2017届山东省长岛县高考英语一轮短文改错训练：12（含解析）

　　山东长岛县2017高考英语一轮短文改错选练

　　【2015届河北省石家庄二中高三开学考试】

　　短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　Patience is of great important in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possibly waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience

　　【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文

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　　【答案解析】

　　1. importance

　　考查固定句型。句意：耐心在我们的生活中非常的重要。Be of importance 等于 be

　　important 。

　　2. waited for (加for) 考查固定短语。Wait for sth 等待。。

　　3. past-passed

　　考查动词的时态。句意：30分钟过去了，但没有一辆车来。根据but no bus came用一般过去时。

　　4. on foot

　　考查固定短语。句意：沮丧又着急，我决定步行去。On foot 步行

　　5. when-than

　　考查固定句型。No sooner ...than 一。。就

　　6. take the next bus

　　考查固定短语。 句意：如果我选择下一辆车的话，我还得再等待三十分钟。The next bus 下一趟车。

　　7. another 30 minutes

　　考查搭配。句意：如果我选择下一辆车的话，我还得再等待三十分钟。Another 30 minutes 再三十分钟。

　　8. did I realize

　　考查倒装 句意：只有这时我才意识到我的问题。Only +状语 +部分倒装 。

　　9. put后it去掉

　　考查定语从句。句意：耐心会浪费掉所有你所投入的努力。that we have put in 是all the effort的定语从句。

　　10. losing

　　考查固定短语。Close to 靠近, to是介词，故后面用动名词的形式。

　　2017模拟短文改错QWhen people think about precious things, they usually

　　think about money or jewelry. I am not very rich, and I have 1.______

　　something very preciously in my room. It’s not a CD player or 2. ______

　　a cellphone. It's the view from my window. I’m lucky live 3. _______

　　near a park. My window faces with the tops of the trees in 4. _______

　　the park. Below the tree I can see children on the playground, 5. ________

　　young couples walked quietly, mothers with children, and 6. ________

　　old people sitting on the beach. The whole world is before 7. ________

　　their eyes. My classmates like to go online or listen to music, 8. _______

　　but when I have a free time, I just sit on the chair and 9. ________

　　enjoyed the most precious thing in my room: the view. 10. ________

　　【参考答案及解析】

　　1. and → but 考查句间的逻辑关系。根据语境此处表转折用but。

　　. preciously → precious 考查形容词的用法。修饰不定代词用形容词且放在其后。

　　. lucky后加to考查形容词的用法。此处考查短语be lucky to do sth。

　　. 去with 考查介词的用法。此处face是及物动词，故不用介词with。

　　. tree → trees 考查名词的单复数。根据语境应为多棵树。

　　. walked → walking考查现在分词作宾补。此处考查see sb doing sth。

　　. 正确

　　经分析本句

　　8. their → my 考查代词指代一致。根据文意应为“在我眼前”。

　　. 去a

　　考查冠词的用法。解题关键：free time是不可数名词，其前不能用a。

　　. enjoyed → enjoy 考查动词时态。根据语境应为一般现在时。

　　2017高考英语模拟试题改编】

　　短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，瀚你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加:在缺词处加一个翻词符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

　　修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意:1、每处锗误及修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　On the Children's Day last year, our city held an interested activity. In the

　　activity children and their parents act as the rich and the poor. In the dinner, the rich

　　could have delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge. Parents all

　　hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They hoped that our children

　　could taught a lesson from the dinner. Now many people on the earth don't have enough

　　food and clothes. Every day only one half the world can enjoy enough food. The activity

　　was held make the families understand the differences between the poor and the rich and

　　also make the parents know that too much material life won"t always do good for the children.

　　【参考答案】短文改错

　　On the Children’s Day last year, our city held an interested activity. In the

　　the

　　interesting

　　activity children and their parents act as the rich and the poor. In the dinner, the rich

　　acted

　　could have delicious food, but the poor could only have breads with porridge. Parents all

　　bread

　　hoped to have the dinner for the poor with the children. They hoped that our children

　　their

　　could∧taught a lesson from the dinner. Now many people on the earth don’t have enough

　　be

　　food and clothes. Every day only one half∧the world can enjoy enough food. The activity

　　or

　　of

　　was held∧make the families understand the differences between the poor and the rich and

　　to

　　also make the parents know that too much material life won't always do good for the children.

　　for 改为to 或把do改为be

　　(2017·昆明市适应性检测)

　　We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people were crazy about instant fame and wealthy. To be honest, it is not bad be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as the example. Only after his hard works did he become successful. Or we can list more similar cases if need. What I do believe is that the process in which you try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy mostly.

　　【参考答案】：

　　We had a discussion on “overnightfame” last week. Nowadays, many people

　　crazy about instant fame and . To be honest, it is not bad

　　be famous or have a lot of money, but I don't agree to the view that people rise to fame overnight. We all know “easy come, easy go”. Let's take Li An as

　　example. Only after his hard

　　did he become successful.

　　we can list more similar cases if . What I do believe is

　　the process in which

　　try our best. It is what we have experienced along the way to success that we treasure and enjoy .

　　(2017·浙江省五校联考)

　　A young man called LowCarbon Brother become a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help reducing carbon dioxide in the air. For example, she always picks up some waste paper on the street or uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns up the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. Therefore, he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a simply life with so many modern invention around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming, but he at least can enjoy a healthy life.

　　【参考答案】：

　　A young man called LowCarbon Brother

　　a hit on the Internet in 2011. He suggests living a lowcarbon life, which means using less energy in our daily life so that we can help

　　carbon dioxide in the air. For example,

　　always picks up some waste paper on the street

　　uses the blank side to write something. While he is watching TV, he always turns

　　the screen brightness to the minimum and turns off the light. ， he goes to work by bike instead of driving. Some people think what he is doing is just a show. No one can live such a

　　life with so many modern

　　around us. As far as I am concerned, I am strongly in support

　　his idea and his behavior. Although what he is doing has no huge effect on global warming,

　　he at least can enjoy a healthy life.

　　短文改错

　　At Chinese New Year, my family and I have a very busy 76._____________

　　time. Two days before New Year’s Day, I went out with my

　　77. ____________

　　friends from school to the seafood restaurant in Pudong.

　　78. ____________

　　It was the noisiest restaurant I had ever been to, and the

　　79. ____________

　　food was delicious. After that, we went to shopping for new

　　80. ____________

　　clothes and found lots bargains. I visited my old teacher,

　　81. ____________

　　Mr. Smith. To my surprised, he said he didn’t find Chinese

　　82. ____________

　　New Year very excited. He was not even wearing new clothes! 83. ____________

　　Because we have so many tests this week, so I have to

　　84. ____________

　　start studying hard again now. I wish the holiday were long!

　　85. ____________

　　书面表达 （满分30分）

　　61. bunch

　　62. praise

　　63. permission

　　64. blame

　　65. consideration

　　66. differs

　　67. familiar

　　68. relief

　　69. delivered

　　70. gradually

　　71. misled

　　72. length

　　73. promoting

　　74.appointed

　　75. annoyed

　　76. have改为had

　　77. 此行无错。

　　78. the改为a。

　　79. and改为but。

　　80. 去掉to/shopping 改为shop。

　　81. lots 后加of。

　　82. surprised 改为surprise。

　　83. excited改为exciting。

　　84. 去掉第二个so。

　　85. long改为longer。

　　阅读理解

　　Finally，I entered the university.Because of my careful

　　savings，I did not have to work during the school years.Then，summer came and it was time to work harder than ever.I continued working as a waitress at night，instructed tennis camps several mornings a week and worked as a secretary for a few hours in the afternoons.I even decided to take a class at a community (社区) college.This class at the community college

　　saved me $650.It was an extremely tiring summer and made me anxious to return to my relatively easy life at the university.

　　During my second and

　　third years of undergraduate schooling，I decided to work about five hours per week in the campus (校园)admissions office answering phones.This provided a little spending money and kept me from drawing my savings

　　out.The

　　overall

　　situation

　　looked

　　hopeful

　　as

　　I approached my senior year as long as I could make as much money as I had the previous summer.I wanted to go to Israel to study for 3 weeks，but I hesitated in making this decision because it would cost me $1,600 more to get the credits in Israel.About two weeks later my mom called to tell me that I had $1,600 in the bank that I had forgotten about！One of my concerns about this trip was not only the cost，but the loss of time to make money；however，I made as much that summer in the ten weeks when I was at home as I had made during the fourteen weeks when I was at home the summer before.The way everything worked together to make this trip possible was one of the most exciting things that have ever happened to me.

　　This experience has shaped me in many important ways.The first thing that I learned was the importance of a strong work ethic (道德准则)．Working long hours did a lot to develop my character and helped me learn the value of a dollar.It also made me learn how to search for creative ways to settle difficult situations.

　　【语篇解读　作者非常勤奋地做着各种兼职工作，既锻炼了自己，又挣到了钱，为以后自我的发展奠定了良好的基础。

　　1．Where did the writer probably work part­time before attending the university?

　　A．In a restaurant.

　　B．In the tennis camps.

　　C．In a company.

　　D．In the campus admissions office.

　　解析　细节理解题。根据第一段中的“I continued working as a waitress at night”可知，作者上大学前在饭店工作过。

　　答案　A

　　2．The writer took a class at a community college mainly because________.

　　A．she wanted to save money

　　B．life there was relatively easy

　　C．summer time was tiring

　　D．it was required by the university

　　解析　细节理解题。根据第一段中的“This class at the community college saved me $650.”可知，作者是为了省钱。

　　答案　A

　　3．The writer’s major concern about the trip to Israel was that________.

　　A．her mother would not give her approval

　　B．she would fail to get credits in Israel

　　C．a well­paid summer job would be lost

　　D．$1,600 couldn’t be drawn out in time

　　解析　推理判断题。根据第二段中的“One of my concerns about this trip was not only the cost，but the loss of time to make money”可知，作者主要担心没有时间赚钱了，一分高薪的暑假工作失去了。

　　答案　C

　　4．The passage is mainly about how the writer________.

　　A．made money on the college campus

　　B．managed to make full use of her vacation

　　C．was forced to support herself by her mother

　　D．was shaped by working part­time through college

　　解析　主旨大意题。通读全文内容可知，本文主要讲述了作者通过做各种兼职工作，学到了很多东西，塑造了自己的性格，懂得了金钱的价值。

　　答案　D

　　阅读理解“Reconstituted” families are more and more common in the UK.

　　Steve and Debbie got married in 2001 and had two children，Lily and Alex.Unfortunately，Steve and Debbie’s marriage didn’t work out and they got divorced in 2006.The children live with Debbie.In 2008，Debbie remarried.Her new husband，Martin，has three children from his previous marriage and they visit Debbie，Martin，Lily and Alex at weekends.In addition，Debbie is pregnant with her third child.She’s expecting a boy who will be a half­brother to Lily and Alex and also to Martin’s three other children.

　　Confused？Debbie’s family arrangements might have seemed strange 30 years ago but nowadays this kind of “reconstituted” family is increasingly common in the UK.Almost half of all marriages in Britain end in divorce and over 40% of marriages are remarriages.More than 10% of all British children live with one birth parent and a stepparent—a parent who isn’t their biological mother or father.The traditional “nuclear” family of two parents and their children is not so traditional any more.

　　What does all of this mean for parents in these “reconstituted” families？“There

　　are

　　difficulties

　　and

　　challenges，”

　　says Debbie.“Different families have different routines and it can be difficult for children to move between their two families.Birthdays and holidays can be tricky.Where do the children go？Who should they spend their time with？Also，when my children are naughty it can be difficult for Martin to tell_them_off.Things that might be simple in a traditional family can be a bit more complicated.”

　　And how about the children？Martin’s eldest child，Ella，is 12.“I like my two families，” she says.“I live with my

　　mum but visit my dad quite often and I’m happy that my mum and dad get along OK.They’re not married any more but it’s good that they can still be friends.”

　　Of course divorce and separation are never easy but many families in the UK are finding ways to make family life work in new ways.

　　【语篇解读　本文介绍了英国出现越来越多的重组家庭这一社会现象。

　　5．Why did Steve and Debbie get separated?

　　A．They couldn’t support the children.

　　B．They couldn’t get along well.

　　C．They were both out of work.

　　D．They had serious economic problems.

　　解析　考查细节理解。根据第二段中的“Unfortunately，Steve and Debbie’s marriage didn’t work out and they got divorced in 2006.”可知，Steve和Debbie由于感情破裂而无法维系婚姻，并非因为经济问题或双双失业，更不是因为养不起孩子。

　　答案　B

　　6．We can learn from the text that a “nuclear” family ________.

　　A．has two birth parents and their children

　　B．has two birth parents and only one child

　　C．is traditional but complicated

　　D．doesn’t have any children

　　解析　考查细节理解。根据第三段最后一句“The traditional

　　‘nuclear’ family of two parents and their children is not so traditional any more.”可知答案为A项。

　　答案　A

　　7．What do the underlined words “tell them off” in Paragraph 4 most probably mean?

　　A．make them annoyed

　　B．send them to school

　　C．let out their secrets

　　D．talk angrily to them

　　解析　考查词义猜测。根据画线部分前面的“when my children are naughty”和第四段的最后一句“Things that might be simple in a traditional family can be a bit more complicated.”并结合生活常识可推知，由于Martin是孩子的继父，所以不能够对他们大声呵斥。tell sb.off意为“责骂、斥责某人”。

　　答案　D

　　8．What’s the text mainly about?

　　A．The difference between “marriage” and “remarriage”．

　　B．More and more people get divorced in the UK.

　　C．“Reconstituted”

　　families are becoming more and more in the UK.

　　D．The marriage situation is becoming severe.

　　解析　考查主旨大意。根据文章首句和全文内容可知，本文意在介绍英国出现越来越多的重组家庭这一社会现象，故答案为C项。

　　答案　C