2017届高考英语一轮复习专题技能突破演练：21 短文改错之通读全文，纠正逻辑错误（含解析）

　　专题技能突破(21)短文改错之通读全文，纠正逻辑错误【技能讲解】　通读全文，了解短文的大意， 把握全篇的时态、人称、非谓语的主被动关系及行文逻辑。有时孤立的分析某个句子，其结构正确、语义通顺，无错可改，但如果联系上下文，便会发现该句中有不合逻辑的地方，需做出改正。典例剖析1.[2015·课标全国卷]When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there.

　　[答案]　think→thought　考查时态。由was, hoped和would be可知，此处叙述的是过去的事情，故用一般过去时。

　　2．[2015·课标全国卷]We must find ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.

　　[答案]　your→our或the　考查代词。根据上下句语境，我们应该保护我们的环境，故改为our, 也可用定冠词the来限定。

　　3．[2015·浙江高考]In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around it.

　　[答案]　is→was　考查时态。全文用的都是过去时，所以把is改为was。

　　4．In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. What do you think I should do? Ifyou were me, would you talk to him?

　　[答案]　him→them　考查代词。根据上下文及their一词可知，此处代词指代错误，故将him改为them。

　　5．On average, there are 800 tornadoes in the US each year, cause about 80 deaths and 1,500 injuries.

　　[答案]　cause→causing　考查非谓语动词。causing作结果状语，表“自然而然的结果”用现在分词。

　　技能演练

　　短文改错

　　(一)

　　A man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes later, the bus arrived and did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little far, so he started running after the bus. Fortunately, the bus never stopped. The man kept follow the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed her, “You fool! Do you know how many you could save if you ran after a taxi？”

　　答案：

　　A man

　　been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes , the bus arrived

　　did not stop. The man thought it would stop a little ， so he started running after the bus. ， the bus never stopped. The man kept

　　the bus until he arrived home. The man was very glad that he could save

　　bit of money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the

　　until getting home. I didn't have to pay the fee.” Surprisingly, the wife blamed ， “You fool! Do you know how

　　you could save if you ran after a taxi？”

　　(二)

　　Last week my parents and I took a two­days trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon that we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of them were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,

　　visiting temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautifully. The time passes quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive and the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow.

　　答案：

　　Last week my parents and I took a

　　trip to Emei Mountain in Sichuan. As everyone knows, it's

　　famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. The weather was fine. It was about noon

　　we arrived at the foot of the mountain. The three of

　　were very excited. As we climbed the mountain, we fed monkeys,

　　temples and told stories. On the way up I was busy taking

　　since the scenery was so . The time

　　quickly. Evening came. We spent the night in a hotel at the top of the mountain. The food was expensive

　　the service was good. I was so tired that I fell asleep

　　the moment my head touched the pillow.