浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（1）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（1）下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way.

　　Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

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　　简要描述这一交通问题分析造成该问题的主要原因注意：词数100120，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems are arising. __________________________________________________________________________________

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　　第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike.

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　　He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man

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　　to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him

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　　where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to

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　　call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use theks**5u

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　　mouth-to-mouth way.

　　Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said

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　　that ∧we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first

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　　aid can make a really difference.

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　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　One possible version：

　　In spite of the fast development of transportation in the major cities of China, more and more traffic problems are arising. A serious one is heavy traffic. Very often, we see cars in front of us parked on both sides of the street, driving down the street, or stuck in traffic with drivers waiting impatiently. So what on earth causes this problem?

　　In the first place, vast population contributes to heavy traffic and growing numbers of private cars add to the pressure on the severe traffic conditions. What’s worse, some people are unaware of the importance of obeying traffic regulations, so it’s not uncommon to see accidents blocking traffic.

　　Personally, I think that rather than promote private cars, it’s better to improve the public transportation system with scientific road design and proper management. More importantly, never can traffic jams be eased without self-disciplined citizens.

　　(123 words)