2017届山东省长岛县高考英语一轮短文改错训练：6（含解析）

　　山东长岛县2017高考英语一轮短文改错选练

　　短文改错----记叙文

　　2015届浙江省温州市十校联合体（温州中学等）高三上学期期初联考

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分1 0分）

　　下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不给分。

　　It can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now. At the end of 2002, there were 20 millions mobile phone users. By 2005 a number reached up to 30 million. People have found mobile phones convenience. They can get in touch to each other whenever and wherever they like. There’re different functions to meeting different needs, such as surf the Internet. However, it may bring us some trouble. For an example, the radiation from the phone may do harm our health. In spite of this, the number of people having mobile phones are increasing steadily.

　　【答案】【】

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　　【】1. It→As

　　正如我们看见的，现在中国越来越多的人拥有手机。这里是非限制性定语从句，用As引导。

　　2. millions→million  到2002年底，有2千万的手机用户。数词后面加million

　　3.a→the到2005年，这个数字到了3千万。这里是特指“手机用户的数量”，a→the

　　4.convenience→convenient人们发现手机很方便，使用find +宾语+形容词：convenience→convenient

　　5. to ---with

　　get in touch with sb ,与某人取得联系。

　　6. meeting→meet有不同的功能满足不同的需求。这里是不定式做目的状语

　　7. surf→surfing such as后面接动名词： surf→surfing

　　8.去掉an For example“例如”：去掉an

　　9.our前加to手机的辐射会对我们的健康造成伤害。Do harm to“对…造成伤害”，our前加to

　　10.are→is 拥有手机的人的数量还在稳定上升。主语是the number of…，谓语是单数：are→is

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两赴，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin．Therefore, I couldn't understand "real music"．After I

　　graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool．l will never forget the day on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store． There I saw a guitar player playing the guitar, which I really enjoyed．He became my the first guitar teacher．It took me such a long time choose a guitar among several wonderful model．Now the guitar is the most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

　　【参考答案】短文改错

　　When I was a child, I spent more than ten years learn the violin. Therefore, I couldn’ t

　　learning

　　However

　　understand “real music”. After I graduated at high school, a friend of mine suggested that we

　　from

　　started to learn the guitar because we all thought it was cool. I will never forget the day

　　start

　　both

　　on that we went to buy guitars in the guitar store. There I saw a guitar player playing the

　　which

　　guitar, which I really enjoyed. He became my the first guitar teacher. It took me such

　　a long time∧choose a guitar among several wonderful model. Now the guitar is the

　　to

　　models

　　most importantly part of my life and I practice it every day.

　　Important

　　2017模拟短文改错LMother’s Day was around the corner. My good friend

　　1. _____

　　Alice, Jenny and I get together, discussing what we should do to

　　2. ______

　　our respect for. Alice was planning to buy some flowers with

　　3. ______

　　his pocket money in honor of her mother. Jenny was going to buy

　　4. ______

　　vegetables to cook delicious dinner for her family on that day, because

　　5. _____

　　she wanted to experience how many her mother does for her family 6. ______

　　every day. As for me, I’d like to make a greeting card, said

　　7. ______

　　“Happy Mother’s Day”, in which I would also tell my mother

　　8. ______

　　to pay attention to health or promise her to study harder.

　　9. ______

　　We are looking forward to Mother’s Day. 10. ______

　　【参考答案及解析】

　　1．friend --- friends

　　考查名词的单复数。根据后为可知应是两人，故用复数形式。

　　．get --- got

　　考查动词时态。根据上文可知事情发生在过去，故用一般过去时。

　　．去掉for

　　考查介词的用法。此处what作do的宾语，for是多余的。

　　．his --- her

　　考查代词指代一致。根据文意Alice是女名，故用her。

　　cook 后加 a

　　考查冠词的用法。此处dinner是可数名词，其前应加a。

　　．many --- much

　　考查词义的区别。此处do much for为。。。做得多。

　　．said --- saying

　　考查现在分词作定语。此处相当于定语从句which says “Happy Mother’s Day”

　　8．in --- on考查介词的用法。此处on which相当于on the card。

　　．or --- and

　　考查句意理解。此处and表并列。

　　．V经分析本句正确。

　　There is a teacher who I can never forget her in my life. That

　　76.________

　　was in my old days whenever I was in the middle school and I

　　77.________

　　once had lots of teachers who were very strict to us except

　　78.________

　　one female who was young, pretty as well kind-hearted.

　　79.________

　　It is very hard of me to describe what she was like, but she had

　　80.________

　　her own personality that quickly conquered us all. She asked

　　81.________

　　us to elect our monitor. She let us to decide where to go for

　　82.________

　　an outing. She didn’t get angry even if any of them was late for

　　83.________

　　school. It was not long until most of us behaved very well

　　84.________

　　because we did find her an elderly sister who we can rely on.

　　85.________

　　【参考答案】76. 去掉her

　　77.

　　whenever → when

　　78. to

　　→

　　with

　　79. well ∧ as

　　80. of → for

　　81.

　　√

　　82. 去掉第二个 to

　　83. them → us

　　84. until → before

　　85.

　　can →

　　could

　　第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）

　　I am worker at the tap water company. I find that

　　76.____________

　　people were becoming more and more careful about

　　77._____________

　　health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear

　　78.____________

　　and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.

　　79.____________

　　Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the

　　80.____________

　　protection of water resources .For the sake of our

　　81.____________

　　health ,we should take good care our water resources

　　82.____________

　　and environment .There is a saying “whether we do

　　83.____________

　　not careful protect our environment the last drops

　　84.____________

　　of water we will see them will be our own tears.”

　　85.____________

　　【参考答案】

　　I am ∧worker at the tap water company. I find that

　　76.______a ______

　　people were becoming more and more careful about

　　77.______are____

　　health .If the tap water appear a little bit unclear

　　78.____appears_

　　and muddy ,the telephone will ring again and again.

　　79._____or_____

　　Fortunately, people do not pay equal attention to the

　　80.__Unfortunately_

　　protection of water resources .For the sake of our

　　81.___ √_____

　　health ,we should take good care∧ our water resources

　　82.______of___

　　and environment .There is a saying “whether we do

　　83.____if_____

　　not careful protect our environment the last drops

　　84.___careful___

　　of water we will see them will be our own tears.”

　　85. them

　　【短文改错】

　　Dear Anish,

　　Here are the information about Manchester University

　　1.______

　　It is about 200 miles far away from London and it

　　2______

　　has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school

　　3____

　　or near the school.They have all sorts of course.

　　4___ ___

　　I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you

　　5___

　　are particular interested in human rights.So I will

　　6____

　　see that there is anything on their website

　　7____

　　I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport

　　8____

　　when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he

　　9___

　　has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look

　　10___

　　forward to seeing you again.

　　【参考答案】

　　Dear Anish,

　　Here are the information about Manchester University.___is___

　　It is about 200 miles far away from London and it ___far___

　　has a very big schoolyard.You can live in the school__right__

　　or near the school.They have all sorts of course.___courses___

　　I`m sure you will find one you like it.I know you __it__

　　are particular interested in human rights.So I will ___particularly__

　　see that there is anything on their website ___if/whether__

　　I will send my friend Charlie meet you at the airport _to___

　　when you arrived.You met him a few years ago, but he __arrive_

　　has changed a lot since then.Both your aunt or I look __and_

　　forward to seeing you again.

　　【2015高考复习】阅读理解 “One City One Book” is a generic name (通称) for a community reading program that attempts to get everyone in a city to read and discuss the same book.Popular book picks have been Harper Lee’s To Kill a Mockingbird，Ernest Gaines’s A Lesson Before Dying，and Ray Bradbury’s Fahrenheit 451.

　　“One City One Book” programs take the idea of a localized book discussion club and expand it to cover a whole city.The first such program was “If All of Seattle Read the Same Book” in 1998，started by Nancy Pearl at Seattle Public Library’s Washington Center for the Book.The book chosen for the program was The Sweet Hereafter by Russell Banks，written in 1991.Other cities copied the idea，and the Library of Congress listed 404 programs occurring in 2007.

　　Each city’s program has its own goals；these typically include building a sense of community and promoting literacy.Nancy Pearl warns against expecting too much from a program：“Keep in mind that this is a library program，it’s not an exercise in civics，and that it’s not intended to have literature cure the racial divide.This is about a work of literature.”

　　Programs typically involve more than having everyone read the same book.Some other activities that have been included are：book discussion sessions，scholarly lectures on the book or related topics，a visit by the author，exhibits，related arts programming (especially showing a movie of the book if there is one)，and integration into school curricula.In Boston the “One City One Story” program used shorter stories and distributed tens of thousands of free copies of the story over the course of a month.

　　American Library Association puts out a detailed step­by­step guide on how to organize a local program，including the critical step of picking the one book.The Center for the Book at the Library of Congress tracks all known programs and the books they have used.

　　【语篇解读　本文是说明文，介绍了美国开展的“一个城市，一本书”的读书活动。

　　4．“One City One Book” programs________.

　　A．ask everyone in a city to donate one book

　　B．can rid a city of racial divide through reading

　　C．choose short stories for people to read

　　D．encourage everyone in a city to read and discuss the same book

　　解析　细节理解题。从文章第一段第一句可知，这个活动旨在让同一个城市的人们读同一本书并共同评论这本书。

　　答案　D

　　5．We know from the second paragraph that “One City One Book” programs________.

　　A．became popular very quickly

　　B．have been held more than 400 times in Seattle

　　C．were sponsored by the Library of Congress

　　D．reached its peak in 2007

　　解析　推理判断题。从文章第二段可知，当西雅图在1998年首先推出这个活动以后，其他城市也纷纷效仿，到2007年这个活动已经在400多个城市推出，可见这个活动流行得非常迅速。

　　答案　A

　　6．We can infer from the third paragraph that Nancy Pearl________.

　　A．expects much from the programs

　　B．didn’t expect that the programs would run so well

　　C．has a practical attitude towards the programs

　　D．believes the programs will push forward community building

　　解析　推理判断题。从文章第三段中Nancy Pearl的话可知，她警告人们不要对这个活动期望太多，说明她对这个活动持有十分务实的态度。

　　答案　C

　　7．What kind of role does American Library Association play in the programs?

　　A．It picks out the city which runs the programs well.

　　B．It gives free books to the host city.

　　C．It gives a practical guide to the programs.

　　D．It keeps a record of all known programs.

　　解析　细节理解题。从文章最后一段可知，美国图书馆协会负责具体指导活动的开展。

　　答案　C