2017届河北省衡水名校高考英语一轮复习撬题对点练：专题14 短文改错（含解析）

　　Correction 1

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　　When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out. We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.

　　答案

　　When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city. I

　　I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in

　　countryside. There the air is clean

　　the mountains are green. Unfortunately,

　　the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have

　　shown that global warming has already become a very

　　problem. The

　　we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier.

　　rare animals are dying out. We must

　　ways to protect

　　environment. If we fail to do so, we'll live to regret it.

　　Correction 2

　　限时：7分钟One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It was very crowded.

　　Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.

　　After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.

　　Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

　　答案

　　One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his . It was

　　crowded.

　　Tony saw a toy

　　a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.

　　After

　　at the toy for some time, he turned around and found

　　his parents were missing. Tony was scared and

　　to cry. A woman saw him crying and

　　him to wait outside

　　shop.

　　Five minutes later, Tony saw

　　parents. Mom said, “How nice to see you again! Dad and I were

　　worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

　　Correction 3

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　　My soccer coach retired in last week.

　　I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party.

　　My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.

　　At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”

　　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　答案　

　　My soccer coach retired

　　last week.

　　I wanted to do

　　special for him at his retirement party.

　　My mum makes the

　　biscuits in the world, so I

　　to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic

　　of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought the biscuits were really . My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor

　　I was packing them up.

　　At

　　party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just

　　get some more of these biscuits.”

　　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me

　　the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　Correction 4

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　　Hi, Janice，

　　It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

　　As I tell you last time, I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time­wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore, so I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him?

　　Please help with me and give me some advice.

　　Grace

　　答案　

　　Hi, Janice，

　　It's been a month since I came to this new school and I really want

　　share with you some of the problems I have been experiencing.

　　As I

　　you last time, I made three new

　　here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. We've been spending a lot of time

　　in karaoke bars. It's been three Saturdays now and it really costs me . And I started to see this as a time­wasting activity! In fact, I don't like to go anymore,

　　I'm afraid I'll lose their friendship.

　　do you think I should do? If you

　　me, would you talk to ？

　　Please help

　　me and give me some advice.

　　Grace

　　Correction 5

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　　My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left­hand side of the class, I could easy see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many tress around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its

　　view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in the classroom, I will never forget it.

　　答案　

　　My old classroom was interesting because three

　　of the classroom were made

　　glass. I enjoyed

　　close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left­hand side of the class, I could

　　see the football field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom

　　also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many tress around . Farther in the distance, I could

　　enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the class was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in

　　hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its

　　view made me

　　like I was dreaming.

　　I was only a child when I studied in the classroom, I will never forget it.

　　Correction 6

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　　Travelled abroad, you should follow the customs of the country where you are visiting. When you invited, it is good manners to refuse or accept an invitation, either by writing or by telephoning. If you go to the party, it is polite to reach on time. It is good manners to shake hand with your host. You can take a present if you like, possibly a bottle of wine, a box of chocolates and some flowers. However, it was not bad manners to take nothing. It is not polite to stay too late before the other guests have gone. Also, it is suggested to write or telephone a day or two late to thank your host.

　　答案　

　　abroad, you should follow the customs of the country

　　you are visiting. When you

　　invited, it is good manners to refuse or accept

　　invitation, either by writing or by telephoning. If you go to the party, it is polite to

　　on time. It is good manners to shake

　　with your host. You can take a present if you like, possibly a bottle of wine, a box of chocolates

　　some flowers. However, it

　　not bad manners to take nothing. It is not polite to stay too late

　　the other guests have gone. Also, it is suggested to write or telephone a day or two

　　to thank your host.

　　Correction 7

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　　A little girl is chasing a ball on the road! If you are a driver, how will you do when you see this? Slow down. Great!

　　That's what they want! A 3D image of a little girl chase a ball was painted on the road in the front of Ecole Pauline Johnson Elementary School in West Vancouver. It is also a sign near the image which reads, “You're probably not expecting a child run into traffic.” It is part of the project knowing as “Preventable. ca”. The project is to promote public safe and to tell driver to slow down while in school areas. Eight－years－old Lauren Fisher was the model for the 3D image. Lauren's mother said，“My daughter kept saying, ‘We're going to make people to drive slower around schools.’”

　　答案　

　　A little girl is chasing a ball on the road! If you are a driver,

　　will you do when you see this? Slow down. Great!

　　That's what they want! A 3D image of a little girl

　　a ball was painted on the road in

　　front of Ecole Pauline Johnson Elementary School in West Vancouver.

　　is also a sign near the image which reads, “You're probably not expecting a child

　　run into traffic.” It is part of the project

　　as “Preventable. ca”. The project is to promote public

　　and to tell

　　to slow down while in school areas.

　　Lauren Fisher was the model for the 3D image. Lauren's mother said，“My daughter kept saying, ‘We're going to make people

　　drive slower around schools. ’”

　　Correction 8

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　　I'd like to tell you what our school had worked out a new program. The purposes of the program is to make our school more beautiful, and to turn our school into the better place for us to study and live in. According on the program, we will plant different kinds of trees, flower and grass around our school. Beside, we will build a small garden in where we can do some reading and take a rest. What's more, some statues of famous people will set up to encourage us to working harder. Don't you think it a wonderful program?

　　答案　

　　I'd like to tell you

　　our school

　　worked out a new program. The purposes of the program

　　to make our school more beautiful, and to turn our school into

　　better place for us to study and live in. According

　　the program, we will plant different kinds of trees,

　　and grass around our school. ， we will build a small garden

　　或 we can do some reading and take a rest. What's more, some statues of famous people will

　　set up to encourage us to

　　harder. Don't you think it a wonderful program?

　　Correction 9

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　　The other day, I was invited my friend Sam's home for dinner. I felt a bit surprising when I saw Bill there. It was two month since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn't know how to do. I sat down on the sofa but began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Until then I realize that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose. He went up to Bill and greeted him warmly, smiled at him. He looked very happily and talked with me excitedly. That night, we had a great fun together.

　　答案　

　　The other day, I was invited

　　my friend Sam's home for dinner. I felt a bit

　　when I saw Bill there. It was two

　　since we two had quarreled, so I was embarrassed and didn't know

　　to do. I sat down on the sofa

　　began to watch TV. Later Sam came to ask me to make up with Bill. Until then I

　　that Sam had arranged the meeting on purpose.

　　went up to Bill and greeted him warmly,

　　at him. He looked very

　　and talked with me excitedly. That night, we had

　　great fun together.

　　Correction 10

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　　We hold a discussion on the English learning fever in China. Some agree that English plays important role in our lives. It is learning English which can help us understand the rest of the world. Because of English, we can travel abroad with tour guides, study abroad and understand the instructions of import goods. But others say that no everyone needs to use English in the future. Only those who like English or need to use it for his work should learn it enthusiastically. Other just need to learn daily words and properly pronunciation. Personally, English is important, but connecting it to tests have brought too much stress to students and been taken away the delight of learning a language.

　　答案　

　　We hold a discussion on the English learning fever in China. Some agree that English plays

　　important role in our lives. It is learning English

　　can help us understand the rest of the world. Because of English, we can travel abroad

　　tour guides, study abroad and understand the instructions of

　　goods. But others say that

　　everyone needs to use English in the future. Only those who like English or need to use it for

　　work should learn it enthusiastically.

　　just need to learn daily words and

　　pronunciation. Personally, English is important, but connecting it to tests

　　brought too much stress to students and

　　taken away the delight of learning a language.

　　易错题一：谓语动词与非谓语动词的误用

　　[例1]　My favorite picture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!

　　[错因分析]　考生不注意分析句子结构，做题时受汉语的影响。

　　[答案]　enjoy→enjoying。考查非谓语动词。在介词of之后要用动词­ing形式。

　　[心得体会]

　　[例2]　But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raising by the teachers or ourselves.

　　[错因分析]　这属于非谓语动词的误用，考生忽略了作定语时现在分词表示主动意义而过去分词表示被动意义。

　　[答案]　raising→raised。分析句子结构可知，raising by the teachers or ourselves在句中作定语修饰the problems，又因为the problems和raise之间的动宾关系，因此应用过去分词raised。

　　[心得体会]

　　易错题二：主谓一致的误用

　　[例1]　Good night and remember, you, my dear diary, is my only souvenir from my past life and my only friend.

　　[错因分析]　考生误认为句子的主语为my dear diary，其实you才是句子真正的主语。

　　[答案]　is→are。考查主谓一致。此处主语是you，而my dear diary为you的同位语，所以系动词用are。

　　[心得体会]

　　[例2]　Bill was standing at the gate of the car，talking to two men who was helping him to repair it.

　　[错因分析]　考生忽略了定语从句中的主谓一致问题。

　　[答案]　第二个was→were。因先行词two men是复数，所以修饰该先行词的定语从句的谓语动词也应用复数。

　　[心得体会]

　　易错题三：动词时态及语态的误用

　　[例1]　...Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously (应改为 serious) problem...

　　[错因分析]　有些考生忽视了谓语动词show和主语Lots of studies之间为主谓关系。

　　[答案]　去掉been。句子主语Lots of studies和谓语动词之间为主谓关系，应用主动语态。

　　[心得体会]

　　[例2]　...Since then—for all these year (应改为years)—we had been allowing tomatoes to self­seed where they please...

　　[错因分析]　考生忽略了动词的现在完成时和过去完成时的区别。

　　[答案]　had→have。本句中出现的Since then和for all these years都是现在完成时态的标志词。

　　[心得体会]

　　易错题四：并列连词的误用

　　[例1]　We were warned not to cheat again so she would need to see our parents.

　　[错因分析]　忽略了语境而导致的连词的误用。

　　[答案]　so→or。根据语境可知，此处应用连词or表示“否则，要不然”。

　　[心得体会]

　　[例2]　He had a deep voice，which

　　set himself(应改为him)apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful.

　　[错因分析]　没有弄清句子结构而导致做错。

　　[答案]　在he前加and。根据语境并分析句子成分可知，本句含有两个并列的分句，此处应用并列连词and连接。

　　[心得体会]