2017届高考英语一轮复习《全优课堂》写作技能步步高写作层级特训：要诀4.2.满分作文登场（新人教版含答案）

　　第三部分　要诀四

　　(2015福建)

　　请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。

　　内容要求：

　　凿壁偷光

　　1．描述画面；

　　2．概述其含义；

　　3．谈谈个人感想。

　　注意：

　　1．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；

　　2．可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、行文连贯；

　　3．文中不能出现考生的具体信息。

　　参考词汇：凿，钻：bore

　　In the picture，____________________________________________________________

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　　考场作文

　　In the picture, we can see a boy in rags.He was ①seating at a table with a pile of books on it.(1)He was reading a book attentively with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall.

　　②As is known to us that this is a story from an ancient Chinese idiom.So poor was the boy that he couldn't afford even a candle.Therefore, in order to read at night, he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house.What we can learn from the story is that we should do what we can ③acquire knowledge when faced with difficult situations.(2)When we try to improve ourselves by learning, we can make good preparations for the future.

　　1．错误聚焦：

　　(1)①seat作动词时是及物动词，故应将①改为______或__________。

　　(2)②As处于形式主语的位置，故应将As改为_______。

　　(3) do what sb.can to do为固定句型，故应在acquire前加上______________。

　　【答案】(1)seated/sitting　(2)It　(3)to

　　2．高分靓句：

　　(1)用强调句型对画线(1)中的with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall进行强调：_______________________________________

　　(2)将画线(2)改为Only when引导的倒装句：______________________________________

　　【答案】

　　(1)It was with the help of a weak ray of light coming in through a small hole in the wall that he was reading a book attentively.

　　(2)Only when we try to improve ourselves by learning, can we make good preparations for the future.

　　参考范文

　　In_the_picture,_we can see a boy in worn clothes, sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his reading.

　　This is a well­known story from an ancient Chinese idiom.The boy, being poor, couldn't afford even a candle, so he bored a hole in the wall to “steal” light from his neighbor's house to read at night.The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be.

　　Of course, things are totally different today.It is not the story itself but what is reflected in the story that counts.Hard work pays off.We should take pains to improve ourselves through learning and get prepared for the future.

　　(2015山东威海一中高三二模)

　　下图是学校英语网站的新增部分栏目，网站负责人Mr.Black就此向同学们征询意见。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语给Mr.Black写一封E­mail。

　　E­mail主要内容包括：

　　1．最喜欢的栏目及理由；

　　2．对栏目设置的意见或建议。

　　注意：

　　①词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；

　　②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　③参考词汇：栏目：column

　　Dear Mr.Black，

　　How are you doing?

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　　Best wishes.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　One possible version:

　　Dear_Mr.Black,_

　　How are you doing?

　　I'm glad that there will be some new columns in our English website.Of the four columns, I have higher expectation to Today's World.As you know, today's world is a changing one.We'll become outdated if we turn a deaf ear to it.From the new column Today's World not only can we learn what's going on around the world, but also it can enrich our knowledge of the latest science and technology.

　　As to suggestions, I would appreciate it if there are some English­learning columns in the website.Most of my classmates are eager to learn English well, but short of learning chances after class.I do hope our website can do something about it.

　　Best wishes.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua