【师说】2017届高考英语二轮复习强化训练：20短文改错3（含解析）

　　强化训练20　短文改错(二)

　　(45分钟，100分)

　　A

　　Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in a ordinary school. Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly­equipped

　　classroom,

　　I

　　found

　　the

　　teachers patiently and considerate. Besides, I was enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates.

　　Whenever I have difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top student in my class,

　　which greatly increased my confidence and got him motivated.

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given and how you make use for it that determines who you are.

　　答案：

　　Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in

　　ordinary school. Disappointin as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly­equipped

　　classroom,

　　I

　　found

　　the

　　teachers patientl and considerate. Besides, I

　　enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided

　　make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates.

　　Whenever I hav difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top studen in my class,

　　which greatly increased my confidence and got hi motivated.

　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given an how you make use fo it that determines who you are.

　　B

　　Long long ago, there lived a famous beauty who named Xishi. Since she suffered from heartburn, she would often frown in front of all neighbor.

　　A ugly girl, Dongshi, lived in the same village. She noticed this, thinking it very charming, and she also put her hand to her breast and frown in front of everyone. When the rich saw her, they closed their doors and would come out. But for the poor, they ran away, took their wives and children.

　　How a poor thing! She could admire Xishi's frown, but did not know why she was beautiful.

　　Later, this idiom is used to indicate the improper imitation that produce the reverse (相反的) effect.

　　答案：

　　Long long ago, there lived a famous beauty

　　named Xishi. Since she suffered from heartburn, she would often frown in front of all neighbo.

　　ugly girl, Dongshi, lived in the same village. She noticed this, thinking it very charming, and she also put her hand to her breast and frow in front of everyone. When the rich saw her, they closed their doors and woul

　　come out. Bu for the poor, they ran away, too their wives and children.

　　Ho a poor thing! She could admire Xishi's frown, but did not know why sh was beautiful.

　　Later, this idiom is used to indicate the improper imitation that produc the reverse (相反的) effect.

　　C

　　We hear from that you'll return to the United Kingdom for a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much during your absent！

　　Firstly, I'd like to express our gratitude about your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class! So we had decided to have a farewell party this Sunday for you. The party will start at 7：30 on Sunday evening in the classroom of Class 10, Grade 3 but will probably last about an hour. We all desires that you can come to join us in sing some English songs and have a good time together. At the end of the party, the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts, that are mostly made by ourselves.

　　We wish you safe journey back home! We are also expected you to come back to China soon.

　　答案：

　　We hear

　　that you'll return to the United Kingdom for a holiday soon. All the class will miss you very much during your absen！

　　Firstly, I'd like to express our gratitude abou your excellent teaching in our school and your care and love for our class! So we ha decided to have a farewell party this Sunday for you. The party will start at 7：30 on Sunday evening in the classroom of Class 10, Grade 3 bu will probably last about an hour. We all desire that you can come to join us in sin some English songs and have a good time together. At the end of the party, the monitor will present you some flowers and gifts, tha are mostly made by ourselves.

　　We wish you

　　safe journey back home! We are also expecte you to come back to China soon.

　　D

　　Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and me went home together after the school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knock down by a car. Therefore, the driver ran away. We ran over to find what the old lady's head was bleeding. She had already lost conscious. Immediately I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with it. Li Ming stopped a taxi immediate. Together we put the old lady into it and send her to the nearest hospital. The old lady saved and we also felt very pleased.

　　What is

　　more,

　　I

　　remembered the

　　car's number,

　　and the traffic

　　police

　　caught the

　　driver easily. Hear about it, our teacher praised us before all of our classmates.

　　答案：

　　Yesterday afternoon, Li Ming and m went home together after

　　school. Suddenly we saw an old lady knoc down by a car. Therefor， the driver ran away. We ran over to find

　　wha the old lady's head was bleeding. She had already lost consciou. Immediately I took out my handkerchief and covered the wound with it. Li Ming stopped a taxi immediat. Together we put the old lady into it and sen her to the nearest hospital. The old lady

　　saved and we also felt very pleased.

　　What is

　　more,

　　I

　　remembered the

　　car's number,

　　and the traffic

　　police

　　caught the

　　driver easily. Hea about it, our teacher praised us before all of our classmates.

　　E

　　This summer, I traveled with my parents, but our holiday wasn't very perfect.

　　We visited five city in China, but stayed in each of it for only one or two days.

　　We visited many places in historic interest, always in hurry. We were on the go almost every day. When we came back home, and we were tired.

　　It turned out what we had a terrible trip. I realized that it was not a good idea to visiting so many places. Therefore, when the next holiday came, I will do it in a slight different way. I will visit one city at a time and enjoy myself mostly.

　　答案：

　　This summer, I traveled with my parents, but our holiday wasn't very perfect.

　　We visited five cit in China, but stayed in each of i for only one or two days.

　　We visited many places i historic interest, always in

　　hurry. We were on the go almost every day. When we came back home,

　　we were tired.

　　It turned out wha we had a terrible trip. I realized that it was not a good idea to visitin so many places. Therefore, when the next holiday cam， I will do it in a sligh different way. I will visit one city at a time and enjoy myself mostl.

　　F

　　Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy ticket for the circus. Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter. This family made deep impression on me. There were eight children, both probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn't have a lot of money. Their clothes was not expensive, and they were clean. The children were well­behaved, all of them

　　standing

　　in

　　line,

　　two­by­two

　　behind

　　their parents, held hands. They were excited talking about the clowns, elephants and other performances where that they would see that night. Everyone could sense they have never been to the circus ago.

　　答案：

　　Once, when I was a teenager, my father and I were standing in line to buy ticke for the circus. Finally, there was only one family between us and the ticket counter. This family made

　　deep impression on me. There were eight children, bot probably under the age of twelve. You could tell they didn't have a lot of money. Their clothes wa not expensive, an they were clean. The children were well­behaved, all of them

　　standing

　　in

　　line,

　　two­by­two

　　behind

　　their parents, hel hands. They were excite talking about the clowns, elephants and other performances

　　where that they would see that night. Everyone could sense they hav never been to the circus ag.

　　G

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I'm writing to report some problem I met with in my hotel yesterday. Firstly, I have a habit of reading before go to bed, but the room was not light enough read at night.

　　Secondly, the signal of Wi­Fi in the room was such weak that I could not even surf the Internet with my mobile phone.

　　Thirdly, the shoe cleaning machine in the lobby was broken and I could use it at all.

　　I'm sorry to tell you that the above problems caused

　　me

　　many

　　inconvenience

　　and

　　gave

　　me

　　a unpleasant experience. I do hope you can take some measures to solve for them.

　　Or I had to check out.

　　Thank you！

　　Sincerely yours，

　　Li Hua

　　答案：

　　Dear Sir or Madam，

　　I'm writing to report some proble

　　I met with in m hotel yesterday. Firstly, I have a habit of reading before g to bed, but the room was not light enough

　　read at night.

　　Secondly, the signal of Wi­Fi in the room was suc weak that I could not even surf the Internet with my mobile phone.

　　Thirdly, the shoe cleaning machine in the lobby was broken and I coul

　　use it at all.

　　I'm sorry to tell you that the above problems caused

　　me

　　man

　　inconvenience

　　and

　　gave

　　me

　　unpleasant experience. I do hope you can take some measures to solve

　　them.

　　Or I ha to check out.Thank you！

　　Sincerely yours，

　　Li Hua

　　H

　　Recently an English speech association has set up in our school, that is all free. Now we are recruiting new member. If you are enthusiastic and love English speech, please joining us. There is no age or gender limitation. Nowadays we live in an age of communication. No matter how you do, you need to communicate with others. Besides, you need to express and show himself.

　　As a slogan goes on, language is power. Excellently verbal skills are your wealth. Show the better of you to the world with your voice.

　　To join us, what you only need to do is scan the QR code but fill in the form on your mobile phone. Thank you ！

　　The Students' Union

　　答案：

　　Recently an English speech association has

　　set up in our school, tha is all free. Now we are recruiting new

　　membe. If you are enthusiastic and love English speech, please joinin us. There is no age or gender limitation. Nowadays we live in an age of communication. No matter ho you do, you need to communicate with others. Besides, you need to express and show

　　himsel.

　　As a slogan goes ， language is power. Excellentl verbal skills are your wealth. Show the bette of you to the world with your voice.

　　To join us, what you only need to do is scan the QR code bu fill in the form on your mobile phone. Thank you ！

　　The Students' Union