2017届高考英语二轮复习随堂训练：短文改错 2（含解析）

　　随堂训练

　　Ⅰ. 单句改错

　　1. Through our research, we come to know that everybody must pay attention to our environment and some measures should be taken to protect.

　　【解析】在protect后面加it。protect是及物动词, 后面需接宾语, 此处用it代替前文提到的environment。

　　2. Soon they came up with a good idea, and then we decided to go cycling in the countryside.

　　【解析】we→they。上文提到他们想到了一个好主意, 所以下句应该是他们决定去农村骑行。

　　3. As students, we have classes from early morning till late afternoon, so taking a ten-minute break between class is definitely important, even necessary.

　　【解析】class→classes。由between可知, 是在两节课之间, 故用复数。

　　4. When it comes to relaxation, I’d like to go skating, climb mountains and see several movie.

　　【解析】movie→movies。由前面several可知, 此处用复数。

　　5. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to go on feet.

　　【解析】feet→foot。on foot意为“步行”, 是固定短语, 不用复数。

　　6. As I was waiting for my order to come, I noticed the old man in a wheel chair rolling himself over to a table.

　　【解析】the→an。old man第一次出现, 无需特指, 故用不定冠词。

　　7. Some of us think it is good to own a car, for it’s convenient, fast and comfortable means of transportation.

　　【解析】it’s后面加a。means意为“方式, 方法”, 是可数名词, 单复数同形。此处表达它是一种方便快捷舒适的交通方式, 故用不定冠词。

　　8. It can be seen, more and more people own mobile phones in China now.

　　【解析】It→As。正如我们看见的, 现在中国越来越多的人拥有手机。这里是非限制性定语从句, 用as引导。放在句首, 注意大写。

　　9. One Sunday, I was reading my book while it suddenly occurred to me that it was my mother’s birthday the next day.

　　【解析】while→when。be doing. . . when是英语中常考的一个固定句式, when是并列连词, 意为“在这时”。

　　10. I don’t know exactly what my mother will cook for us tonight, and there will probably be fish and vegetables.

　　【解析】and→but。根据句意, 我不知道母亲晚上要做什么饭, 但是可能会有鱼和蔬菜。前句说不知道, 后句又说鱼和蔬菜, 所以是转折关系。

　　Ⅱ. 短文改错

　　1

　　I still remember a winter dawn, when I was awakened by the noisy outside. It had been snowing heavily the whole night, so the campus was quiet and full of snow. Especially annoying by the unpleasant noise, I pulled the curtain aside, only to find that a group of cleaner were working very hardly to sweep the snow off the road. The rest of the world are sound asleep, but these workers were fighting bravely against the coldness for the safety and convenience of those are totally unknown to them. On life, we are now and then supported by the people around us, of that we are sometimes unaware. It is their efforts and contribution make our life better. Never should we forget to be grateful for the lovely strangers around us.

　　答案:

　　I still remember a winter dawn, when I was awakened by the noisy outside. It

　　noise

　　had been snowing heavily the whole night, so the campus was quiet and full of snow. Especially annoying by the unpleasant noise, I pulled the curtain aside, only to find

　　annoyed

　　that a group of cleaner were working very hardly to sweep the snow off the road. The

　　cleaners

　　hard

　　rest of the world are sound asleep, but these workers were fighting bravely against the

　　were

　　coldness for the safety and convenience of those ∧ are totally unknown to them. On

　　who

　　In

　　life, we are now and then supported by the people around us, of that we are

　　which

　　sometimes unaware. It is their efforts and contribution ∧make our life better. Never

　　that

　　should we forget to be grateful for the lovely strangers around us.

　　to

　　1. 【解析】第一句中的noisy→noise。考查名词。介词by接名词。

　　2. 【解析】第三句中的annoying→annoyed。考查非谓语动词。主句的主语I和annoy之间是被动关系, 故用过去分词作状语。

　　3. 【解析】第三句中的cleaner→cleaners。考查名词。从a group of可知用名词复数。

　　4. 【解析】第三句中的hardly→hard。考查副词。word hard努力工作。

　　5. 【解析】第四句中的are→were。考查时态。整篇文章是过去时态, 故用一般过去时。

　　6. 【解析】第四句中去掉those后的are或在those后加who。考查句式。those后的定语从句中缺少主语, 故those后加who。或去掉are, 后面的unknown. . . 作后置定语。

　　7. 【解析】第五句中的On→In。考查介词。in life在生活中。

　　8. 【解析】第五句中的that→which。考查定语从句的连接词。介词of后用which引导定语从句。

　　9. 【解析】第六句中contribution后加that。考查强调句式。It is+被强调部分+that. . . 。

　　10. 【解析】第七句中for→to。考查介词。be grateful to sb. 感激某人。

　　2

　　Dear Diana,

　　Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’and made our own way to home.

　　答案:

　　Dear Diana,

　　Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us

　　had

　　of

　　bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home.

　　Unfortunately

　　There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long

　　as

　　line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited

　　miles

　　there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over

　　until/till

　　there

　　as∧car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off

　　a

　　We

　　at her parents’ and made our own way to home.

　　1. 【解析】第一句中have→had。本篇文章是一篇记叙文, 讲述了过去的事情, 全文都用过去时态。

　　2. 【解析】第二句中for→of。It is+adj. +for/of sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事……, 当形容词描述人的性格、品质时, 用of, 否则用for。

　　3. 【解析】第三句中Unfortunate→Unfortunately。此处是位于句首的副词, 修饰整个句子。

　　4. 【解析】第四句中第一个for→as。as a result结果, 是固定短语。

　　5. 【解析】第四句中mile→miles。当mile前的数量超过1时, mile就要变复数。

　　6. 【解析】第五句中unless→until/till。根据句意, 最后, 我们开到一个服务站, 在那里等到道路被清理干净。

　　7. 【解析】第六句中here→there。根据句意, 在停车场那里。

　　8. 【解析】第六句中在as后面加a。car是可数名词单数, 要在前面加冠词或形容词性物主代词等限定词。

　　9. 【解析】第七句中They→We。根据前后文逻辑, 此处是说我们的情况。

　　10. 【解析】第七句中去掉to。home是副词, 前面不需要加介词。