高三英语备考总复习课件人教版必修1：写作进行时-记叙文 25张

　　必 修 5

　　写作进行时——文

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　　Ⅰ.写作要点

　　记叙文是以叙述为基本方法来记人、叙事，构思记叙文时，应该考虑到以下几个方面：

　　(1)场景

　　记叙文往往一开始就提供事情发生的背景，交代时间、地点和人物。

　　(2)结构

　　记叙文的叙述方式有顺叙、倒叙和插叙。

　　(3)人称

　　记叙文可用第一人称叙述，也可用第三人称叙述。

　　(4)时态

　　记叙文通常是记叙过去发生的事情，故常用过去时态。

　　Ⅱ.常用模板/句式

　　A．结构模板

　　________时间________is memorable because________人物________had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we________活动一________. Upon arrival, we began to________活动二________. Some were________活动三________. Others were________活动四________. After getting the work done, we________活动五________.

　　Seeing________活动六________， we________感受________. We feel it's our duty to________动作________．

　　B．常用句式

　　1. I was about to do....when...

　　2. Tired as we were, we still felt quite happy.

　　3. It was snowing/raining heavily on Monday morning.

　　4. Last night I was busy preparing for my test when I heard a loud noise.

　　5. It's reported that Sanlu milk powder has caused kidney stones in babies.

　　[习作点评]

　　你校上周举办了“英语周”活动。请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文，介绍“英语周”活动期间的情况并谈谈你的感受。

　　活动时间：3月15日～3月21日

　　活动对象：全体同学、英语教师以及两位英语外教

　　活动内容：……

　　活动效果：……

　　注意：1.词数120～150；

　　2．可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，语句通顺。

　　Last week our school began an “English week”．【举行活动要用hold，所以此处应该改为held。】It started on Mar. 15 and ended on Mar. 21. All the students and English teachers, included two foreign teachers from America took_part in it. 【“包括……在内”，应该使用介词including＋宾语；“参加……”最好使用高级词语“participate”，所以改为participated。】

　　During that week, we sang quite a few English songs and joined in English speaking contests developing our interest in English. 【此处应该为动词不定式作目的状语。所以改为to develop。】 In addition, we put on short English plays and watched English films, which we learned a lot. 【表示“从……中学到”，此处应该使用from which。】Besides, we had a wonderful time guessing English riddles.

　　As_everyone_knows_that practice makes perfect. 【as引导非限制性定语从句，不是主语从句的形式主语，可改为It is known that或As everyone knows，】As a result of this activity, we broadened our horizon, became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved. I think it's a effective way to learn English, so I enjoyed it very much.【此处应该使用an，后面是元音音素开头的单词。】In the future, I will spare no efforts to participate in such kind of activities if possible.

　　[跟踪演练]

　　1　(2011·福建)

　　为纪念汶川大地震三周年，某英文报发起关于灾区新貌的征文活动。请根据以下图片提示，以“Great Changes”为题，用英语写一篇短文应征。内容要点如下：

　　1．某中学灾后三年来的变化，如教学与活动场所，以及师生精神面貌等；

　　2．发生变化的原因；

　　3．你的感想。

　　注意：

　　1．短文标题与开头已给出，不计入总词数；

　　2．可根据图片提示适当发挥；

　　3．词数：120左右

　　Great Changes

　　I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.

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　　参考范文：

　　Great Changes

　　I am deeply impressed by the great changes that have taken place in the school over the past three years.

　　On May 12,2008, a severe earthquake destroyed almost everything in the school，leaving badly­damaged buildings.It is now，however，taking on a new look.Tall buildings have been put up，including classrooms and laboratory buildings，and a library.There is also a newly­built standard playground.In the new environment，teachers and students are living happily and working hard.It is really amazing that the once­ruined place has now been turned into a beautiful school，full of life.

　　Obviously ，without the help of the whole society，there would be no new school today.It is love and concern that have brought about the great changes.Many hands makes light work.We can work wonders if we unite as a family，caring for each other and helping those in need.Union is strength.

　　2　(2011·湖北)

　　请根据以下提示，结合你校园生活中的一个事例，就与人合作这一话题，用英语写一篇短文。

　　Working in groups at school is an opportunity to learn more about teamwork.Teamwork shows us how other people's roles fit the purpose of the group，and it teaches us to be patient and how to respond to different people.

　　注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

　　②除诗歌外，文体不限；

　　③内容必须结合校园生活中的一个事例；

　　④文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；

　　⑤词数为100左右。

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　　参考范文：

　　As one member of society, we always consider teamwork is essential for our success. As students, we can also learn much about teamwork from working in groups. Take one example, we once held a debate competition. And each side contained five students. We five were first debators. Before the competition, we five gathered together to make a good plan and efficient strategy. And then, each of us set out to collect information and materials for the speaking competition.

　　Afterwards, we gathered again and checked, discussed and corrected the information. Through these steps, we did win finally. So, I really realized the importance of working in groups.