方法来理解成功。 In my opinion/As far as I am concerned，we should understand success in a reasonable way.

　　要点十：金钱肯定是衡量成功的一种方式。 Money is certainly one way to measure success. 要点十一：金钱不是衡量成功的唯一方式。 Money is not the only way to measure success. 升级句式二：用形式主语it改写要点三中的状语从句 It can be seen from the picture that a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and failure. 升级句式三：用what引导的主语从句改写要点五 What the pie chart shows is that 70% of them oppose the teacher's view. 升级句式四：把要点八的定语从句改成非谓语结构 There are also a few people not voicing/expressing their opinions. 升级句式五：把要点十中的certainly改成it is certain that... It is certain that money is one way to measure success.

　　One possible version:

　　Recently，a survey has been conducted about whether a teacher should judge his students' success by the money they have earned.

　　As can be seen from the picture，a teacher says that a student without 40 million yuan at the age of 40 means shame and failure.But opinions are divided among the surveyed people.Just as the pie chart shows,70% of them oppose the teacher's view.They think that teachers shouldn't judge their students' success by money，while 25% of them think this is a good way to encourage students to make more money.There are also a few people who don't voice their opinions.

　　As far as I am

　　concerned，we should understand success in a reasonable way.Money is certainly one

　　way to measure success，but it is not the only way. (2015·河南省实验中学模拟) 假设最近你在自己的班级就校服问题进行了调查(survey)。下面是调查的统计表。请你参照该统计表给校报写一篇有关校服问题调查的报告，并简要阐述自己的观点。 意见类型 百分比 原因 赞同 50 颜色好，整齐大方，符合年龄特征和学生身份，不盲目赶时髦，能显示平等和谐氛围。 不赞同 30 颜色，款式和样式等不能彰显个性。 无所谓 20 服从学校安排，并不在意其他因素。 注意：1.报告须包括本调查表中的主要内容，并可以适当增加细节使内容连贯。 2．词数100字左右。 3．参考词汇：赶时髦follow fashion; 校服school uniform _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ _________________________________________________ 答案：I did a survey about our school uniform. I asked some of my classmates what they thought about our school uniform. Here is the brief report about it. The majority are in favor of our school uniform, thinking it very fashionable and its color nice. They also think it is neat and tidy, and suits the students. In some students' opinion, when they wear our school uniform they feel equal. Besides, there is no need for them to follow fashion.