2017届高考英语一轮复习《全优课堂》写作技能步步高写作层级特训：要诀4.1.满分作文登场（新人教版含答案）

　　第三部分　要诀四

　　(2015课标I)

　　假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：

　　1．栏目介绍；

　　2．稿件内容；

　　3．稿件长度：约400词；

　　4．交稿日期：6月28日前。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头语已为你写好。

　　Dear Peter，

　　I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.

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　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　考场作文

　　Dear Peter，

　　I'd like to ask you to write an article for our school's English newspaper.

　　There is a part ①calls the “Foreign Cultures” in the newspaper, which has broadened our horizons greatly.(1)It is so interesting that we all love it very much. I hope you can write something about American festivals and customs.What's more, you can also tell us something about the life of American high school students.Most of us are much ②interested for it.(2)When you write, you had better limit your article within about 400 words.If ③possibly, could you send us your article before June 28?

　　Looking forward to hearing from you.　

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　1．错误聚焦：

　　(1)call和part构成被动关系，故将其改为________________。

　　(2)“对……感兴趣”为固定搭配，应将for改为________。

　　(3)句型“If it is possible”可将it is省略，故应将possibly改为______。

　　【答案】(1)called　(2)in　(3)possible

　　2．高分靓句：

　　(1)将画线句子(1)改为 “so…that…”的倒装句：

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　　(2)将画线句子(2)改为非谓语动词的形式：_____________________

　　【答案】(1) So interesting is it that we all love it very much.　(2)When writing

　　参考范文

　　Dear Peter，

　　I'd_like_to_ask_you_to_write_an_article_for_our_school's_English_newspaper.

　　The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it's interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?

　　I'm looking forward to hearing from you.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　(2015河北唐山一中高考仿真一)

　　假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在唐山的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。

　　1．上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等)；

　　2．中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等)；

　　3．下午与我校学生游览南湖。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100左右；

　　2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Mr. Smith，

　　I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School.____________

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　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　One possible version:

　　Dear Mr.Smith，

　　I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School.You will pay a visit to our school on June 26 and I was appointed to take charge of arranging all the activities on that day.My plan about these activities are as follows.

　　On your arrival, we will show you around our school.Then a discussion will be held, which may cover such topics as school life, cultural differences and so on, aiming to improve mutual understanding.At noon, we will prepare dumplings and noodles as main food in our school's dining hall.In the afternoon, you together with some student representatives are going to visit the Nanhu Park and enjoy the beautiful scenery there.After that, you will end your visit to our school.

　　What do you think of the plan? I'm looking forward to your reply.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua