2017届河北省衡水名校高考英语一轮复习专题撬分练：专题14 短文改错（含解析）

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　　基础组Correction 1

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　　[2016·衡水二中仿真]I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit for our capital city Beijing came true during the National Day holiday this year. I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents on October 1, which we watched a flag－raising ceremony. While I watched the flag rising slow, I sang the national anthem to music, feeling extremely exciting. Then we go to some other famous tourist attraction, like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proud, thought of the old saying that

　　“He who don't climb the Great Wall is not a true man.” Although I was tired, but I really had a good time.

　　答案　

　　I like traveling and my dream of paying a visit

　　our capital city Beijing came true during the National Day holiday this year. I went to Tian'anmen Square with my parents on October 1,

　　we watched

　　flag－raising ceremony. While I watched the flag rising ， I sang the national anthem to music, feeling extremely . Then we

　　to some other famous tourist ， like the Great Wall. Standing on the Great Wall, I felt very proud,

　　of the old saying that

　　“He who

　　climb the Great Wall is not a true man.” Although I was tired,

　　I really had a good time.

　　Correction 2

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　　[2016·枣强中学期中]There is common phenomenon nowadays which parents arrange everything for their children and try to pave the way for their success. That is of greatly concern. I'm strongly opposed of this kind of “love”. For one thing, children become very reliant on their parents that they fail to have independent thoughts or creative idea. For another, overprotecting the children or giving out too much care is extremely bad for our development in the future. I think only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and developing by themselves can they grow up to being independent and become truly successful.

　　答案　

　　There is

　　common phenomenon nowadays

　　parents arrange everything for their children and try to pave the way for their success. That is of

　　concern. I'm strongly opposed

　　this kind of “love”. For one thing, children become

　　reliant on their parents that they fail to have independent thoughts or creative . For another, overprotecting the children or giving

　　too much care is extremely bad for

　　development in the future. I think only by encouraging the children to overcome difficulties and

　　by themselves can they grow up to

　　independent and become truly successful.

　　Correction 3

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　　[2016·衡水二中热身]

　　July 24th, ThursdaySunny

　　On the way to the classroom, beautiful scenery came into my sight. Both side of the road were lined with a plenty of trees, green and tall. When raise my head, I got a view of many lovely birds flying free in the blue sky. Then I lost in thought. How I wished I were a bird, that could go wherever it wanted and did whatever it liked. Impossible like it was, I still felt very happy. How I was grateful that he was a man who had the ability to imagine and enjoy the happiness it brought! As I walked on slowly, a bright smile appeared in my face.

　　答案　

　　July 24th, ThursdaySunny

　　On the way to the classroom, beautiful scenery came into my sight. Both

　　of the road were lined with

　　plenty of trees, green and tall. When

　　my head, I got a view of many lovely birds flying

　　in the blue sky. Then I

　　lost in thought. How I wished I were a bird,

　　could go wherever it wanted and

　　whatever it liked. Impossible

　　it was, I still felt very happy. How I was grateful that

　　was a man who had the ability to imagine and enjoy the happiness it brought! As I walked on slowly, a bright smile appeared

　　my face.

　　Correction 4

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　　[2016·武邑中学期末]My father was the biology professor. When I was young he was used to take me to the biology lab, there I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My father also influenced me through nature walks. He often took me on a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and firefly. He seemed know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later, think about my father and his influence on my life, I feel very luckily. I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from her. He helps me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me.

　　答案　

　　My father was

　　biology professor. When I

　　young he was used to take me to the biology lab,

　　I saw pigs, cats and other animals. My father also influenced me through nature walks. He often took me

　　a walk in the backyard. We would catch frogs, snakes and . He seemed

　　know everything about wildlife. Eighteen years later,

　　about my father and his influence on my life, I feel very . I am grateful that I got the chance to learn from . He

　　me develop my interest in all that was alive and sometimes dead around me.

　　Correction 5

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　　[2016·衡水二中预测]

　　Dear editor，

　　I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to express my opinion on if mobile phones should be allowed in middle schools. Nowadays mobile phones have become a popular means of communication. However, many a school don't allow students to bring mobile phones to school. I think it is complete wrong.

　　As we know it, the 21st century is a modern age where is full of information. The mobile phone is one of the quickest tool to exchange information.

　　It's such useful invention that it makes our life more convenient.

　　Therefore, if something urgent happened suddenly, we can call for help immediately. What's more, we can relax ourselves by playing games or listening to music before we work hard all day.

　　I hope the students can be allowed to using mobile phones at school. Do you agree with me?

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　答案　

　　Dear editor，

　　I am Li Hua, a student from Xinhua Middle School. I am writing to express my opinion on

　　mobile phones should be allowed in middle schools. Nowadays mobile phones have become a popular means of communication. However, many a school

　　allow students to bring mobile phones to school. I think it is

　　wrong.

　　As we know , the 21st century is a modern age

　　is full of information. The mobile phone is one of the quickest

　　to exchange information.

　　It's such

　　useful invention that it makes our life more convenient.

　　Therefore, if something urgent

　　suddenly, we can call for help immediately. What's more, we can relax ourselves by playing games or listening to music

　　we work hard all day.

　　I hope the students can be allowed to

　　mobile phones at school. Do you agree with me?

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Huar

　　Correction 6

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　　[2016·枣强中学月考]Yesterday I stopped at a traffic signal.

　　As I waited for the lights to turn green, a boy approached to me. He was holding a bunch of pens and asks me to buy some. I told him I didn't need some. He explained they were very cheaply. I saw him going to others and no one bought his pens.

　　My friend, that was with me, suggested giving the boy some money, so she wouldn't bother us. I did give him money by buying two of his pen. I explained my friend that the boy was trying to help his family by doing something. This I thought was well worth praised.

　　答案　

　　Yesterday I stopped at a traffic signal.

　　As I waited for the lights to turn green, a boy approached

　　me. He was holding a bunch of pens and

　　me to buy some. I told him I didn't need . He explained they were very . I saw him going to others

　　no one bought his pens.

　　My friend,

　　was with me, suggested giving the boy some money, so

　　wouldn't bother us. I did give him money by buying two of his . I explained

　　my friend that the boy was trying to help his family by doing something. This I thought was well worth .

　　能力组

　　Correction 1

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　　[2016·衡水二中猜题]This morning I lost my MP3 player on my way to school. It was bought with the money I had been saved for months. Too upset was I that I could hardly concentrate in what the teacher was saying. After class, my head teacher called me out and asked if I had lost something or not. It turned out that my MP3 player slipped out of my pockets while I was walking. And fortunately, a young lady walked behind me noticed it. She found the school guard and gave them to him.

　　How excited and how deep moved I was to get my MP3 player back! I want to be kind person like the lady.

　　答案　

　　This morning I lost my MP3 player on my way to school. It was bought with the money I had

　　saved for months.

　　upset was I that I could hardly concentrate

　　what the teacher was saying. After class, my head teacher called me out and asked

　　I had lost something or not. It turned out that my MP3 player slipped out of my

　　while I was walking.

　　fortunately, a young lady 或 behind me noticed it. She found the school guard and gave

　　to him.

　　How excited and how

　　moved I was to get my MP3 player back! I want to be

　　kind person like the lady.

　　Correction 2

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　　[2016·衡水二中一轮检测]During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do everything meaningful instead of stay at home. Before long I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there like a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for three week. The job was hard and bored and seemed endless, what made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. But I stuck it with great determination. Every day I start off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began. Now, I understand that what work means. I think it is really a successfully experience.

　　答案　

　　During the summer vacation this year, I thought I should do

　　meaningful instead of

　　at home. Before long I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there

　　a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for three . The job was hard and

　　and seemed endless,

　　made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. But I stuck

　　it with great determination. Every day I

　　off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began. Now, I understand that what work means. I think it is really a

　　experience.

　　Correction 3限时：6分钟

　　[2016·冀州中学周测]Last term, I joined in a marathon being hosted by the city sports club. I was so good at run that I had great confidence at winning the match. I was just about to approach the finishing line while one of my competitors fell down and got injured. I could have ignored them and dashed to the end, and I stopped to help him. There was no doubt that the result was not good and people call me loser. Sometimes, it is kindness rather than achievements that are of more important. Though I was a loser in the match, I was winner in my life.

　　答案　

　　Last term, I joined in a marathon being hosted by the city sports club. I was so good at

　　that I had great confidence

　　winning the match. I was just about to approach the finishing line

　　one of my competitors fell down and got injured. I could have ignored

　　and dashed to the end,

　　I stopped to help him. There was no doubt that the result was not good and people

　　me loser. Sometimes, it is kindness rather than achievements that

　　of more . Though I was a loser in the match, I was

　　winner in my life.

　　Correction 4

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　　[2016·冀州中学热身]I was very homesick when I was studying

　　the UK in last year. To fight against homesickness, I make a decision to occupy me with various courses and social activities. I was also active in making new friend. When I missed my family, that was a great comfort to have closely friends around, sharing my joys and sorrows. When I felt homesick, I would turn to my friends, which gave me lots of good advice or comfort. Besides, joined a few clubs kept me from missing my family, which enriched my life experience at same time.

　　答案　

　　I was very homesick when I was studying in the UK in last year. To fight against homesickness, I

　　a decision to occupy

　　with various courses and social activities. I was also active in making new . When I missed my family,

　　was a great comfort to have

　　friends around, sharing my joys and sorrows. When I felt homesick, I would turn to my friends,

　　whic gave me lots of good advice

　　comfort. Besides,

　　a few clubs kept me from missing my family, which enriched my life experience at

　　same time.

　　Correction 5

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　　[2016·枣强中学周测]I don't think it's a good idea listen to music while doing other things. That is why listening to music might draw your attentions away from what you are doing. And sometimes it can put yourself into danger. If you listen when you are studying, which total concentration is needed, you will find the results out unsatisfying. If you listen on the road, you may get aware of the potential dangers due to distraction. What's worst, listening to music while riding a bike, you risk been knocked down and hurt as you cannot hear the warning sounds from cars. Therefore, I am strong against this practice.

　　答案　

　　I don't think it's a good idea

　　listen to music while doing other things. That is

　　listening to music might draw your

　　away from what you are doing. And sometimes it can put yoursel into danger. If you listen when you are studying,

　　total concentration is needed, you will find the results

　　unsatisfying. If you listen on the road, you may get

　　of the potential dangers due to distraction. What's ， listening to music while riding a bike, you risk

　　knocked down and hurt as you cannot hear the warning sounds from cars. Therefore, I am

　　against this practice.

　　Correction 6

　　限时：7分钟

　　[2016·冀州中学预测]I'd like to tell you why I learn English. I often read English aloud and try my best learn something important by hearts, which helps me remember it easily and form the habit of thinking in English. I listen to a lot and talk with others in English. In this way, I had improved both my listening and speaking. I keep the diary in English every day but my written English is improving too. I also try to master necessary grammar. By this means, I can express myself in English correct. That's the way on which I have been learning English. I hope it will be of useful to you.

　　答案　

　　I'd like to tell you

　　I learn English. I often read English aloud and try my best

　　learn something important by ， which helps me remember it easily and form the habit of thinking in English. I listen

　　a lot and talk with others in English. In this way, I

　　improved both my listening and speaking. I keep

　　diary in English every day

　　my written English is improving too. I also try to master necessary grammar. By this means, I can express myself in English . That's the way

　　which I have been learning English. I hope it will be / to you.

　　强化组

　　Correction 1

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　　[2016·武邑中学预测]I'd like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.

　　First, it was important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practicing with your fellow students. Then, it also help to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible. It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!

　　Besides, it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.

　　You can also make more Chinese friends, they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try to speak Chinese as many as possible.

　　答案

　　I'd like to give you some

　　on how to learn Chinese well.

　　First, it

　　important to take a Chinese course, as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and

　　with your fellow students. Then, it also

　　to watch TV and read books, newspapers and magazines in

　　Chinese whenever possible. It will make you familiar

　　Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!

　　Besides, it is a good idea

　　learn and sing Chinese songs, because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more .

　　You can also make more Chinese friends,

　　will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese. Try to speak Chinese as

　　as possible.

　　Correction 2

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　　[2016·冀州中学仿真]Trying to come to a decision complete on your own can be risky. Some decisions are so important that they shouldn't made without talking to others first. There have several advantages if you consult the persons you trust. For one thing, they can give you valuable advice and they may point out some things you may have been overlooked. For another, friends may stop you from make big mistakes.

　　When consulting others about importance decisions, you should keep two things in mind. The first one is that you need to find someone whom you respected enough to trust his or her judgment.

　　The second thing to consider is how to do if you disagree with this person.

　　Maybe turning to a third or fourth person for help is the best option. In a word, making any big decision alone can lead in problems. Talking to friends or family members first are always a good idea.

　　答案　

　　Trying to come to a decision

　　on your own can be risky. Some decisions are so important that they shouldn't

　　made without talking to others first. There

　　several advantages if you consult the persons you trust. For one thing, they can give you valuable advice and they may point out some things you may have

　　overlooked. For another, friends may stop you from

　　big mistakes.

　　When consulting others about

　　decisions, you should keep two things in mind. The first one is that you need to find someone whom you

　　enough to trust his or her judgment.

　　The second thing to consider is

　　to do if you disagree with this person.

　　Maybe turning to a third or fourth person for help is the best option. In a word, making any big decision alone can lead

　　problems.

　　Talking to friends or family members first

　　always a good idea.

　　Correction 3

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　　[2016·武邑中学猜题]It is three years now since I graduate from Changchun Foreign Languages School.

　　Last Sunday, the class that I was in held a get­together, which took us a long time to prepare. It was indeed not easy to get touch with everybody and set a properly time for all of us. We all enjoyed a precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories and the people they were familiar with. It was a pity which some of our classmates were not present as they had gone to abroad for further studies. And they either called back or sent greeting card from different places.

　　答案

　　It is three years now since I

　　from Changchun Foreign Languages School.

　　Last Sunday, the class that I was in held a get­together, which took us a long time to prepare. It was indeed not easy to get

　　touch with everybody and set a

　　time for all of us. We all enjoyed

　　precious day greatly,

　　the time we spent together. It reminded us of the interesting stories and the people

　　were familiar with. It was a pity

　　some of our classmates were not present as they had gone

　　abroad for further studies.

　　they either called back or sent greeting

　　from different places.

　　Correction 4

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　　[2016·衡水中学热身]Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened, which causes serious damage. It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life.

　　In this case, we should take effective measure which can solve this problem. Firstly, our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules, and pay attention to food safety, because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless. Secondly, you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts. Thirdly, our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying.

　　As far as I am concerned, improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound.

　　答案　

　　Recently campus safety has become

　　public concern since a series of violent attacks happened, which

　　serious damage. It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come

　　in our daily life.

　　In this case, we should take effective

　　which can solve this problem. Firstly, our students should realize we must follow our school

　　traffic rules, and pay attention to food safety, because many incidents happen just because

　　we are too careless. Secondly,

　　should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts. Thirdly, our government and schools should provide surroundings

　　our students can be buried in studying.

　　As far as I am concerned, improving campus safety is

　　important that we all should try our best to make

　　on campus safe and sound.

　　Correction 5

　　限时：7分钟

　　[2016·武邑中学期中]My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student, who devoted herself to her lessons every day.

　　Last Saturday, as usual,

　　she went to several class. In the evening, she continued to study at home until deeply into the night. She was too sleepy and tired that she couldn't work effectively. In Sunday morning, she was about to do her lessons while her father came up and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside.

　　Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt relaxing in the open air. On the Monday, Mary was energetic but active in class. She spent the whole day in the countryside, and Mary said what she had done was worthwhile.

　　答案　

　　My niece Mary is a Senior 3 student, who devote herself to her lessons every day.

　　Last Saturday, as usual,

　　she went to several . In the evening, she continued to study at home until

　　deepl into the night. She was

　　to

　　sleepy and tired that she couldn't work effectively.

　　Sunday morning, she was about to do her lessons

　　her father came up

　　and advised her to take a break. Soon they came up

　　a good idea. They decided to go cycling in the countryside.

　　Mary enjoyed herself, competing and chatting with her father, and felt

　　in the open air. On the Monday,

　　Mary was energetic

　　active in class. She spent the whole day in the countryside, and Mary said what she had done was worthwhile.

　　Correction 6

　　限时：8分钟

　　[2016·枣强中学一轮检测]I still remember why I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates played table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I wanted to play just as good. Later on, I often watch them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing hardly until I became too confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of term, I became one of the best players in my class. I am really proud for the experience.

　　It helps me realize that I can fulfill our potential but achieve our goals through hard work.

　　答案　

　　I still remember

　　I became a good table tennis player. The first day I went to high school, I saw some of my classmates

　　table tennis. Amazed at how skillful they were, I wanted to play just as . Later on, I often

　　them carefully to learn their techniques. Then I kept practicing hardl until I became

　　confident enough to challenge the good players. At the end of

　　term, I became one of the best players in my class. I am really proud

　　the experience.

　　It helps me realize that

　　can fulfill our potential

　　achieve our goals through hard work.