2017届高考英语一轮复习《全优课堂》写作技能步步高写作层级特训：要诀4.3.满分作文登场（新人教版含答案）

　　第三部分　要诀四

　　(2017课标Ⅰ)

　　假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　3．参考词汇：住宿：accommodation

　　Dear Sir/Madem，

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　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　考场作文

　　Dear Sir/Madam，

　　I am a student ①live in China.I want to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.(1)I've seen your advertisement and I'd like to know something more about your 3 week English course. First, (2) I want to know the start date of the course, class hours per week and the type of accommodation.In addition, I want to know how much I have to ②pay the course.Can you tell me whether the accommodation is included in the fee?

　　I am looking forward to ③hear from you.

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　1．错误聚焦：

　　(1)①live处于非谓语动词的位置，它与student构成主动关系，故将live改为____________。

　　(2)表示“为……支付”时，pay是不及物动词，故在②pay后加介词_____________。

　　(3)look forward to中的to为介词，故将③hear改为______________。

　　【答案】(1)living　(2)for　(3)hearing

　　2．高分靓句：

　　(1)将画线(1)改为含有非谓语动词的句子： _________________________,_I'd like to know something more about your 3­week English course.

　　(2)将画线(2)改为含有not only的倒装句：___________________________________,_but also class hours per week and the type of accommodation.

　　【答案】(1)Having seen your advertisement

　　(2)Not only do I want to know the start date of the course

　　参考范文：

　　Dear Sir / Madam，

　　I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer school during the vacation.I've seen your ad, and I'd like to know something more about your six­week English course.First, when will the course start and how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be too many students in a class.I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included.Would there be host family or university dormitory?

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　(2015河北正定中学高三第一次考试)

　　仔细观察下面一幅图画，根据图画的内容，写一篇词数100左右的英语短文。

　　情景：假定你叫李华，家住香港。你和几个朋友约定星期六在中心公园聚会。现请你写封信邀请在学校居住的Mrs.Brown参加，并根据下图告诉她来中心公园的路线。

　　参考词汇：聚会：have a gathering party

　　Dear Mrs.Brown，

　　We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday.Here is how you can find us.

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　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　One possible version：

　　Dear Mrs.Brown，

　　We are so glad that you're coming to join us on Saturday.Here is how you can find us.We'll have our gathering party in the Central Park.Maybe you've been there, haven't you?

　　Go straight on when you get out of the school gate and come to the street.Then turn right at the second crossing and you'll find a hospital.Just opposite it is a No.177 bus stop.Take a bus and get off at the fourth stop.Central Park is just in front of it.We'll have our gathering party in a boat on the lake.What a funny thing! Do come on time.We'll wait for you at the park gate.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua