2017届河北省衡水名校高考英语一轮复习撬题对点练：专题25 基础写作（含解析）

　　Ⅰ.按要求变换句型

　　1．If you don't get up now, you'll be late for work.(变为并列句)

　　→______________________________________________________

　　答案　Get up, or you'll be late for work.

　　2．While they have classes, they're always gossiping.(变为简单句)

　　→______________________________________________________

　　答案　While having classes, they're always gossiping.

　　3．He is young. He knows a lot.(变为复合句)

　　→______________________________________________________

　　答案　Though/Although he is young, he knows a lot.

　　4．He is a poet. He is also a writer.(变为并列句)

　　→_________________________________________________(and)

　　→______________________________________________________(not only...but also)

　　答案　He is a poet and writer.

　　He is not only a poet but also a writer.

　　5．“What are you doing？” he asked.(变为复合句)

　　→______________________________________________________

　　答案　He asked me what I was doing.

　　6．Above all, we must take some measures to stop pollution.

　　→______________________________________________________(被动语态)

　　答案　Above all, some measures must be taken to stop pollution.

　　7．There are a lot of trees and flowers in our school and our school looks like a big garden.(with复合结构)

　　→______________________________________________________(with复合结构)

　　答案　With a lot of trees and flowers in our school, our school looks like a big garden.

　　8．If it isn't well organized, the meeting will be a failure.

　　→______________________________________________________(省略句)

　　答案　If not well organized, the meeting will be a failure.

　　9．They didn't realize the importance of environmental protection until all the fish in the river died out.

　　①→____________________________________________________(倒装句)

　　②→____________________________________________________(强调句)

　　答案　①Not until all the fish in the river died out did they realize the importance of environmental protection.

　　②It was not until all the fish in the river died out that they realized the importance of environmental protection.

　　10．Although he had been warned of the storm, the farmer was still working in the field.

　　→______________________________________________________(名词作状语)

　　答案　Warned of the storm, the farmer was still working in the field.

　　Ⅱ.按要求转译句子

　　1．多吃蔬菜和水果有益健康。

　　We benefit more from eating fruit and vegetables.

　　①______________________________________________________(it作形式主语)

　　②______________________________________________________(动名词作主语)

　　答案　①It is good for our health to eat more fruit and vegetables.

　　②Eating more fruit and vegetables does good for our health.

　　2．汤姆努力学中文。他想在中国找份工作。

　　Tom studies Chinese very hard. He wants to find a job in China.

　　①______________________________________________________(不定式作状语)

　　②______________________________________________________(用短语替换并连接两句话)

　　答案　①Tom studies Chinese very hard to find a job in China.

　　②Tom

　　Chinese in order to find a job in China.

　　3．我们一到达，就受到了当地人的热烈欢迎。

　　As soon as we arrived, we were warmly welcomed by the local people.

　　①______________________________________________________(用介词短语)

　　②______________________________________________________(用hardly... when倒装句)

　　答案　①On/Upon our arrival, we were warmly welcomed by the local people.

　　②Hardly had we arrived when we were warmly welcomed by the local people.

　　4．我们可以用这种方法按时完成任务。

　　We can finish the task on time in this way.

　　①______________________________________________________(倒装句)

　　②______________________________________________________(强调句型)

　　答案　①Only in this way can we finish the task on time.

　　②It is in this way that we can finish the task on time.

　　5．我们很惊讶地听说他通过了这次考试。

　　We were surprised to hear that he passed the exam.

　　①______________________________________________________(用介词短语作状语)

　　②______________________________________________________(用it作形式主语)

　　答案　①To our surprise, he should pass the exam.

　　②It is surprising for us to hear that he passed the exam.

　　Ⅲ.完成句子

　　1．尽管因特网有很大帮助，但我认为花太多的时间在上面不是好主意。

　　______________________， I don't think it's a good idea to spend too much time on it.

　　答案　Although/While the Internet is of great help/Helpful as/though the Internet is

　　2．当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些孩子们非常依赖父母。

　　Nowadays parents have done everything for their single children,_________________________.

　　答案　which makes the children rely/depend on their parents badly

　　3．如果你能以每个10美元的价格卖这些中国结，我将不胜感激。

　　I would appreciate_________________________.

　　答案　it if you could sell the knots for 10 dollars each

　　4．据报道，大约30名至少18岁的志愿者将从世界各地被选出来于2015年前奔赴火星。

　　__________________about 30 volunteers__________________will be chosen from all over the world to the Mars by the year of 2015.

　　答案　It is reported that; who are at least 18 years old

　　5．它不仅给了我们接近大自然的机会，而且能让我们在学习之余得到放松。

　　It_________________gave us a chance to get close to nature,

　　___________gave us relaxation from our study.

　　答案　not only; but also

　　Ⅳ.短文改写——请用高级词汇改写画线部分

　　目前，中学生利用寒暑假打工现象引起了社会广泛关注，赞成和反对的声音此起彼伏。请根据下面的提示，写一篇英语短文。

　　1.简单阐述此种现象；

　　2.你对此种现象的明确态度……(给出充足的理由)

　　3.你认为该如何使用打工赚的钱？

　　①补贴家用？②自己花？……(给出合理的解释)

　　注意：1.词数120～150；

　　2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　考生作文

　　Recently more and more teenagers do part­time jobs to earn extra money during the summer or winter vacation.

　　Opinions on this ①are_different from person to person.

　　Some are ②for it while others ③disagree.

　　I think it is ④good for us high school students to take

　　part­time jobs in our spare time. It can earn some money ⑤and_also broaden our views and ⑥make our holiday life rich_and_colorful because we can learn what we can't learn in classes. What's more, through part­time jobs we can get some working experience which will ⑦prepare us for our future.

　　I hold the view that it's better to help pay our family living expenses instead of keeping it as our own pocket money. It is a good ⑧chance for us to take on an important responsibility for our family.

　　One Possible Version：

　　Recently more and more teenagers do part­time jobs to earn extra money during the summer or winter vacation.

　　Opinions on this ①vary from person to person.

　　Some are ②in_favor_of it while others ③are_against it.

　　I think it is ④meaningful for us high school students to take

　　part­time jobs in our spare time. It can ⑤not_only earn some money, but_also broaden our views and ⑥enrich our holiday life because we can learn what we can't learn in classes. What's more, through part­time jobs we can get some working experience which will ⑦equip us for our future.

　　I hold the view that it's better to help pay our family living expenses instead of keeping it as our own pocket money. It is a good ⑧opportunity for us to take on an important responsibility for our family.

　　Ⅴ.作文优化

　　据报道，我国学生近视率居世界第一。造成这一现象的原因是多方面的，请你以“Why are more and more children getting

　　short­sighted？”为题，写一篇英语短文。

　　主要内容包括：

　　1.造成学生近视的原因；

　　2.如何保护视力。

　　注意：1.词数120左右；

　　2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.短文的开头已经写好，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：近视率 rate of myopia

　　Why are more and more children getting short­sighted?

　　It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________

　　考生作文：

　　Why are more and more children getting

　　short­sighted?

　　It is reported that the rate of myopia of Chinese students is ranked as the highest in the world.

　　The causes of myopia are complicated. ①②Too_much_homework_leads_to_the_lack_of_time_for_exercise_and_a_good_sleep._③Long_time_of_studying_makes_eyesight_hard_to_refresh. ④Medical research shows genetic factors also ⑤cause poor eyesight. ⑥Many students don't form good eye care habits. ⑦When reading, some students hold books too close to their eyes.

　　⑧When_we_realize_the_reasons_of_this_result,_it's time for us to take measures to protect our eyes. ⑨I_think encouraging students to engage in more outdoor activities can help the students refresh their eyes.

　　按以下要求将文章改写：

　　(1)在的位置加上过渡词__________________________

　　(2)序号的句子改为强调句型____________________________

　　(3)序号改为it作形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语的句型________________________________________________________

　　(4)序号改为短语___________________________________

　　(5)序号改为分词作状语_______________________________

　　答案：(1)Firstly，Secondly，In addition，for example

　　(2)It is too much homework that leads to the lack of time for exercise and a good sleep.

　　(3)Long time of studying makes it hard to refresh their eyesight.

　　(4)⑤contribute to/result in, ⑨As far as I am concerned/In my opinion

　　(5)Realizing the reasons of this result

　　易错题一：中式英语

　　[例]　Volunteers must at least 8 years old.

　　②They make a preparation not return to the earth.

　　③We will select about 30 volunteers go to the Mars.

　　[错因分析]　考生未能掌握中英句子结构的区别，而将汉语连动句直接翻译成了英语。

　　[心得体会]

　　易错题二：句子越复杂越好

　　[例]　Suzhou is an interesting city which is famous all over the world being polluted by human beings when the modern industralization is taking place all the global while Yangzhou is a local city which is famous for Shouxi Lake which is compared to the second west lake in Hangzhou.

　　[错因分析]　考生把定语从句，非谓语动词，状语从句用到一个句子里，显得句子高端，但出现语法错误，而且句意不明确。

　　[心得体会]