2017届高考英语一轮复习写作增分技巧讲解课件：3 教你如何扩展句子

　　写作进阶提升之三 ——怎样扩展句子

　　写作进阶提升 简单句的5个基本句型 5 主语+系动词+表语

　　S+Link.V+P

　　1. 主语+谓语

　　S +V.

　　2. 主语+谓语+宾语

　　S+Vt+O 3.主语+谓语+间宾+直宾

　　(S+Vt+Oi+Od)

　　4.主语+谓语+宾语+宾补

　　(S+Vt+O+O.C) Mary was a girl.

　　She smiled. Tom liked her. He gave her a picture. She put the picture

　　on the wall.

　　1. Mary was a (n) _________

　　girl.（形容词）

　　2. She smiled _______

　　. (副词）

　　3. Tom liked her _______

　　. （ 副词）

　　4. He gave her a picture _______________

　　______

　　（定语从句）

　　5. She put the picture on the wall _______

　　_____________________

　　（状语从句）

　　beautiful

　　happily

　　secretly

　　that he had drawn

　　for her .

　　so that

　　she could see it conveniently . 方法一

　　添加修饰成分：形容词、副词、不定式 短语、分词短语、介词短语、定语从句、状语从 句等。

　　Mary was a beautiful and ①

　　girl .

　　Tom and ②

　　liked her very much.

　　They soon became good friends. On Mary’s birthday, Tom gave her a picture and

　　③

　　She smiled happily ,

　　④

　　them and put the picture on

　　the wall.

　　clever

　　Jack

　　a bunch of roses.

　　accepted 方法二

　　添加并列成分：

　　Jack was rich. He had his own company.

　　He

　　made

　　a

　　fortune.

　　He bought

　　Mary

　　a diamond ring. Neither Jack nor Tom knew what Mary thought. During that night before Mary’s birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary to marry him .

　　During

　　the same night ,Tom couldn’t get to sleep until he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his memory.

　　方法三

　　构成并列句：用并列连词

　　and, so, but,

　　while, for（因为）等。

　　Jack was rich, ①

　　he had his own company

　　②

　　made a fortune, ③

　　he bought Mary

　　a diamond ring, ④

　　neither Jack nor Tom knew

　　what Mary thought. During that night before Mary’s

　　birthday, Jack had a dream in which he asked Mary

　　to marry him ⑤

　　Tom couldn’t get to sleep until

　　he finished drawing the picture of Mary from his

　　memory.

　　for and so

　　but while After her birthday party, Mary couldn’t help looking at the picture now and then

　　because

　　in her eyes looking at herself in the picture

　　was like looking at a superstar on the screen. To see is to believe. The picture proved

　　that

　　Tom had a talent for painting and

　　her

　　choosing him as her boy friend

　　was a wise decision. 方法四

　　使用V-ing短语、不定式短语或名词性从句等做主语、宾语或表语等。

　　that

　　___ ______________________

　　______ _______________________

　　Summary 扩展句子的方法 方法一：添加修饰成分 方法二：添加并列成分 方法三：构成并列句 方法四：使用V-ing短语、不定

　　式短语或名词性从句

　　作主语、宾语或表语等 It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring

　　he

　　had

　　bought

　　for

　　Mary’s

　　birthday was

　　refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly

　　but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact

　　that liking you does not mean loving you. To have

　　money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”

　　Step 1. Finish reading the following paragraph

　　in one minute to get the main idea.

　　It was obvious ①

　　Jack was unhappy.

　　②

　　made him angry was ③

　　the diamond ring

　　he

　　had

　　bought

　　for

　　Mary’s

　　birthday was

　　refused by her. ④

　　he told Mary that not only he was more handsome ⑤

　　Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly ⑥

　　firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact ⑦

　　liking you does not mean loving you. To have

　　money is not to have everything. ⑧

　　，we remain good friends as before. ”

　　that What that When than but that However Step 2. Fill in the missing words according to

　　the context.

　　Step 3. Read aloud the following paragraph ,

　　ready to repeat it.

　　It was obvious that Jack was unhappy. What made him angry was that the diamond ring

　　he

　　had

　　bought

　　for

　　Mary’s

　　birthday was

　　refused by her. When he told Mary that not only he was more handsome than Tom，but also he had a car，a flat and more money， Mary said softly

　　but firmly，“ I am very very sorry，Jack. You should know the fact

　　that liking you does not mean loving you. To have

　　money is not to have everything. However，we remain good friends as before. ”

　　It was obvious that ___________. What _____ was that the diamond ring _______________ was refused by her.

　　When he told Mary

　　that not only

　　___________ than Tom，_______ he had a car, a

　　flat ______. Mary said ______ but _______, “You

　　should know the fact that liking you does not mean

　　_________. To have money is not ___________.

　　However, we remain good friends as before..”

　　Repeat Who will win the game? Step 4

　　Homework:

　　Do exercises 1 and 2 in

　　your paper.