2017届高考英语一轮复习写作指导课件：句子润色 用高级结构让句子靓起来（新人教版）

　　利用以下各招可给句子润色, 让句子靓起来。 1. 使用强调句 用do, does, did强调一般现在时或一般过去时的谓语动词；用it is…that…强调谓语之外的各种句子成分。 It was not until she took off her glasses that her father recognized her. 直到她摘下眼镜她父亲才认出她。 句子润色：用高级结构让句子靓起来 2. 使用倒装句 Only in this way can we learn English well.只有用这种方法我们才可以学好英语。

　　3. 使用with的复合结构 With the noise going on, I couldn’t go on studying. 由于那噪音的持续,我无法继续学习。 4. 使用非谓语动词 Located at the southwest corner of our school, the botanical garden has an area of 1000 square metres. 校园西南角/ 面积1000平方米。

　　5. 恰当使用被动句 Above all, something must be done to stop polluting. 最重要的是，必须釆取某些措施来阻止污染。 6. 使用各类从句

　　如使用“介词+关系代词”引导的定语从句。 There’re many kinds of tea in China, of which Longjing Tea is famous all over the world.中国的茶叶有很多种，其中龙井茶是世界著名的。 7. “数词+名词”改用“as many as+数词+名词” A great number of buildings were destroyed, leaving as many as 10,000,000 people homeless. 请多房屋被摧毁, 使多达千万的人失去家园。 8. 使用what引导的主语从句

　　What surprised me greatly was to find she was such a fine swimmer.使我大为吃惊的是, 我发现她竟是一位优秀的游泳选手。 9. 适当使用插入语 如 I guess, I think, I believe, however, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say, generally speaking, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, to be honest, as we know, what’s worse等。 即学即用 1. I didn’t realize the importance of cooperation until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school. (强调句) It was not until I was chosen monitor of my class in my senior middle school that I realized the importance of cooperation. 2. We can live a happy life only in this way. (倒装) Only in this way can we live a happy life.

　　3. I often feel anxious. The final exam is around the corner (with结构)

　　3. I often feel anxious with the final exam around the corner.

　　4. When I finished reading your letter, I was much moved. (非谓语动词) Finishing reading your letter, I was much moved.

　　5. They carried out a survey among 260 students.(被动语态)

　　A survey was carried out among 260 students. 6. They were faced with many difficulties. They didn’t lose heart.(非谓语动词) Faced with many difficulties, they didn’t lose heart．

　　7. I couldn’t fall asleep at night. I lost interest in everything.(插入语)

　　I couldn’t fall asleep at night. What was worse, I lost interest in everything. 8. He worked very hard. He made great progress in his study.(改为复合句) He worked so hard that he made great progress in his study.

　　9. He offered me a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over again. (what引导的主语从句)

　　What he offered me was a piece of advice that I should cheer up and start all over again. 10. He began playing the computer the moment he got home. This took up much of his time.（定语从句） He began playing the computer the moment he got home, which took up much of his time.