2017届河北省衡水名校高考英语一轮复习撬题对点练：专题27 图表作文（含解析）

　　Writing 1

　　请阅读下面文字及图表，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

　　写作内容：1.用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

　　2．结合上述信息，简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因；

　　3．根据你的分析，从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。

　　写作要求：1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

　　2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

　　3.不必写标题。

　　评分标准：内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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　　One Possible Version：

　　The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people's lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.

　　Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the largescale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What's worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.

　　In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don't secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.

　　Writing 2

　　假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封信，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：住宿accommodation

　　Dear Sir/Madam，

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　　Yours faithfully，

　　Li Hua

　　One Possible Version：

　　Dear_Sir/Madam，

　　I am a student in China and I plan to go to Britain to attend a summer

　　school during the vacation. I've seen your ad, and I'd like to know something

　　more about your six­week English course. First, when will the course start and

　　how many class hours are there per week? Besides, I wish there would not be

　　too many students in a class. I'd also like to know how much I have to pay for

　　the course and whether accommodation is included. Would there be host family

　　or university dormitory?

　　I am looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours_faithfully，

　　Li_Hua

　　Writing 3

　　某知名英文网站开辟了国际文化交流专栏，请你根据以下提示为该网站发帖，简要介绍中国的传统节日——端午节。

　　英文名称

　　Duanwu Festival或Dragon Boat Festival

　　庆祝时间

　　每年农历五月初五

　　庆祝方式

　　吃粽子、赛龙舟、喝雄黄酒等

　　相关传说 纪念战国时代楚国诗人屈原，他于农历五月初五这天投汨罗江殉国

　　地位 中国最重要的传统节日之一，被列入世界非物质文化遗产名录

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

　　参考词汇：雄黄酒realgar wine；战国时期Warring States Period；世界非物质文化遗产World Intangible Cultural Heritage

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　　One Possible Version：

　　The Duanwu Festival, also known as the Dragon Boat Festival, is a traditional Chinese festival. It is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year across China. On this day, people usually eat rice dumplings, drink realgar wine, and hold dragon boat races. It is believed that the festival is celebrated in memory of the famous poet named Qu Yuan, who lived in the State of Chu during the Warring States Period. He jumped into the Miluo River to die for his country. The Duanwu Festival is one of the most important national festivals in China, and it has been listed as a World Intangible Cultural Heritage.

　　Writing 4

　　假设你是李华，最近，你校学生会对影响学生课外阅读的因素进行了调查，结果见下图。请根据图示提供的信息，给某英语报社写一封信，反映调查的实际情况，并寻求建议。

　　注意：1.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数；

　　2．词数100左右。

　　Dear Editor，

　　Our Student Union has recently conducted a survey on what may affect students' outside­class reading.______________________________

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　　Sincerely yours，

　　Li Hua

　　One Possible Version：

　　Dear_Editor，

　　Our_Student_Union_has_recently_conducted_a_survey_on_what_may_affect_students'_outside­class_reading. The result is as follows：

　　72% of the students think that schoolwork takes up most of their time, leaving very little for outside­class reading. Meanwhile, 16% of the students complain that their parents do not support them enough. Parents are concerned that their children's attention may be taken away by the nonschool related reading. Besides, 8% of the students are not satisfied with the opening hours of the library and limited book collections there. And the rest 4% of the students think books are so expensive nowadays that they can't afford to buy as many as they want.

　　We all know that reading is beneficial. However, given the facts above, how can we read more? I would greatly appreciate your help if you could provide some advice.

　　Sincerely_yours，

　　Li_Hua

　　Writing 5

　　下面的柱状图(bar chart)显示了你校上周针对“偶像崇拜类别”的调查结果。请你用英语给21st Century报社的编辑写一封信，报道你校的调查结果，并对此结果发表你的看法。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2.开头和结尾已为你写好；

　　参考词汇：偶像idol

　　Dear Editor，

　　We made a survey in our school last week and I'd like to tell you something about the results.____________________________________

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　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　One Possible Version：

　　Dear_Editor，

　　We_made_a_survey_in_our_school_last_week_and_I'd_like_to_tell_you_something_about_the_results.

　　As is demonstrated in the bar chart, great mind worship occupies 47% of the idol worship, followed by celebrity worship which gains the percentage of 38%. 11% of the students surveyed adore people around them, for instance, teachers, parents or friends. Students without idols account for the rest of 4%.

　　Apparently, idol worship has become a common social phenomenon among the adolescents. There is no denying that idol worship inspires us to focus on their achievements, which come from diligence, effort and persistence. However, blind worship is not supposed to be advocated because it will lead to extreme behavior easily. As far as I am concerned, we should avoid blind worship and learn to worship our idols rationally.

　　Yours_sincerely，

　　Li_Hua

　　Writing 6

　　假定你是李华，计划寒假找份兼职工作。下面的招聘广告引起了你的注意，请根据要点(箭头所指内容)写一封申请信。

　　注意：1.词数100左右；

　　2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

　　3.开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Mr Smith，

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　　One Possible Version：

　　Dear_Mr_Smith，

　　I've read your advertisement for an assistant teacher for a children's winter camp. I am quite interested in this position. I am outgoing, energetic, well­organized, and responsible. And most importantly, I love working with children! In the past two years, as the monitor in my class, I have proved myself to be an excellent helper to my teachers. I speak fluent English, which enables me to help native English teachers communicate freely and effectively with students in an English­only environment.

　　I will soon have a three­week winter vacation, so I have no problem working evenings and weekends. I can start working from the end of this month. I would be pleased to assist both the teachers and students in this challenging and rewarding environment.

　　Looking forward to your early reply.

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　易错题：审题不细，偏离主题

　　[例]　某高中对300名高三学生睡眠时间不足的原因作了调查，结果如下。请根据图表一提供的信息用英语描述高三学生的睡眠情况，并针对图表二中任意一个数据所反映的情况发表你的看法。

　　注意：1.文中不得出现考生的具体信息；

　　2．词数120左右。

　　学生作文

　　[错因分析]　考生只注意到了图表一所提供的信息：高三学生每天睡眠时间表。所以考生只简单地罗列了这些具体的事实，而没有结合图表二中的数据分析学生睡眠不足的原因，这样造成了理解上的错误，写作重点也就不突出了，也偏离了写作的主题。

　　[心得体会]