浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（2）

　　浙江省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：短文改错+书面表达（）10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

　　下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

　　例如：It was very nice to get your invitation to spend/ weekend with you. Luckily I was

　　the

　　am

　　completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”. I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8pm in Friday evening.

　　on

　　Today is Mother’s Day. I love mother so much that I’ve done many things for him. In the morning I buy some flowers with my pocket money and put them in a vase. In the afternoon, I went to buy some vegetable and cooked simple but delicious dinner for my family. After the meal, I gave mother a card what I made myself and said “Happy Mother’s Day” to her. Then I told her to pay more attention on her health and not overwork. I also promised to help her to do some housework from today on. Heard the words, mother was moved to tears.

　　Today is a specially day, warm but meaningful.

　　第二节：书面表达（满分30分）

　　目前决定，在社会上引起了很大反响。请你根据以下观点，就其利弊写一篇英语短文，并提出自己的观点。2. 有助于学生全面发展。

　　反对者观点：1.实际操作中标准不易掌握。

　　2. 诚信和公正受到挑战。

　　注意 1.词数100-120左右，信的开头已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

　　2. 可根据内容要点提示适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

　　3. 不要逐字逐词翻译。 Dear Editor,

　　It’s reported that famous high school will admit some junior high school graduates who are specialized in music or PE. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　第一节：短文改错. him---her

　　2. buy---bought

　　3. vegetable---vegetables

　　4. cooked∧a

　　5. what ---that/which或去掉

　　6. on---to

　　7. not∧to

　　8. Heard---Hearing 或∧Having

　　9. specially ---special

　　10. but---and

　　第二节：书面表达One possible version：

　　Dear Editor,

　　It’s reported that a famous high school will admit some junior high graduates who are specialized in music or PE. This has aroused a heated discussion in society. Opinions are divided.

　　Some people who support the idea hold that enrolling students with special talents in music or PE shows scores are not the only means to decide whether students can get into a good high school. Thanks to such a change, some excellent students can be admitted by a good school now, which in turn will encourage students’ all-round development. Meanwhile, others argue that it’s difficult to adopt practical standards which can be accepted by society. Besides, it will greatly challenge the honesty and justice.

　　In my opinion, I think it is a good try and of great benefit if the headmasters can avoid the disadvantages，such as injustice and dishonesty.

　　Best wishes！

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua