2017届高考英语牛津译林版一轮写作能力提升课件：第5讲 强调形式在写作中的应用

　　一、魔法导航 在英语写作中有时为了强调某一成分、突出表意效果,我们常常采用强调的 形式。下面把写作中常用的强调形式做一下简要总结。 1.用感叹句来表示强烈的感情,突出说话人的情感。  典句引领 What an interesting picture it is!

　　这是一张多么有意思的照片呀!  雕词琢句 (1)　    (这个旅程将会多么令人愉快)if you make it smooth for others!  答案　 How sweet the journey will be ——强势出击,一句千钧 (2) 于敏是一个多么无私的科学家啊!(2015安徽)  

　　     答案　What a selfless scientist Yu Min is! 2.用助动词“do/does/did+动词原形”对谓语动词进行强调。  典句引领 If you need any further information, do let me know.

　　如果你需要进一步的信息,一定要让我知道。  雕词琢句 (1)Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and　    (我们的确玩得 很高兴) that day. (2015浙江)  答案　 we did have lots of fun/we did enjoy ourselves

　　(2)我真的希望你能帮助我提高英语写作能力,尤其是词汇和一些重点语法的 恰当运用。(2015四川)    

　　   答案　I do hope you can help me improve my English writing ability, especial- ly the proper use of vocabulary and some important grammar.

　　3.用强调句型“It is/was+被强调的部分+that/who+其他”来对句子的主语、 宾语或状语进行强调,突出说话人的意愿。  典句引领 It was not until the end of the 19th century that shooting earned its status as a sport. 直到19世纪末期射击才成为一项运动项目。  雕词琢句 (1)It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story 　    (重要). (2015福建)  答案　 that counts/matters/is important (2)重要的是那些遵守规则的人。(2015江苏)  

　　     答案　It is the people who obey the rules that matter. 4.通过使用such...that..., so...that..., not...but...等一些固定的搭配达到强调的目 的。  典句引领 It was such a beautiful day that they would remember it forever. 这是如此美丽的一天以至于他们将永远记住它。  雕词琢句 (1)　    (生活将会丰富多彩) in ten years that I will enjoy it much.(201 4课标全国Ⅱ)  答案　Life will be so rich and colorful

　　(2)这些书籍非常有趣,你们可能会非常喜欢。(2015天津)   

　　    答案　The books are so interesting that you may like them very much. 5. 通过使用排比、重复等修辞手段对句子进行强调。  典句引领 I like Shakespeare because his comedies and tragedies bring me into a fantastic world;I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English lan- guage;I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! 【评析】　作者通过使用like、love和admire三个动词使语气层层递进,通过 使用三个because引导的排比句充分说明了自己喜欢莎士比亚的原因。 二、学以致用 1.完美文章 结合括号中的提示,用不同的强调手段把下面的短文补充完整。 Nowadays, lots of children in rural areas can't live together with their parents working in other places. Several factors result in the problem. Firstly, some parents (1)　    (强 调谓语动词:的确担心) that it will influence their work if they take the children a- long with them. Secondly, the living costs and education fees in the place where parents work are(2)　    (如此高他们负担不起). The phenomenon does harm to children in many ways. First of all, children will feel quite lonely without parents' love and care. Worse still, such children get into bad habits easily, which (3)　    (强调谓语动词:确实会影响他们的健康成长). In my opinion, (4)　    (强调句型:父母和政府应为这个问题负责).However, whatev- er difficulties we are faced with, we should take effective measures to overcome them.

　　     (1)do worry (2)so high that they can't afford them (3)does influence their healthy growth (4)it's the parents and the government that are to blame for the problem 2.话题写作 [本期话题]　动物保护 [写作要求]　至少运用三种强调形式。 根据下面的信息提示,写一篇70词左右的英语短文。 1.我认为保护野生动物的确很重要; 2.它们是自然界的珍宝和人类的朋友; 3.它们可以保持自然界的平衡;  答案 4.它们非常珍贵,必须采取措施保护它们; 5.保护它们就是保护我们自己。   

　　    答案 One possible version: I do attach great importance to protecting wild animals. As far as I'm concerned, they are not only the treasure of nature but also our friends. As we all know, it is wild animals that play an important role in keeping the balance of nature. They are so rare that effective measures must be taken right now to protect them from be- ing hunted and dying out. Just as some scientists say, protecting wild animals is protecting ourselves.

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　　本周你班班会的主题是“To be self-confident”,你是班长,请根据下面的提示 准备一篇发言稿。 提示: 1.简述自信的重要性; 2.你曾经缺乏信心,是谁给了你鼓励,什么事让你改变了态度; 3.适当加入自己的评论。 注意:1.词数100左右;

　　2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,使行文连贯。    

　　   答案 One possible version: Boys and girls, Sometimes, life is a hard and bitter journey. Therefore, I'd like to say, “No mat- ter what happens, ①do be self-confident.” [我来试写]   

　　   I still remember that when I just entered this high school, I suffered a lot of stress and was too nervous to answer the teachers' questions whenever they asked me in class. Later, something happened that ②did change my life. An English speech contest was to be held in my class. ③It was with great efforts that the teacher per- suaded me to participate in it. He said ④it was so important an opportunity for me to build up my confidence that I shouldn't give it up. I chose a topic a bit chal- lenging for me—Self-confidence and Success. I wrote down whatever I had to say and kept reciting it. ⑤It was with the teacher's encouragement that I won a prize. From then on, I held a firm belief that self-confidence is the first step to success. Thus, my friends, ⑥do be self-confident and you will achieve success. That's all. Thank you.

　　【写作点评】 在文中①—⑥作者巧妙运用各种强调形式,不仅丰富了句式,而且突出了表达 效果,增强了语言的感染力,出色完成了写作任务。