2017届河北省衡水名校高考英语一轮复习撬题对点练：专题29 （半）开放作文（含解析）

　　Writing 1

　　Section C(25 marks)

　　Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below.

　　请以老师当众表扬你为话题，用下面所给句子开头，续写一篇英语短文。

　　As a student， I can tell you that there is nothing better than being praised by my teacher before my classmates.

　　注意：1.将所给句子写在答题卡上；

　　2．续写词数不少于120个；

　　3．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

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　　One Possible Version：

　　As_a_student,_I_can_tell_you_that_there_is_nothing_better_than_being_praised_by_my_teacher_before_my_classmates. I still remember a

　　maths lesson.

　　My maths teacher copied a challenging problem on the blackboard and asked the whole class whether there would be one student who knew how to work it out. Several minutes passed but the whole class was in complete silence. As a matter of fact, I came across the problem in a reference book the other day, so I gathered my courage, walked to the blackboard and worked it out in no time. What a surprised expression was on my maths teacher's face! He felt so happy that he praised me in public, saying that I was an intelligent student. At that moment, I became the focus of the whole class and was full of great pride and confidence.

　　Since then,

　　maths has become one of my favorite subjects,

　　and I have also made rapid progress in maths. I appreciate my maths teacher's praise and encouragement very much.

　　Writing 2

　　请根据以下提示，并结合具体事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Questioning is a bridge to learning. When you begin to doubt something and search for an answer, you will learn.

　　注意：1.无须写标题；

　　2．除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　3．内容必须结合你生活中的具体事例；

　　4．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　5．词数不少于120，如引用提示语则不计入总词数。

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　　One Possible Version：

　　Questioning can lead to searching for an answer. If we are in the habit of raising doubts as to whether what we are told is true,

　　we can find the correct answer and learn more.

　　Two years ago, our teacher offered us an answer to a difficult math problem in class. Although the answer seemed a little strange, nobody but I doubted it. Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way.

　　Half an hour later,

　　I managed to find the correct answer.

　　When I showed my answer to him, the teacher praised me for my independent thinking.

　　From this experience I have learnt that questioning can serve as a bridge that helps us to seek the truth.

　　Writing 3

　　某英文报社组织主题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须包括：

　　1．该谚语的含义；

　　2．体现该谚语含义的个人经历。

　　①A friend in need is a friend indeed.

　　②Where there's a will, there's a way.

　　注意：1.词数120～150；

　　2.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。

　　参考词汇：谚语proverb

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　　One Possible Version：

　　Where there is a will, there is a way

　　I first saw this sentence when I entered junior high school. The moment I

　　came into the classroom, I saw the sentence on the blackboard.

　　I like the proverb because it tells a valuable philosophy of life. Achieving

　　our goals is always not easy, but

　　if we

　　have a strong will, we are sure to realize

　　them.

　　Once I was not very good at English. I didn't know enough English words

　　and my grammar was also poor, which really made me upset. Fortunately, my

　　English teacher noticed my bad situation and said to me, “Don't lose heart. Remember: where

　　there

　　is a will, there is a way.” Suddenly I was reminded of the

　　sentence on the blackboard!

　　From then on, I decided to work hard on my English and it finally paid

　　off. My English improved a lot, and more importantly, I gained much confidence.

　　Writing 4

　　请结合材料，按要求用英文写作。

　　“My friend falls, I laugh; my phone falls, I cry.”

　　要求：1.就此材料发表你的看法；

　　2．紧扣材料，有明确的观点；

　　3．词数不少于60。

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　　One Possible Version：

　　It is a common phenomenon that some people always say

　　“My friend

　　falls, I

　　laugh; my

　　phone falls, I

　　cry.”

　　I

　　don't

　　think

　　it

　　a

　　reasonable

　　practice

　　for

　　them to behave that way in our society.

　　For one thing, more and more studies have reported that mobile phone

　　addiction causes selfishness, unawareness of the needs of others and disconnection from reality. Secondly, friends are more important than phones in our

　　daily life. As is known to us all, if we are in trouble, it is not our phones but

　　our friends that can really help us out.

　　All

　　in

　　all, good interpersonal skills are a must for our future social life, so

　　put your phone away and make some good friends, which is a really wise move.

　　Writing 5

　　你校正在开展“英语读书周”活动，该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句并相互交流。以下是某同学摘录的句子：A little more persistence, a little more effort, and what seemed hopeless failure may turn to glorious success.请按下列要求用英语写一篇100～120词的短文：

　　1．针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；

　　2．举例说明理由。

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　　One Possible Version：

　　I like this saying because it stresses the importance of persistence and effort. A lot of people have great ambitions and are eager for success. However, many give up halfway because they lack persistence. Actually, if we keep on trying and don't give up easily, we can achieve our goals in the end.

　　Take English writer J．K. Rowling for example. J. K. Rowling had been refused many times before her manuscripts of the Harry Potter books were accepted by publishers. However, she didn't lose heart and went on with her writing. It was her persistence and effort that led to her success as a popular writer.

　　Whatever we do, we should stick to our dreams and keep on trying. Then we are sure to succeed.

　　Writing 6

　　最近，某英文报纸的Readers' Voices专栏推出一个话题“Should parents encourage their children to share housework？”邀请读者参与讨论。你打算参与这个讨论，请写一篇英语短文，阐述你的观点和看法。

　　注意：词数120左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Editor，

　　I am Li Hua. I am writing to_________________________________

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　　Do you agree with me?

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　One Possible Version：

　　Dear_Editor，

　　I_am_Li_Hua._I_am_writing_to_ express my opinion on whether parents should encourage their children to share housework at home.

　　Nowadays, many parents don't allow their children to share housework at home, thinking that they are so busy with their lessons that they have no time for housework.

　　Actually it is wrong for children not to share housework with their parents because they have to live an independent life when they grow up. So it is necessary for them to learn to

　　take good care of themselves.

　　Doing housework provides a chance for children to learn some life skills, which are beneficial to their future development.

　　Therefore, I think parents should encourage their children to do some housework at home.

　　Do_you_agree_with_me?

　　Yours，

　　Li_Hua

　　Writing 7

　　火车、地铁、公交车内的“低头族”越来越多，尤其是年轻人，上车后很快拿出手机，不管路程长短，不论坐着还是站着，人人眼睛都盯着手机屏幕，有的人走路也在看手机……针对这一现象，发表你的看法。

　　注意：1.行文连贯流畅；

　　2．词数100左右。

　　参考词汇：低头族phubber

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　　One Possible Version：

　　The mobile phone has been part of our life. Mobile phones bring us much convenience. However, more and more phubbers, especially young people, would like to stare at their screens, surfing the Internet or playing games, whether they are on a bus or a train, and no matter how far the journey is. And they will not even miss the chance to surf the Internet while crossing the street. They never care about what happens around.

　　As far as I am concerned, phubbing on a moving bus does harm to their eyes. Besides, phubbing is also dangerous while crossing the street. I hope phubbers stop staring at their mobile phones and hold up their heads to enjoy surroundings.

　　Writing 8

　　请根据以下提示，结合你生活中的一个事例，用英语写一篇短文。

　　A life without a goal is a life without hope.

　　注意：1.无须写标题；

　　2．除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　3．内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；

　　4．文中不得透露个人姓名及班级名称；

　　5．词数为120左右。

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　　One Possible Version：

　　As John Ruskin puts it, “Living without an aim is like sailing without a compass”. Goals of life determine what we are going to be.

　　I used to be so addicted to computer games that I had little time for study and thus fell behind. My parents and teachers were greatly worried about me. It was what my English teacher said to me that helped me out. She told me that I must have my own goal of life, otherwise my future would be hopeless and that playing computer games was fun but it wouldn't guarantee me a bright future. I finally realized that I must set up a goal and work hard towards it right away. In the days that followed, whenever I felt tired or had an urge to play computer games, I thought of my goal and soon regained strength.

　　As the saying goes, a life without a goal is a life without hope. Bearing my goal of life in mind, I am always full of energy in my study.

　　Writing 9

　　近年来，名校受到越来越多的家长和学生的推崇。请你结合这个现象写一篇英语短文，分析出现“名校热”的原因，并针对这个现象谈谈你的看法。

　　注意：词数100左右。

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　　One Possible Version：

　　In recent years, more and more parents want to send their children to famous schools because they think it can ensure that their children go to famous universities.

　　It is true that famous schools are equipped with better teaching facilities. However, not every student is fit for famous schools where there is fierce competition among students. And students there have to work much harder than students in other schools.

　　I hope the government will take effective measures to make sure all the schools provide equally good education. In this way, all the students have equal right to high­quality education.

　　易错题：缺乏想象、语言运用能力

　　[例]　

　　近年来，家长在学校附近租房陪读成为一种时尚。最近，某英语报开辟了一个讨论专栏，就“Should parents accompany their studying children？”这个话题征询读者的意见。

　　假设你叫李华，是一名高中生。请根据上面的要求写一份英语稿件，谈谈家长该不该陪读。

　　注意：1.词数120左右。

　　2．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

　　Dear Editor，

　　I am Li Hua, a high school student. I am writing to share my opinion with you on whether parents should accompany their studying children.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Do you agree with me?

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　学生作文

　　[错因分析]　本文属于开放性很强的写作，对考生英语运用能力的要求很高。此类作文要求考生能够自由发挥，联系生活，给出自己的看法。此考生很好地做到了这一点，使文章脉络清晰，行文完整，是一篇非常成功的作文。但美中不足的是个别句式结构及词汇的应用。

　　[心得体会]