2017届高考英语一轮复习书面表达专项训练：36（含范文）

　　1.

　　假如你是一名大学生叫李华，对近年来大学毕业生就业情况颇有已见，请根据下面提供的信息向报社写信谈谈你的看法。字数100左右。开头已给出 。

　　学生心态 向往城市，不愿下乡。

　　就业现状 城市人才过剩；农村渴求人才。

　　就业前景 农村天地广阔，可施展才华。

　　Dear editor,

　　I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　2.

　　学校网站新开设了一个”英语写作”栏目(column),以便学生发表(post)英语作文,进行交流,提高写作能力。现请你为该栏目写一个英文介绍,内容包括:

　　开设目的

　　栏目优势:教师在线(online)指导等

　　作文要求:内容贴近学生生活

　　优秀作文的鼓励办法

　　邀请大家参与

　　注意:

　　1.词数120左右。

　　2.开头语已为你写好(不计入总词数)。

　　Welcome to the column “English Writing” !

　　3.

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 () ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( ) 划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。

　　In recent years many flowers shops have been appeared in our small town. It is common for people to buy flowers when they go to a gathering, visiting a sick friend, or attend a wedding or birthday party. I still remember clear one day last year when Tom, a disabled student, presented some flowers to his mother to express his gratitude for her. He owing his entire life to his mother’s kind and care. With her he would not have had the confidence or the courage to fight his disability. As a result the great effort he has made, he was finally admitted to a key university.

　　4.

　　假如你是李华，你的美国网友Jack目前正在一家孔子学院学习汉语，你们俩约定每周都给对方写一封信，他用汉语，你用英语，以期相互学习和帮助。最近你收到他发来的一封电子邮件，请你根据下列提示用英语给他写一封回信：

　　1. 表扬他的进步，并指出来信中的错误；

　　2. 给他一些改进的具体建议；

　　3. 你将发给他一篇游记，期待他对你的邮件进行回复。

　　注意：1. 词数：120-150；

　　2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　Dear Jack,

　　I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter.

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________________________________

　　_____________________________________________________

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　5.

　　请根据下面提示，写一篇短文。词数不少于50。

　　You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so.

　　6.假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华，请给你的英国笔友写信介绍你校课改以来的一些变化。

　　课程 必修课、选修课

　　学习方式 做中学、探究学习

　　评价(学分制)

　　作业、论文、考试

　　注意：1.词数不少于60。

　　2.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好。

　　Hello Jack，

　　I’m very happy to receive your letter.

　　______________________________________________________________

　　______________________________________________________________

　　Yours

　　Li Hua

　　试卷答案

　　1.Dear editor,

　　I am writing to you to talk about taking up occupations for college graduates. Nowadays many graduates are looking forward to obtaining employment in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside.

　　As a matter of fact, there are not enough opportunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us. Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and you’ll be able to make greater contributions to the building of new countryside.

　　Therefore, I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　2.

　　Welcome to the column “English Writing” !

　　Recently the school website has set up a new column called “English Writing” which provides students with the chances to post their composition and communicate with each other. Not only can students improve their writing ability in this way, but they can strengthen their self-confidence.

　　The column has lots of advantages. It is the teacher’s guide online that has an advantage over the other columns. If necessary, the students can have a direct “ask and answer” with professional teachers. It is required that the composition should be related to the students’ life. What’s more, if it is organized well enough, the writer will be rewarded for it.

　　Hoping to the students’ participation.

　　3.

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　　4.

　　Dear Jack,

　　I’m just so glad to receive your regular letter.

　　I’m proud to tell you that you have made rapid progress in such a short time! You letter is better written than the last one. Obviously, you have mastered how to use some Chinese characters freely. But it doesn’t mean there’s no problem at all. For instance, unlike English, we usually use “因为……所以……” in one sentence. So you should correct the fourth sentence in your letter. And I advise you to do more reading and try to use these sentence patterns in your writing as possible as you can.

　　I wrote a travel journal about our trip to a natural park yesterday. I’ll send it to you later. If there is any mistake in my writing, please tell me and correct it for me. I’m sure we both will make great progress this way.

　　I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　5.

　　Jim, look at this picture! The man seems to be looking for water. He has dug several holes, but all of them have been left unfinished. In reality, many people lack willpower and patience while doing something difficult. Just like the man in the picture, he didn’t dig any of them further. If he had done so, he would have got water. In my opinion, when we do something, we should have the willpower to finish it. We must firmly carry it through to the end if we want to get a fruitful result. A man who gives up halfway will achieve nothing.

　　6.

　　Hello Jack，

　　I’m very happy to receive your letter. I’d like to share with you the great changes that have taken place in our school since the educational reform.

　　In our school, both the compulsory and optional courses are offered. We are free to choose the optional courses based on our own interests. We are encouraged to learn by doing. We are supposed to do research work, which helps us to think for ourselves and develop our creative mind. Taking exams is not the only way to get credits, homework and research paper also count.

　　I really like the changes in our school. What about yours?

　　Yours

　　Li Hua