2017届高三英语百所名校好题速递分项解析汇编（第01期）：专题06 书面表达（教师版）

　　2017届高考模拟试题分类汇编（1）之书面表达

　　注意：

　　1．词数100

　　2．文章的结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

　　3可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　With all my best regards.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I’m writing this letter to apply for the job as a volunteer that you have advertised on the Internet. In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help those in need live better and become more confident.

　　I will graduate from senior high school in June. In the past, I took part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience. My interest and skill in English, communication and teamwork contribute to my application for the job.

　　I would appreciate an interview at your convenience. I’m looking forward to hearing from you in the future.

　　With all my best regards.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语apply for申请；in one’s opinion在某人看来；contribute to有助于；look forward to 盼望着；In my opinion, not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledge and experience, but also it can help those in need live better and become more confident.这个句子运用到部分倒装；In the past, I took part in many social activities in which I performed well and gained rich experience.这个句子运用到in which引导的定语从句；

　　考点： 提纲类作文

　　假设你是李华，在一所中学读书。最近收到美国中学生Alex Nelson的来信。作为姊妹学校的交流生，他两个月前访问过你校，听说有个“六艺俱乐部（Liuyi Club）的学生社团。希望进一步了解有关情况。请根据以下要点，给他写一封信，介绍俱乐部的情况。

　　成立时间：2015

　　六艺：中国传统的文化艺术，如书法、音乐、绘画等

　　俱乐部宗旨：宣传中国文化、交友

　　经常组织的活动：

　　中国书法、绘画竞赛

　　免费中国书法课程

　　中国文化讲座

　　学生社团：Student society

　　中国书法：Chinese calligraphy

　　注意：1．词数100左右;

　　2．可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯

　　3．开头语已为你写好

　　Dear Nelson,

　　I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about Liuyi Club.

　　______________________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】I was so p1eased to hear from you and am writing to tel1 you something about Liuyi Club. Founded in 2015, Liuyi Club is a student society on Chinese traditional culture, especially the Chinese calligraphy. “Luiyi” means “the six arts”, a general term referring to a variety of the traditional Chinese arts.

　　Since 2010, Liuyi Club has organized various activities aiming at promoting traditional Chinese arts. Some of the regularly held events include Chinese calligraphy and paining competition, free Chinese calligraphy courses for students in the school, lectures on Chinese culture and traditions.

　　Liuyi Club is a place for students from different classes to make friends who have common interests in the Chinese arts. Through various activities, members enjoy rich opportunities to improve communication and teamwork abilities.

　　【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语hear from收到某人的来信；a variety of许多；make friends交朋友；have common interests in在某方面有共同的兴趣；Founded in 2015, Liuyi Club is a student society on Chinese traditional culture, especially the Chinese calligraphy.这个句子运用到非谓语动词 ；Since 2010, Liuyi Club has organized various activities aiming at promoting traditional Chinese arts.这个句子中运用到现在完成时；Liuyi Club is a place for students from different classes to make friends who have common interests in the Chinese arts.这个句子who引导定语从句；

　　考点： 提纲类作文

　　书面表达(满分25分)

　　假定你是中学生李华。高三将是辛苦忙碌的一年，不管自己还是父母都会很辛苦。每个家长都是望子成龙的，处在这一重要的学习阶段，父母会对你的生活学习倍加关心。现在请你按照以下内容要点给自己的父母写一封感谢信。

　　内容要点：

　　1. 感谢父母这么多年来无微不至的关心；

　　2. 近段时间自己的学习情况及取得的进步，自己会继续努力，希望父母放心；

　　3. 高三过后一定多帮父母做家务。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100左右；

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

　　3. 开头和结尾已给出。

　　Dear parents,

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　Love from,

　　Your son

　　【答案】

　　Dear parents,

　　The hardest time of my life is coming, and I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life. I can say nothing but thanks to you on this special occasion, because words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you both for the care you have shown me over the past years. These days I have been studying hard and have performed to the best of my abilities in the test. I’ll try my best to accomplish my assignment in the days to come. Please set your minds at rest.

　　After the college entrance examination, I intend to help you do some housework, which I have seldom done before. And I want to learn to cook in order to prepare a dinner personally for you both.

　　My dear parents, everything is going well with me. Do relax!

　　Love from,

　　Your son

　　【解析】【亮点说明】I know that you both are very worried about my studies and my life这个句子运用到that引导的宾语从句；After the college entrance examination, I intend to help you do some housework, which I have seldom done before.这个句子运用到which引导的非限制性定语从句；

　　考点： 提纲类作文

　　书面表达（满分25分）

　　假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。

　　1．表达给她提供帮助的意愿；

　　2．说明你能胜任辅导的理由；

　　3．给出讲好普通话的两点建议；

　　4．提出你学习英语的具体需求。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100左右，开头语已为你写好；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　Hi Sharon,

　　This is Li Xia I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin

　　【答案】

　　Dear Sharon,

　　This is Li Xia, I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.

　　I felt honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning. I’m good at speaking standard Mandarin. I’ve been a broadcaster in the school broadcasting station for years. When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin, I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. Another suggestion is to practice speaking. As one saying goes. “Practice makes perfect.” However, my English is just OK and I have many problems with my study. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English. I believe we both can make much progress with each other’s help.

　　Looking forward to your reply soon!

　　Yours,

　　Li Xia

　　【亮点说明】本文采用常用的三段式，要点齐全，布局安排合理，层次分明，使用高级词汇、短语和高级句式。I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.句中使用定语从句；I felt honored to have the chance to help you with your Mandarin learning.动词不定式作定语；When it comes to how to speak fluent Mandarin,当谈到---的时候，是固定句式；I suggest that you learn a bunch of pronunciation rules first, which are quite different from the English ones. suggest后面的宾语从句中运用虚拟语气（should）+动词原形，同时句中还用了非限制性定语从句；As one saying goes. “Practice makes perfect.”as引导非限制性定语从句，同时句中使用谚语；I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to study English.宾语从句体现句中。

　　考点：考查电子邮件式话题作文

　　【湖北省襄阳市第五中学2017届高三上学期开学考试】书面表达（满分25分）

　　你校学生会将举行一场高三年级英语话剧比赛，请你以校学生会李明的名义给外教Wilson Smith写-封信请其当裁判并说明话剧比赛事宜。应包括以下内容：

　　1．每班限报一个话剧，人数不超过10人，不少于2人；

　　2．话剧表演必须用英语表达，时长不超过半小时；

　　3．话剧内容必须思想健康，适合中学生观看；

　　4．时间：12月10日，地点：校大礼堂。

　　注意：1．词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Mr.Smith,

　　How is everything going on?

　　_____________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________________

　　We are looking forward to your replay. Thank you.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　【答案】

　　Dear Mr. Smith,

　　How is everything going on? May we have the honor to invite you to be the judge of our coming play contest? We would really appreciate it if your answer is YES.

　　The Students' Union is going to hold an English play contest among Senior 3 students on December 10th. Each class can only present only one play， in which the number of participants should be limited between 2 and 10 students. All plays must be presented in English and finished within half an hour. In addition, the content of the plays must be mentally healthy and suitable for Senior students. The location will be in the school hall.

　　It is really a good chance to practice students’ oral English as well as to show their talents. We really hope that you can give us some help so that our judgment will be more objective.

　　We are looking forward to your replay. Thank you.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Ming

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：你校学生会将举行一场高三年级英语话剧比赛，请你以校学生会李明的名义给外教Wilson Smith写-封信请其当裁判并说明话剧比赛事宜。应包括以下内容： 1．每班限报一个话剧，人数不超过10人，不少于2人；2．话剧表演必须用英语表达，时长不超过半小时；3．话剧内容必须思想健康，适合中学生观看；时间：12月10日，地点：校大礼堂。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1．词数100左右； 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　【亮点说明】文章段落清晰，结构严谨，布局合理，句中使用高级句子。We would really appreciate it if your answer is YES. would really appreciate it if含条件句的固定句式用于其中；Each class can only present only one play， in which the number of participants should be limited between 2 and 10 students.非限制性定语从句和被动语态完美结合；All plays must be presented in English and finished within half an hour.含情态动词的被动语态；We really hope that you can give us some help so that our judgment will be more objective.宾语从句和目的状语从句在同句体现。

　　考点：考查书信式话题作文

　　【湖北省襄阳市第四中学2017届高三八月第一周周考】书面表达（满分25分）

　　假设你正在参加全省中学生英语演讲比赛,请你针对有些父母经常翻看孩子日记或书包这一现象,写一篇演讲稿,陈述你的观点。演讲稿的主要内容应包括：

　　认为同学们不必为此苦恼；

　　希望能够体谅父母的苦衷；

　　建议与父母进行交流和沟通。

　　注意：1. 词数120左右；2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.

　　Some of us are having problems with our parents, as they often look into our school bags or read our diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there’s no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we’re not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong. My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around—they are bound to read it.

　　Thank you for listening!

　　写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：why we are not comfortable about it, we’re not getting into any trouble. we’re not getting into any trouble. you can talk to them,文章还运用了look into，there’s no need，connect with，are bound to等词汇。

　　考点：写作。

　　应用文写作指导 

　　应用文写作是高考书面表达常考的一种形式，题目的设计形式多种多样，一般通过图画、表格、提纲等形式展示表达的话题及相关信息和主要内容，一般都要有一定的汉语提示和要求。写作内容大都包括对信息内容的客观描述，还要发表自己的观点和看法；有时要求提出解决问题的办法或建议。 

　　应用文的写作要注意以下几个方面： 

　　1、写作的前提是明确目的，以便合理的安排文章内容和结构。除了感谢信、道歉信、邀请信、推荐信、投诉信、求职信等目的较明确外，发言稿、通知、调查报告等也要考虑写作文章的用途或听众与读者的需求； 

　　2、写作的关键是仔细审题，通过审题，得出图画、图表或提纲提示信息，并选准表达要点，使其很好的描述现象，分析问题，解决问题，达到写作的目的；

　　 3、注意篇章结构的整体安排：开篇点题，表明写作的目的（一般给出）；描述事物的顺序和思路（按照审题得出的表达要点合理安排，要符合客观实际和人们的认知规律）；合适自然的结尾（首尾呼应，提出解决问题的方法或建议）。

　　 4、注意应用文的语言要规范、准确，要得体；选词要丰富，适量使用结构稍复杂的长短句式，如倒装句、强调句和定语从句等，确保写作信息的含量；注意过度与衔接，确保行文连贯，提高写作的质量。 

　　5、选择恰当的人称和时态：以第一、三人称为主，主要选用现在时态。 

　　【湖南省长沙市长郡中学2017届高三上学期第二次周测】书面表达（满分25分）

　　72．假定你是李华。你想买一本适合中学生使用的英语词典，但拿不定主意该买哪一种。请你用英语给在北京学习中文的美国笔友Peter 写封信，征询他的意见。要点包括：

　　1.请他推荐一种；

　　2.如果可能，请他代购一本。

　　3.下周，哥哥李明要去北京，可以让他捎回。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2.适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Peter,

　　How are you doing?

　　_________________________________________________________________________________

　　_________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________________________________

　　_____

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　Dear Peter,

　　How are you doing?

　　I’m writing to tell you that I want to buy an English dictionary suitable for senior high school students. A few days ago, I went to my local bookstores and saw many different kinds on sale, but I couldn’t make up my mind which to buy. Will you please recommend one to me? Or, if it is convenient to you, would you like to buy one for me in Beijing?

　　My brother Li Ming will go to Beijing next week. If you don’t mind, I will give him your telephone number and address, and possibly he can take it back for me. of course, I’ll tell him to give the money at the same time.

　　Looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【亮点说明】本文语言简练，层次分明，布局合理，文中运用高级句子。I’m writing to tell you that I want to buy an English dictionary suitable for senior high school students.宾语从句在句中运用；but I couldn’t make up my mind which to buy.疑问词加动词不定式作宾语；if it is convenient to you, would you like to buy one for me in Beijing?条件状语从句和一般疑问句结合句中？；另外，

　　A few days ago, but，Or, at the same time. 的运用为文章增色添彩。

　　考点：考查书信式话题作文

　　【云南省临沧市第一中学2017届高三上学期第二次月考】书面表达 (满分25分) 假定你是李华，目前正处于高三阶段。与你同为高三的好友李杰写信向你征求如何为高考做准备。你给他写一封回信：

　　理由

　　1. 保持良好的心态

　　2. 目标明确

　　3. 与父母、老师或同学沟通

　　4. 作息合理，饮食均衡 1. 有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气

　　2. 正确评价自己

　　3. ……

　　4. ……

　　注意： 1. 词数100左右

　　2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。

　　3. 参考词汇：

　　(definite)

　　评价(estimation)

　　Dear Li Jie ,

　　I have received your letter. No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination.

　　_____________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　Dear Li Jie ,

　　I have received your letter. No doubt every Senior 3 student wishes to be successful in the National College Entrance Examination. Yet what should we do in order to achieve success? Here are some suggestions.

　　First, it’s vital to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely. Meanwhile, we should have a definite goal and a correct estimation of ourselves. Only in this way will we face everything in life more objectively. Besides, we’d better talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we are in trouble. Finally, striking a good balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.

　　With these done, I think we can greatly improve our performance.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【亮点说明】采用三段式，语言简练，布局合理，运用高级句子。Yet what should we do in order to achieve success?动词不定式表示目的状语；First, it’s vital to have a right attitude, for a normal state of mind and self-confidence not only helps us relax but also enables us to overcome difficulties bravely.for在这里表示“原因”，引导并列句；Only in this way will we face everything in life more objectively.部分倒装堪称经典：Besides, we’d better talk with our parents, teachers or classmates, who may help us out when we are in trouble.非限制性定语从句用于句中；Finally, striking a good balance between study and rest keeps us energetic and a healthy diet is useful as well.动词不定式短语做主语；With these done,with的独立主格结构；另外，First, Meanwhile, Besides, as well.为文章增色添彩。

　　考点：考查书信式话题作文

　　【新疆兵团农二师华山中学2017届高三上学期学前考试】书面表达(满分25分)……..

　　你的建议

　　注意：

　　对所给要点注意陈述，不要简单翻译。

　　词数110左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：have interactive activities 进行互动活动

　　Recently, we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.

　　【答案】

　　Recently, we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun. Most students believe that there are many ways to do so. First of all, we can have more interactive activities in class, such as discussions, interviews, story-telling and role-play. In this way, we can have more fun learning English. Secondly, we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people, whether they are English teachers or classmates, foreigners or Chinese, because using English is the best way to learn.

　　These ideas sound reasonable and practical. From my experience, there are many other interesting and relaxing ways. For example, we can listen to English songs and watch English movies. We can also watch English programs on TV or join English clubs or make English pen friends on the Internet.

　　All in all, what we need is more free time and more space.

　　【亮点说明】Recently, we had a discussion on how to make learning English relaxing and fun.运用宾语从句；First of all, we can have more interactive activities in class, such as discussions, interviews, story-telling and role-play. 运用并列句；From my experience, there are many other interesting and relaxing ways.运用固定句式；Secondly, we need to find more opportunities to communicate in English with people, whether they are English teachers or classmates, foreigners or Chinese, because using English is the best way to learn.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。

　　考点：考查话题作文

　　书面表达

　　众所周知，课堂是每个学生实现梦想的地方，然而，有一部分同学并没有很好地利用它。请以How should we make good use of classes?为题，写一篇文章，应包含以下要点：

　　1简要说明课堂的意义；

　　2目前课堂中存在的主要问题；

　　3分析原因并提出建议。

　　1. 可根据内容需要适当拓展，以使行文连贯；

　　2. 词数左右。【亮点说明】此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。

　　考点：考查话题作文

　　【山东省潍坊中学2017届高三上学期开学考试】书面表达 (满分25分)

　　假如你是李华，你校的学校美国乔治中学要招聘一名学生外联部长，主要负责与其联系和接待等工作。条件是英语水平高，能熟练操作计算机，热心服务。请你写一封自荐信。

　　词：外联部长director of foreign liaison department

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100左右

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。【答案】

　　【亮点说明】此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。

　　考点：考查作文

　　书面表达（满分25分）某中学英文报正举办“The Season I Like Best”的征文活动，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，内容应包括：

　　你最喜欢的季节；

　　你喜欢该季节的两条理由（如：气候、景色、活动、感受……）.

　　注意： 1. 词数100左右；

　　2. 题目已为你写好；

　　3. 行文连贯，语篇完整；

　　4. 文中不得透露个人真实信息。Spring is the season which I like best.

　　Spring is the most beautiful season in a year. The weather gets warmer, and the days get longer. Everything begins to grow. Trees turn green. At the beginning, they are light green. Each leaf seems to be cleaned by spring wind. Many kinds of flowers start to come out. They are colorful, red, yellow, orange and white. They give the earth a pretty coat. The fields and meadows are covered with fresh green grass. Rivers pass through the countries and the cities quietly. Look! The swallows are coming back again. They are flying to the south in spring, because the weather is warmer in the south. At the same time, bears wake up from their long winter sleep. Cats begin mewing. Dogs begin barking. The forests are filled with the songs of birds. All the sounds on the earth are like music. Later, most of the animals will get married and have babies. New lives tell us that: this year is better than ever before.

　　考点：写作。

　　（25分）

　　假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将升入高中，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：

　　1. 与老师交流，征求老师意见；

　　2. 上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；

　　3. 课后积极完成作业，巩固知识。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　【答案】

　　Dear Jim,

　　I’m delighted to hear that you’ll be a senior student. Now, I’d like to share my study tips with you.

　　First, you’d better communicate with your teachers regularly. In this way, they may offer some great advice on both your study and life. Second, why not involve yourself in each class actively, listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review later? Third, it’s a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.

　　I sincerely hope my advice can be helpful to you and that you can enjoy your new school life.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：假定你是高中学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim即将升入高中，想让你给他一些学习建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1. 与老师交流，征求老师意见；

　　2. 上课积极参与讨论，专心听讲，做好笔记；3. 课后积极完成作业，巩固知识。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　【亮点说明】语言简练，段落清晰，布局合理，运用高级句子。I’m delighted to hear that you’ll be a senior student.使用宾语从句；take notes carefully so that you can review later?使用目的状语从句；it’s a good idea to do your homework on time soon after school, which will help you practice what you have learned and make it fresh in your mind.动词不定式做真正的主语，句中并运用非限制性定语从句和宾语从句；另外，First, Second, why not involve yourself in的运用为文章增色添彩。

　　考点：考查电子邮件式话题作文

　　【四川省双流中学2017届高三9月月考】书面表达（满分25分）

　　11.你校将举办主题为“未来工作畅想”的征文活动。请你根据下面所给要点写一篇英语短文。

　　1．你梦想的工作（1点）；

　　2．你的兴趣或特长(两点)；

　　3．该工作的重要性（两点）。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　As a senior three student, I often imagine what I will be doing in the future.

　　【答案】

　　As a senior three student, I often imagine what I will be doing in the future. ①Talking of my dream job, I expect to be an English teacher for the following reasons.

　　②First, I'm an energetic outgoing girl/boy with great patience. That's what makes a qualified teacher, in my opinion. ③Besides, I am crazy about the English language, and I am doing quite well. ④Above all, teachers are generally respected and wellpaid. With two vacations each year, I may enjoy more relaxing time. ⑤As a responsible girl/boy, I hope to take up a job which is beneficial to society. Being a good teacher may influence more students to shoulder their responsibilities and contribute to their country.

　　⑥In short, I'll work even harder to become a popular English teacher.

　　【解析】

　　试题分析：你校将举办主题为“未来工作畅想”的征文活动。请你根据下面所给要点写一篇英语短文。1．你梦想的工作（1点）；2．你的兴趣或特长(两点)；该工作的重要性（两点）。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语短文，采用三段式，要点突出，结构严谨，布局合理，句中使用高级句子。Talking of my dream job, I expect to be an English teacher for the following reasons.现在分词做时间状语；That's what makes a qualified teacher, in my opinion.句中运用表语从句；teachers are generally respected and wellpaid.被动语态用在句中；I hope to take up a job which is beneficial to society. 非限制性定语从句巧妙运用；Being a good teacher may influence more students to shoulder their responsibilities and contribute to their country.动名词作主语；另外，First, Besides, Above all, With two vacations each year, As a responsible girl/boy, In short,的使用为文章增色添彩。

　　考点：考查话题作文

　　【贵州省遵义航天高级中学2017届高三第一次模拟】书面表达（满分25分）

　　11.每年都有许多人外出旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英文报社正在举行以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请你给报社写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：

　　1. 尊重习俗；

　　2. 不高声喧哗；

　　3. 其他

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3. 开头和结尾语已为你写好，不计入词总数。

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’ve read your discussions on how to behave properly while traveling. _______________

　　【答案】

　　Dear Editor,

　　I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly while traveling. Every year, a great many holidaymakers go out for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.

　　In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act. Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.

　　【解析】

　　【亮点说明】本文是一篇书信，呼吁大家做一名文明游客。语句通顺，内容齐全，有个人观点，并在句中使用高级句子。While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big concern.状语从句和非限制性定语从句完美结合；How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.疑问代词加动词不定式在句中做主语；if we travel abroad, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country, so we need to be cautious about how we act.并列句中包含着条件状语从句；Only in this way can we enjoy our trips and have beautiful memories as well.部分倒装经典运用；另外；In my opinion, First, Besides, Also, More importantly, as well.的运用为文章增色添彩、

　　考点：考查话题作文

　　【广东省仲元中学2017届高三9月月考】假设你是李华，在美国的某中学做交流生。你的同学对中国宴请赴约的习俗很感兴趣， 特请你用英语写一篇发言稿， 介绍中国的宴请习俗。内容包括：

　　宴请场所， 就餐习俗， 饮酒习俗， 宴会结束

　　注意：1.词数120左右，信的开头和结束语已经为你写好（不计入总词数）

　　2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯

　　3.参考词汇： banquet 宴会

　　Ladies and gentlemen,

　　I feel greatly honored to be here to tell you something about Chinese banquet customs. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful to you. Thank you for listening.

　　【答案】

　　Ladies and gentlemen,

　　I feel greatly honored to be here to tell you something about Chinese banquet customs. Firstly, banquets are usually held in private rooms in restaurants which have been reserved for the purpose. Guests will be met at the door and led to the banquet room where they will be guided to their places. Occasions are rare when guests sit where they please. Secondly, while at banquets, guests don’t begin to eat until the host raises his chopsticks. And it’s rude to stop eating in the middle of a banquet. Drinking also takes an important place during a Chinese banquet. As a Chinese saying goes, “There is no banquet without wine.” Banquets always begin with a toast, with the host expressing his welcome. Finally, when the last dish is finished, the banquet has officially ended. Generally, the host will say good-bye to everyone at the door and stay longer to pay the bill.

　　I hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful to you. Thank you for listening.

　　【亮点说明】本文是一篇发言稿，语言流畅，布局合理，运用高级句子。Firstly, banquets are usually held in private rooms in restaurants which have been reserved for the purpose.句中使用定语从句；Guests will be met at the door and led to the banquet room where they will be guided to their places.一般将来时态的被动语态和where引导的定语从句完美结合；Occasions are rare when guests sit where they pleasewhen引导的分割定语从句和where引导的地点状语从句同句出现；Secondly, while at banquets, guests don’t begin to eat until the host raises his chopsticks.not---until---引导时间状语从句；Drinking also takes an important place during a Chinese banquet.动名词作主语；As a Chinese saying goes, “There is no banquet without wine.”as引导非限制性定语从句。总之，本文多处运用高级句子，为文章增色添彩。

　　考点：考查话题作文

　　【河北省武邑中学2017届高三上学期第一次调研】书面表（满分25分）

　　假设你是李。你的加拿大笔友卡尔想了解中国流行的广场舞（square dance）的相关情况。请你用英语给他写封回信，要点包括：

　　1．跳广场舞的时间、地点、参与人员等；

　　2．广场舞流行的原因；

　　3．广场舞引起的争议。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100；

　　2．开头和结尾已经写出，不计入总词数；

　　3．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear Carl,

　　I’m delighted to hear from you and I will tell you what you’re curious about.

　　.......

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　Dear Carl,

　　I’m delighted to hear from you and I will tell you what you’re curious about. Square dance becomes more popular than anytime before. However, it’s a little different from the dance you are familiar with. In the morning or after dinner, people, especially elderly women, will gather in squares to dance to popular music. More and more young people are also joining in now.

　　There are many reasons behind its popularity. First of all, China has made great progress in its social and economical development in the past decades, and people have more time and energy to enjoy themselves. Besides, doing the square dance is a good way for people to get fit.

　　However, because dancers play loud music and occupy lots of public places, they annoy many people. Maybe square dancers need to make some changes.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　【解析】

　　【亮点说明】

　　1.使用高级句型：包含定语从句的句子However, it’s a little different from the dance you are familiar with. 然而，广场舞和你熟悉的舞蹈之间由一些不同；More and more young people are also joining in now现在越来越多的年轻人也加入了. 2.使用了过渡词语：First of all，Besides, However等。. 3.使用了重要短语：join in 加入； made great progress取得很大的进步；enjoy themselves玩的开心；make some changes做出改变。.

　　【考点】考查提纲作文

　　【湖北省孝感高级中学2017届高三9月调考】书面表达（满分25分）

　　面对繁重的学业负担，很多学生出现了不同程度的心理和身体方面的不适。鉴于此种情况，中学生应该学会放松。假如你是中学生李华，请以“How to Relax Ourselves”为题写一篇文章给《21世纪英语报》投稿。内容包括：

　　1．为什么要学会自我放松；

　　2．自我放松的途径（如看电视、上网、体育锻炼、旅游等）；

　　3．你更喜欢哪种自我放松方式及原因。

　　注意：1．词数100左右；

　　2．文章开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　How to Relax Ourselves

　　Faced with heavy learning burdens, many of us students ___________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________

　　【答案】

　　How to Relax Ourselves

　　Faced with heavy learning burdens, many of us students often feel tired both psychologically and mentally. If the situation continues, it will have a negative influence on our life and study. In view of this, we are supposed to learn to relax ourselves. As you know, there are various ways to relax ourselves, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet, taking regular exercise and traveling.

　　As for me, I prefer surfing the Internet in my spare time. For one thing, the Internet provides me with a wide range of activities for relaxation. Sometimes I keep track of the latest news as an entertainment. I also play computer games to relax myself. For another, the Internet gives me easy access to making friends with people at home and abroad. Furthermore, the vivid pictures on the Internet can greatly refresh me when I feel tired.

　　【亮点说明】

　　1.使用高级句型：包含as引导定语从句的句子As you know, there are various ways to relax ourselves, such as watching TV, surfing the Internet, taking regular exercise and traveling.；As for me, I prefer surfing the Internet in my spare time.就我而言，我更喜欢空闲时间上网。2.使用了过渡词语：For one thing，For another， Furthermore等。. 3.使用了重要短语：are supposed to应该；In view of this鉴于此； As for me就我而言；provides sb with给某人提供。.

　　【考点】考查提纲作文