高三英语备考总复习课件人教版必修2：写作进行时-议论文 23张

　　必 修 2

　　写作进行时——议论文

　　[技巧点拨]

　　.写作要点

　　要写好议论文，必须注意以下几点：

　　1．确定论点，通常在文章的第一段提出。

　　2．要有足够的论据，可以列举生活的实例。

　　3．论证要有严密的逻辑性，所有事实、原因、理由应紧密地同结论联系起来。

　　4．层次要清楚。

　　5．态度诚恳、友好，因为议论文重在说理，以理服人。

　　6．论据要充分，欲证明自己的观点必须有充分的证据。作者可以列举事实、展示数据、提供事例、借助常识或利用亲身经历。

　　Ⅱ.常用句式

　　1．Opinions vary from individual to individual.

　　2．Others argue/hold the view that...

　　3．What's important is that...

　　4．As far as I'm concerned, I prefer...

　　5．When it comes to failure, different people hold different attitudes towards it.

　　6．There is no denying that students can learn a lot from it.

　　7．It's universally acknowledged that knowledge can change one's fate.

　　8．In conclusion, I think having a very close relationship with a pet is healthy.

　　9．In short, it can be said that health is more important than wealth.

　　10．From what has been said above, we can safely draw a conclusion that attitude determines everything.

　　[习作点评]

　　新学期伊始，关于鲁迅的作品《药》、《阿Q正传》、《记念刘和珍君》等是否被淘汰出语文课本再次引发全民大讨论。教育部近日澄清：新课改教材篇目基本无变化，只有广东教育出版社进行了微调。请你根据下面的信息以“What should we do with Lu？”为题写一篇120～150词的英语短文。

　　赞成删除 1.鲁迅作品的血腥和暴力语句给我们年轻一代带来不好的影响，与现代社会不合拍。2.鲁迅作品风格陈旧，绝大多数在现代社会已无多大意义。 反对删除 1.年轻人阅读鲁迅作品可以更多地了解旧社会，从而更加热爱我们的现代生活。2.鲁迅作品对社会分析深刻而尖锐，年轻人很有必要学习他的写作风格和精神实质。

　　What should we do with Lu?

　　There has been a heated debate about the remove of Lu Xun's works from our Chinese textbooks since the beginning of this semester. 【在介词后应该使用其名词形式removal。】Towards this, we hold varied opinions. Some think that some of Lu Xun's essays are not suit for our harmonious world because the blood and violent feelings between the lines would have a bad effect on the young generation. 【“适合于……”的正确表达形式为“be

　　suitable for”；表示“血腥的”应该使用“bloody”。】 Lu_Xun's_writings_are_somewhat_old_fashioned_now,_most of them are meaningless in modern society and are hard to understand for the young generations. 【在Lu Xun's...句子前应该添加表示递进意义的What's worse；此处most of...为非限制性定语从句，them应该为which。】Therefore,_others think that new generations are

　　supposed to know about real story of the old society so that they can more love and treasure the happy life today.【此处应该为语意的转折，所以使用However。】In addition ，Lu Xun's stories are deep and sharp in languages and thoughts, which we youngsters should study and gain from contact with his spirit.

　　[踪踪演练]

　　1．(2011·陕西)

　　假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上，你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。

　　I'm the mother of a fourteen­year­old. I have a rule for my daughter：be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school, but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?

　　写作要点：

　　1．表明自己的看法；

　　2．陈述自己的理由(可举例说明)；

　　3．提出至少两条建议。

　　要求：

　　1．短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。

　　2．短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分)。

　　3．内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。

　　4．书写须清晰、工整。

　　Hi，TigerMom，

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　参考范文：

　　Hi, TigerMom，

　　What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China .My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.

　　Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health and life attitude should never be ignored.There are many examples around us.Some all­A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected .The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities.Furthermore, punishment is by no means

　　a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.

　　So I suggest that you take your friends' advice.More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities ；and let her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.

　　2．(2011·四川)

　　最近，某中学生英文报开设了“After­class Activities”的栏目。请你根据以下提示，为该栏目写一篇英文稿件，并鼓励同学们积极参加课外活动。

　　1．你校开展课外活动的情况；

　　2．你参加过的课外活动及给你带来的益处；

　　3．为同学选择课外活动提出建议；

　　4．为学校开展课外活动提出建议。

　　注意：

　　1．词数100左右；

　　2．文中不得提及人名、校名及地名；

　　3．稿件的开头已为你写好(不计入总词数)。

　　After­class Activities

　　Nowadays, after­class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.___________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　参考范文：

　　After­class Activities

　　Nowadays, after­class activities are becoming more and more popular in high schools.In our school, there are various kinds of activities, such as, arts and sports.We enjoy them very much. Playing football and reading stories are my favorite which do me a lot of good.Besides building my body and enriching my knowledge, they also free me from the heavy work of study.

　　Here I have some suggestions.To students, you'd better choose activities which interest you and others; to schools, they should organize more activities for students and leave students more time for activities by giving them less homework.

　　Dear friends, please actively take part in after­class activities, which will not only make your school life more colourful, but also improve your study.