2017届山东省长岛县高考英语一轮短文改错训练：9（含解析）

　　山东长岛县2017高考英语一轮短文改错选练

　　（2016高考模拟选编）短文改错下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Three weeks ago I bought the electronic dictionary at a shop.But I hadn't used it for several day before I found it didn't work.So I went to the shop，but only to be told that the problem could not be solved unless it was sent back the factory where it was made.Then I did as I was told with any delay.Unfortunately，the factory promised to repair the dictionary and sent it back in a week.Two weeks has past，but I haven't yet received one.I have no idea why things are like this.I'm looking forward to receive my dictionary as soon as possible.

　　参考答案　

　　Three weeks ago I bought

　　electronic dictionary at a shop.But I hadn't used it for several

　　before I found it didn't work.So I went to the shop， only to be told that the problem could not be solved unless it was sent back

　　the factory where it was made.Then I did as I was told

　　any delay.，the factory promised to repair the dictionary and

　　it back in a week.Two weeks has ，but I haven't yet received .I have no idea why things are like this.I'm looking forward to

　　my dictionary as soon as possible.

　　短文改错下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线()

　　修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Yesterday，fifty American students came to visit our school.We gather at the school gate at 8 o'clock to give them a warmly welcome.Then we had a get－together in the reading room.Our headmaster introduced our school to them.And then us，the youth from America and China，chatted and exchanged gifts for each other.At nine thirty，we showed them about our school：our classroom building，the lab building，and the factory running by our school.Then it followed a friendly basketball game.All of us had wonderful time，but we promised to keep in touch with each other from then on.I was pleased what I was brave enough to chat with them in English.

　　答案　

　　Yesterday，fifty American students came to visit our school.We

　　at the school gate at 8 o' clock to give them a

　　welcome.Then we had a get－together in the reading room.Our headmaster introduced our school to them.And then ，the youth from America and China，chatted and exchanged gifts

　　each other.At nine thirty，we showed them

　　our school：our classroom building，the lab building，and the factory

　　by our school.Then

　　followed a friendly basketball game.All of us had

　　wonderful time， we promised to keep in touch with each other from then on.I was pleased

　　what I was brave enough to chat with them in English.

　　短文改错 One Sunday morning, there were much people in the park. In a shop, a woman was buying an ice-cream while a young man behind her took his handbag away. She shouted, “Stop thief! He’s robbed me from my bag!” Hearing this, a few people began to run after him. There was an old man sit quietly on a bench nearby, reading a newspaper. As the robber was running passed him, the old man quickly picked up his umbrella and put between the robber’s legs. The young man fell down on the ground hardly. Soon two policeman came in a police car and arrested him. The woman thanked for the old man, and the people around praised the old man for his cleverness.

　　【参考答案】4.

　　1. much—many

　　2. while—when

　　3. his—her

　　4. from—of

　　5. sit—sitting

　　6. passed—past

　　7. put后加it 8. hardly—hard

　　9. policeman—policemen

　　10. thanked后的for去掉

　　假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。

　　Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at

　　that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had

　　difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help

　　of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We

　　can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in

　　return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

　　【参考答案】5.

　　Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that

　　lesson

　　great

　　moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had

　　had

　　difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help

　　walking

　　and

　　of my classmates. As∧ result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We

　　a

　　worse

　　can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in

　　their

　　return. In this way,

　　we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

　　With

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!

　　【参考答案】6.

　　1. deep—deeply,

　　2. the 去掉 3. bad---worse

　　4. direction---directions或者前面all----any

　　5. rush----rushed

　　6. knowing----knowing

　　7. pick后加up

　　8.

　　missed---missing / lost

　　9. your----our

　　10. what---that

　　【2015高考复习】阅读理解

　　Public bookshelves are appearing across Germany on street corners，city squares and in suburban supermarkets.In these free­for­all libraries，people can grab whatever they want to read，and leave behind anything they want for others.There’s no need to register，no due date，and you can take or give as many as you want.“This project is aimed at everyone who likes to read.It is open for everybody，”

　　Michael

　　Aubermann，one of the organizers of the free book exchange said.

　　The western city’s latest public shelf was put up next to Bayenturm.It is the fourth free shelf that Aubermann’s group，the Cologne Citizen’s Foundation，has placed outside.“We set up our other outdoor shelves last year and it’s been working really well，”

　　said Aubermann.The public bookshelves，which are usually financed by donations and cared for by local volunteer groups，have appeared independently of each other in many cities，suburbs and villages.Each shelf holds around 200 books and it takes about six weeks for a complete turnover，with all the old titles replaced by new ones.

　　Even commercial book stores and online book sellers seem to support the idea of free book exchanges.“We see this project rather as a sales promotion than as competition，”

　　said Elmar Muether.“If books are present everywhere，it helps our business，too.”

　　So far，the Cologne book group has had few problems with damage or other problems.Aubermann said，“Propaganda (宣传) is the only kind of literature we do not allow here.”

　　At another bookshelf in the Bayenthal neighborhood，the lower shelves are reserved for children’s literature only.“It is important that we make it easy for everyone to participate in this ‘reading culture on the street’—from old readers to kids to immigrants，” Aubermann said.

　　While most of the shelves have so far been put up in upscale_neighborhoods，Aubermann and the 20 volunteers who help look after the project are planning to put up future shelves in poor neighborhoods，where citizens often don’t have as much access to literature.

　　语篇解读　在德国的城市街角、广场和郊区超市，一排排公共书架出现在人们的视野中。你可以随意取阅或捐赠图书。这项免费换书活动得到了人们的支持。

　　1．Which of the following is TRUE about the public bookshelves?

　　A．People can take the books and leave their books at will.

　　B．People can’t borrow books unless they donate books.

　　C．People can borrow whatever they like after registering.

　　D．People have to return the books according to the required time.

　　解析　细节理解题。根据第一段中的“people can grab whatever they want to read，and leave behind anything they want for others.There’s no need to register，no due date，and you can take or give as many as you want.”可知，人们可以随意取阅或捐赠图书，不需要登记，也没有规定的还书时间。

　　答案　A

　　2．According to Aubermann，the public bookshelves________.

　　A．are financed by local volunteers

　　B．have been going well since their birth

　　C．were managed by the local government

　　D．will hold more books and take a shorter turnover

　　解析　细节理解题。由第二段中的“We set up our other outdoor shelves last year and it’s been working really well”可知，公共书架自诞生以来运行良好。根据第二段第四句话可知A项错误，C、D两项文中没有信息支持。

　　答案　B

　　3．The underlined phrase “upscale neighborhoods” refers to________.

　　A．communities that have many people

　　B．communities that have many tall buildings

　　C．communities that are free to live in

　　D．communities that are of high grade

　　解析　词义猜测题。根据后面的“poor neighborhoods”的对比可知，upscale neighborhoods指的是高档社区。

　　答案　D

　　4．Which might be the best title for the passage?

　　A．Public Reading Becomes Popular Worldwide

　　B．New Trends of Bookshelves in Germany

　　C．Public Bookshelves Spread Across Germany

　　D．Reading Culture on the Street in Europe

　　解析　标题概括题。综合本文内容可知，C项“公共书架遍布德国”最适合作为本文的标题。

　　答案　C阅读理解 “I’ve changed my mind.I wanted to have a telescope，but now I want my dad back.” Lucien Lawrence’s letter to his

　　father for Christmas written after his father had been knifed to

　　death outside his school gate，must have touched everyone’s

　　heart.Lucien went on to say that without his father he couldn’t see the stars in the sky.When those whom we love depart from us，we cannot see the stars for a while.

　　But Lucien，the stars are still there，and one day，when you are older and your tears have gone，you will see them again.And，in a strange way，I expect that you will find your father there，too，in your mind and heart.I find that my parents，who died years ago，still figure in many of my dreams and that I think of them perhaps more than I ever did when they were alive.I still live to please them and I’m still surprised by their reactions.I remember that when I became a professor，I was so proud，or rather so pleased with myself that I couldn’t wait to cable my parents.The reply was a long time in coming，but when it did，all my mother said was “I hope this means that now you will have more time for the children！” I haven’t forgotten.The values of my parents still live on.

　　It makes me pause and think about how I will live on in the hearts and minds of my children and of those for whom I care.Would I have been as ready as Philip Lawrence have been to face the aggressors，and to lay down my life for those in my care？How many people would want me back for Christmas？It’s a serious thought，one to give me pause.

　　I pray silently，sometimes，in the dead of night，that ancient cry of a poet “Deliver my soul from the sword，and my darling from the power of the dog.” Yet I know the death comes to us all，and sometimes comes suddenly.We must therefore plan to live forever，but live as if we will die tomorrow.We live on，I’m sure，in the lives of those we love，and therefore we ought to have a care for what they will remember and what they will treasure.If more parents knew this in their hearts to be true，there might be fewer knives on our streets today.

　　【语篇解读　一个孩子在圣诞节对已经去世的父亲撕心裂肺的呼唤让人情不能已，潸然泪下。孩子，虽然亲人与我们两世相隔，可是他们永远活在我们心中，恍如昨天。虽然世人难免一死，但是如果大家互相关怀，没有了暴力和谋杀，世界岂不更加美好？

　　1．According to the whole text we can see that the first paragraph________.

　　A．puts forward the subject of the text

　　B．shows the author’s pity on the kid

　　C．relates a kid wrote a letter to his father

　　D．makes a clear statement of the author’ views

　　解析　文章结构题。第一段从一个孩子的一封信谈起，下文则动之以情，晓之以理，娓娓道来，委婉地纠正了孩子的观点，由此可知第一段在文中的作用是引出话题。

　　答案　A

　　2．In the second paragraph the author mainly wants to explain to us________.

　　A．how much he misses his parents now

　　B．why his parents often appear in his dreams

　　C．when Lucien will get over all his sadness

　　D．how proud he was when he succeeded in life

　　解析　段落大意题。作者在本段不惜笔墨，用自己的亲身体会倾诉了对父母的怀念之情以及父母对自己的深刻影响，再结合本段最后一句的内容可知B项正确。

　　答案　B

　　3．What feelings did the author’s mother express in her reply?

　　A．Proud. B．Happy.

　　C．Disappointed. D．Worried.

　　解析　推理判断题。作者因成为教授而非常自豪，无比高兴，迫不及待地想要把这个好消息告诉父母，可是母亲却委婉地提醒作者要多花点时间陪陪孩子，由此可推知，她很担心。

　　答案　D

　　4．In the author’s opinion，the value of a person’s life is________.

　　A．to leave a precious memory to those he loves and cares for

　　B．to have a high sense of duty to the whole society

　　C．to care for what others will remember and treasure

　　D．to share happiness and sadness with his family

　　解析　推理判断题。根据第三段第一句的内容以及最后一段后半部分的内容可推知，作者认为人生的价值在于给自己爱和在乎的人留下珍贵的回忆。

　　答案　A

　　5．What does the writer mean by mentioning the sentence taken from an old poem?

　　A．Call on criminals and murderers to lay down their guns.

　　B．Advise parents to stay with their children safely at home.

　　C．Spend every day meaningfully while alive.

　　D．Try to keep violence and murder far away from society.

　　解析　推理判断题。诗歌的大意是“求你救我的灵魂脱离刀剑，救我的生命脱离犬类”，而且作者是在深夜中祈祷，再结合本段后半部分的内容可推知，作者引用该诗句意在让社会远离暴力和谋杀。

　　答案　D