河北省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练 短文改错+书面表达（35）

　　河北省2017高考英语二轮复习专题训练：

　　短文改错+书面表达（35）

　　短文改错

　　此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：

　　如无错误，该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；

　　如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(八)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　In my village，a lot of children were leaving school for

　　　 .______

　　various of reasons. Some families are too poor to send their

　　　.______

　　children to school, but they have to earn money to support their

　　3.______

　　families. Many parents don’t think it useless to send their

　　4.______

　　children to school. They would rather to let their children

　　5.______

　　stay at home .I feel worried this. I think every child should

　　6._____

　　have the chance to go to school .We should pay more attention to

　　7._____

　　the education of children, for we will play an important part

　　8._____

　　in our socialist construction in the future .Way must be

　　9._____

　　found prevent children from leaving off their studies.

　　10.______

　　书面表达

　　近来，你校开展“献爱心，送温暖”活动，号召广大学生向贫困或受灾地区捐款捐物。请你参考下列表格要点提示，以“捐款还是捐物”为题写一篇100-120字的英语短文。可适当增加内容。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：生活必需品 daily necessities

　　关于捐款 关于捐物

　　赞成 1．捐款可以直接帮助人们购买生活必需用品或用于重建家园等。 1．捐物可以旧物利用。

　　反对 2．中学生无生活来源，无钱捐献。 2．捐物可能造成浪费，因为有些人得到的捐物并非自己所需要的物品。

　　. were → are

　　2. 去掉of . but→and

　　4. useless → useful

　　5. 去掉第一个to . worried about

　　7. 正确

　　8.we→they .Way→ Ways

　　10. to prevent

　　One possible version:

　　We often give money to the people in poor or disaster-stricken areas. But some students don’t think it a good way to do so.

　　In their opinion, money can be used to buy daily necessities and can help people rebuild their hometowns, while sometimes the things people there receive are not what they need actually.

　　But some other students think that giving used clothing to the people in those areas is better. Many people, especially in rich areas and in cities, have much clothing they no longer like or need. By giving it away to the needy people，we can make the best use of it. Besides, we are just students, and we have no incomes of our own.

　　Anyhow, no matter which way is considered better, we should try our best to help those who need help