专题技能突破(42) 写作之应用文——建议信
【技能讲解】 建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议和忠告。信的内容要包括写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由等。一般由三段构成:第一段,表明写作意图。陈述事由,简单自我介绍;第二段,首先肯定对方的优点,然后再写需要改进的地方或针对具体情况提出合理建议,一定要注意语气,要彬彬有礼而不能过于强硬;第三段,做出总结,表达祝愿。[常用表达方式] I'm writing to express my views concerning...
It couldn't be better if you could...
If I were you, I would...
I think it would be more beneficial if you could...
I will be more than happy to see improvements in...
I hope you can take my advice into account/ consideration.
典例剖析[2015·江西南昌一模]假设你是英文报纸Teens的编辑Collins,读者李华写信告诉你他对高中学校生活的压力和父母整天的唠叨感到很厌烦,打算辍学外出打工,到社会上闯荡一下。请你用英文给他写一封信劝他放弃这个念头并给出自己的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文章的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:闯荡make a living away from home
Dear Li Hua,
This is Collins from Teens. I'm sorry to hear from you that you planned to drop out and find a job away from your parents.
Yours sincerely,
Collins
[范文]
Dear Li Hua,
This is Collins from Teens. I'm sorry to hear from you that you planned to drop out and find a job away from your parents. It is a very dangerous idea for a teenager like you to intend to make a living away from home.
As a high school student, it is natural for us to meet problems in our school life. Both our teachers and parents show their love to us every day in the form of praise, criticisms or even complaints. We should be aware of it and grateful to it.①
In my opinion, the most important duty for you today is to learn knowledge and learn how to deal with different difficulties at home and at school. To face the unknown world is our next step after graduation.②
I hope my idea will be useful to you.
Yours sincerely,
Collins
[解析] 第二段中,高级词汇运用很恰当。in the form of “以……形式”,praise “表扬”,criticism “批评”,complaint “唠叨”,be aware of “意识到”,be grateful to “对……感激”。
第三段中动词不定式运用很得心应手。to learn...and learn...作表语,how to deal with...作learn的宾语,to face...作主语。
技能演练[2015·贵州七校联考]假如你是新华中学的学生李华。最近你在英语课的某个单元中学习了一些关于急救的知识,感觉很有用,想建议学校提供专门的急救课程,以便学生了解更多相关知识。于是,你给校长写了一封信。要点如下:
1.急救课程有用;
2.需要开课的原因;
3.你的建议。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Mr President,
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Mr President,
Our class has been studying a unit on first aid. It has been very useful because we have learnt about what to do to help someone who has had an accident.
We would like to have a course on first aid, because it would give information about many more situations. It would also give us the chance to practice firstaid treatments.
I suggest that the school should organize a first aid course. We think such a course in the school is a necessary part of our education and will make us more useful members of our society. Perhaps we will even save someone's life one day.
Best regards!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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