【金版教程】2017高考英语二轮复习训练：4-3-3 图表作文a（含解析）

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　　一、按写作步骤完成下面写作任务

　　[2015·安徽黄山质检二]最近你校对学生的书写情况进行了调查。结果发现：随着电脑的普及，学生们越来越不重视书写，其理由如图所示。请根据调查表提供的信息写一篇英语短文，介绍调查结果并发表自己的看法。

　　注意：1.词数120左右；

　　2．文章的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

　　Nowadays, with the growing popularity of computers，

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　　第一步：审题。

　　1．本文是________类作文

　　2．体裁是________

　　3．人称是________

　　4．时态是________

　　答案：1.图表　2.应用文　3.第三人称　4.一般现在时态

　　第二步：联想词汇——紧扣文章主题(图表内容)。

　　1．普及：________

　　答案：popularity

　　2．注意：________

　　答案：pay attention to

　　3．调查：________

　　答案：survey

　　4．忙于某事：________

　　答案：be occupied with/be busy with

　　5．提高；改善：________

　　答案：improve

　　6．练习书写：________

　　答案：practise writing

　　7．没有用的：________

　　答案：useless

　　8．强调：________

　　答案：place emphasis on

　　第三步：连词成句——注意紧扣题目要求，列出要点。

　　(一)完成句子

　　1．________，more middle school students ________.

　　随着电脑的普及，学生们越来越不重视书写。

　　答案：With the growing popularity of computers; are paying less and less attention to handwriting

　　2．________ think that they can just use a computer.

　　51．5%的学生认为，他们可以用电脑写字。

　　答案：51.5% percent of the students

　　3．________ to waste time improving their handwriting.

　　没有必要花费时间提高书写。

　　答案：There is no need

　　4．32.3 percent believe that ________.

　　32．3%的人认为他们忙着学习。

　　答案：they are very busy with the study

　　5．They don't ________.

　　他们没有时间练习。

　　答案：have time to practise

　　6．10.9 percent think that ________.

　　10．9%的人认为练习书法没有用。

　　答案：handwriting it is useless to practise

　　7．We should ________ this aspect in future.

　　我们应该在未来强调这一方面。

　　答案：place more emphasis on

　　(二)根据要求，对以上句子进行升级。

　　升级一：把2、3句加上适当关联词合并为复合句。

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　　答案：51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting.

　　升级二：把4、5句用so...that句式变为复合句。

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　　答案：They are so busy with the study that they don't have time to practise.

　　升级三：把6句变为动名词作主语结构。

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　　答案：10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless.

　　升级四：把7句变为被动语态。

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　　答案：More emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

　　第四步：做好衔接，连句成篇。

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　　One possible version：

　　Nowadays,_with_the_growing_popularity_of_computers，more middle school students are paying less and less attention to handwriting.

　　According to a recent survey, many students don't want to improve their handwriting for various reasons. 51.5 percent of the students think that they can just use a computer, so there is no need to waste time improving their handwriting and 32.3 percent believe that they are so busy with the study that they do not have time to practise.10.9 percent think that practising handwriting is useless. Yet the rest have other reasons.

　　As the saying goes, writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is beneficial, especially for middle school students. Therefore, in my opinion, more emphasis should be placed on this aspect in future.

　　二、课下练笔——仿照即时演练的步骤完成下面写作任务

　　[2015·河北衡水点睛大联考三]假如你是高中三年级的学生李华，你在学校组织了一项“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动。

　　请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：调查结果(如下图所示)、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的看法。

　　注意：1.词数为100左右；

　　2．信的开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总词数。

　　Dear Editor，

　　I am a Senior Three student.Recently we have carried out a survey—“To whom do you go when in trouble？” The results are as follows.

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　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　One possible version：

　　Dear_Editor，

　　I_am_a_Senior_Three_student._Recently_we_have_carried_out_a_survey—“To_whom_do_you_go_when_in_trouble？”_The_results_are_as_follows.

　　61% of the students surveyed select friends or classmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles and want to communicate, the reason for which is that they are in the same age group and have a better understanding of each other. Another 22% choose teachers and parents to talk to. They think that teachers and parents are rich in life and educational experience. Nevertheless, there are also 17% who don't share their troubles at all. They say that their troubles are none of others' business.They find it hard to talk with others.

　　It seems clear from the response that some students lack communication with others and it is necessary for teachers and parents to play a more important role in their life.

　　Yours_sincerely，

　　Li_Hua