2017届高考英语书面表达练讲指导评析（第二部分）专题二：图画式专题练评2

　　2017届高考英语书面表达专题指导、练讲及习作评析（第二部分专题练评）（专题二 图画式2）

　　下面四幅图画从四个方面反映了某市公共场所存在的不良现象。请你简单描述四幅图画，对其中某一种现象陈述你的看法。

　　注意：

　　1.词数150 字左右；

　　2.可适当增加细节。

　　参考词汇：乱写乱画scrabbles

　　讲

　　评

　　公民道德话题的看图写作，均是现实生活中的片段展示，探讨面对公民道德缺失的社会现象个人的感

　　想，即公民道德缺失原因与解决方法，考生应该有话可说。本篇看图作文，属于先叙后议的体

　　认真看图，结合文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么。Mind Your Behavior in Public Places”，正好与本篇的主题一样。

　　描述时要适当增加细节

　　骑车者闯红灯

　　①Some bicyclists run the red traffic lights without obeying traffic rules.

　　②Some bicyclists turn a blind eye to the red traffic lights crossing the road without stopping.

　　乱扔垃圾

　　①Some people don’t want to take any trouble throwing rubbish into the dustbin nearby but around the dustbin to make the ground dirty.

　　②Some people don’t throw rubbish into the dustbin nearby but around the dustbin to make the ground dirty.

　　看电影时打电话

　　①In the cinema, we often hear some people talking loudly on mobile phones to disturb the audience around.

　　②Seeing the film, we often find some people talking loudly on mobile phones to make the audience annoyed.

　　名胜古迹上的乱写乱画

　　①Very often, on scenic spots we can see scrabbles spoiling places of historic interest and scenic beauty.

　　②On scenic spots some people scrabble to express personal views and feelings spoiling the beauty of scenic spots

　　加上引起话题的句子以及过渡词将四幅图所反映的内容连贯表述出来。

　　With the development of society, more and more attention has been paid to appropriate manners, especially in public places. However, there are still some inappropriate behaviors. As is shown in the above four pictures, bicyclists run the red traffic lights without obeying traffic rules. Some people don’t want to take any trouble throwing rubbish into the dustbin nearby but around the dustbin to make the ground dirty. In the cinema, we often hear some people talking loudly on mobile phones to disturb the audience around. Very often, on scenic spots we can see scrabbles spoiling places of historic interest and scenic beauty.

　　就四幅图所反映的现象谈谈自己的看法时（题目要求：对其中某一种现象陈述看法），我们有四种选择，所以我们可以选择我们最拿手的一种来表述。

　　谈谈自己的看法，我们可以按照这样的思路来进行：对某种现象亮出自己的观点——说明此种现象给社会带来的危害——提出解决问题的办法。

　　我们分四种情况来讨论。

　　1.对第一幅图反映的现象谈自己的看法

　　So far as I am concerned, I don't doubt that it is wrong for bicyclists to run red lights, for this behavior blocks traffic, seriously affects drivers and causes accidents to happen, endangering the safety of bicyclists themselves and drivers as well. Therefore, I think everyone is supposed to stop when the traffic light turns red. Once someone doesn’t obey the rule, he or she must be punished seriously.

　　2.对第二幅图反映的现象谈自己的看法

　　In my point of view, throwing rubbish here and there should be forbidden. If everyone behaves in this way, the city will be a big rubbish dump with flies flying round and people will live in a world of diseases. Therefore, to keep public places tidy and clean, measures should be taken by local administration organizations to enhance people's consciousness to protect environment.

　　3.对第三幅图反映的现象谈自己的看法

　　I’m strongly against talking loudly in the cinema, for this behavior shows disrespect to others. Besides, it disturbs the audience around and makes others feel very annoyed. Therefore, my suggestion is that some measures should be taken to prevent such a behavior in public places.

　　4.对第四幅图反映的现象谈自己的看法

　　In my opinion, scrabbling on the historical monuments is not only a bad manners but also a crime, for this behavior does great damage to historical sites. As we know, a historical sites is the witness of the historical development of a city and an important basis for historical research. Therefore, measures should be taken by the local government to enhance people's consciousness to protect historical sites.

　　参考答案1

　　With the development of society, more and more attention has been paid to appropriate seriously.

　　参考答案2

　　With the development of society, more and more attention has been paid to appropriate manners, especially in public places. However, there are still some inappropriate behaviors. As is shown in the above four pictures, bicyclists run the red traffic lights without obeying traffic rules. Some people don’t want to take any trouble throwing rubbish into the dustbin nearby but throw litter around the dustbin to make the ground dirty. In the cinema, we often hear some people talking loudly on mobile phones to disturb the audience around. Very often, on scenic spots we can see scrabbles spoiling places of historic interest and scenic beauty.

　　In my point of view, throwing rubbish here and there should be forbidden. If everyone behaves in this way, the city will be a big rubbish dump with flies flying round and people will live in a world of diseases. Therefore, to keep public places tidy and clean, measures should be taken by local administration organizations to enhance people's consciousness to protect environment.

　　参考答案3

　　With the development of society, more and more attention has been paid to appropriate manners, especially in public places. However, there are still some inappropriate behaviors. As is shown in the above four pictures, bicyclists run the red traffic lights without obeying traffic rules. Some people don’t want to take any trouble throwing rubbish into the dustbin nearby but throw litter around the dustbin to make the ground dirty. In the cinema, we often hear some people talking loudly on mobile phones to disturb the audience around. Very often, on scenic spots we can see scrabbles spoiling places of historic interest and scenic beauty.

　　I’m strongly against talking loudly in the cinema, for this behavior shows disrespect to others. Besides, it disturbs the audience around and makes others feel very annoyed. Therefore, my suggestion is that some measures should be taken to prevent such a behavior in public places.

　　参考答案4

　　With the development of society, more and more attention has been paid to appropriate manners, especially in public places. However, there are still some inappropriate behaviors. As is shown in the above four pictures, bicyclists run the red traffic lights without obeying traffic rules. Some people don’t want to take any trouble throwing rubbish into the dustbin nearby but throw litter around the dustbin to make the ground dirty. In the cinema, we often hear some people talking loudly on mobile phones to disturb the audience around. Very often, on scenic spots we can see scrabbles spoiling places of historic interest and scenic beauty.

　　In my opinion, scrabbling on the historical monuments is not only a bad manners but also a crime, for this behavior does great damage to historical sites. As we know, a historical sites is the witness of the historical development of a city and an important basis for historical research. Therefore, measures should be taken by the local government to enhance people's consciousness to protect historical sites.

　　同步练习一

　　假定你班在“珍爱生命，拒闯红灯”教育活动中，召开了一次主题班会。请你根据下表中的内容，用英语写一篇短文。

　　行人(pedestrians)闯红灯

　　的危害 １. 妨碍交通，影响车辆的正常行驶。

　　２. 容易引发事故，危及他人和自身的生命安全。

　　３ ……（自己设想）

　　对行人闯红灯

　　的处罚措施 １. 批评教育，让其意识到闯红灯的危害性。

　　２. 当场给予警告并罚款。

　　３ ……（自己设想）

　　注意：1.内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯；2.词数：120左右。参考词汇：jay-walk .v（乱穿马路） ；reprimand .v（批评,训诫）

　　假设你叫李华，在你居住的小区有很多乱涂乱写的现象，有人在此做广告，有人在这里画画，甚至骂人。请你根据下图内容，结合生活实际，给中国日报China Daily写一篇文章反映这种现象，说明自己对这一现象的看法，并提出解决办法。

　　注意：1.根据以上内容写一篇短文，不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；

　　2.准确使用语法和词汇，使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思；

　　3. 词数：100个左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

　　Dear editor,

　　What the picture shows is just a common scene in the neighborhoods where we live, whether it is in city or in town. Public places are now made too much use of by people.______________

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　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua

　　参考答案

　　同步练习一

　　Recently we held a class meeting to discuss the problem of pedestrians crossing the street while still take a long time to stop pedestrians from jay-walking.

　　同步练习二

　　Dear editor,

　　What the picture shows is just a common scene in the neighborhoods where we live, whether it is in city or in town. Public places are now made too much use of by people. Some make drawings or practicing their handwriting on walls in these places to show their talents or for fun. Some take advantage of such public places to make free advertisements. Others even put dirty words in these places to curse those whom they don’t like.

　　In my point of view, measures should be taken by local administration organizations to keep public places tidy, clean and well preserved. On the other hand, people should mind their behaviors. As we know, the image of a neighborhood or a city is reflected especially in public places. The practices above spoil our living environment and the impression on travelers to our hometown.

　　Yours sincerely,

　　Li Hua