高三英语备考总复习课件人教版必修5：写作进行时-提纲作文 29张

　　必 修 5

　　写作进行时——提纲作文

　　[技巧点拨]

　　Ⅰ.写作要点

　　1．认真审题和分析所给的提纲，认清题目和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、大致内容以及文体。

　　2．每一个要点可以作为文章的一个段落层次。段落的展开应围绕提纲的中心和内容，不能偏离，也不能任意增减。

　　3．提纲只是对文章的提示和概括，不是主题句。考生需要根据提纲的性质，写出完整的、体现提纲主旨的句子，使之成为主题句，然后围绕主题句进行扩展。

　　4．搜集材料支持主题句。材料可以是例证、亲身经历、名人名言、谚语警句等。应当注意的是，所选材料要与文章的主题相符，即要“扣题”，同时要具有典型性，能充分说明问题。在有多个例证的段落中，还要注意各个例证之间的连贯性。

　　Ⅱ.常用模板/句式

　　A．结构模板

　　In recent years, ×× has caused a heated debate on________________.

　　The factors for________. First of all，________. Then, there comes a case that________. Moreover，________. Especially when________.

　　Indeed, these unique points can be collected to remind people that________. In this way, we should behave just like________.

　　B．常用句式

　　1．It is often said that...

　　2．It goes without saying that...

　　3．It can be easily proved that...

　　4．One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is...

　　5．I am of the opinion that...

　　6．The chief reason why...is that...

　　7．To take...for an example(instance)．..

　　8．According to a latest study, it can be predicted...

　　9．Another special consideration in this case is that...

　　10．This may be true, but we still have a problem with regard to...

　　[习作点评]

　　假设你是李华，于2010年6月3日搭乘国外某航空公司航班(flight number BA793)回国后，发现遗失了一个行李箱(suitcase)。现请用英文给该航空公司写一封信，请他们帮你寻找。信件要点包括：

　　•陈述写信原因

　　•简要描述该行李箱

　　•说明其重要性

　　•期待回复并表示感谢

　　注意：120～150。

　　Dear Sir/Madam，

　　I'm Li Hua, I took the plane BA793 on June 3,2010.【表示“乘坐航班”应该使用“take the flight”。】But unfortunately, when I came to my home, I found I had lost a suitcase. As a result, I am writing to you request you to help me to find it back. 【此处应该使用动词不定式to request作目的状语。】

　　My suitcase is a small blue one with a zip on the top of it. There is a label on the handle with my name and place on it, which I stuck to it in case I can easily identify it among the masses of suitcases.【表示“地址”应该用“address”。】It is really important for me, because I put all my important documents in it, including my ID card, passport and so on.【此处应该用过去完成时“had put”表示过去的过去。】

　　Besides, it_is_my_father sent to me on my birthday as a present. 【在is后应该添加连词what引导表语从句。】From the above, you may imagine how worried I am now. Please help me.

　　Thanks for your kind consideration and I look forward to receive your earliest reply. 【look forward to后接动名词形式receiving。】

　　Yours truly，

　　Li Hua

　　[跟踪演练]

　　1　(2011·重庆)

　　某国际动物关爱协会面向全球中学生招募“动物代言人”，希望申请者选择一种自己喜欢的动物，为之代言(speak for)。假设你是重庆新华中学的学生李华，有意参与该活动。现请你用英文在线填写申请表(仅需填写“申请陈述”部分)，内容如下：

　　●表示有意参加

　　●说明自己富有爱心、关爱动物

　　●打算为何种动物代言，并说明理由

　　●希望申请成功

　　Application Form (申请表)

　　Name

　　(姓名) Li

　　Hua Sex

　　(性别) F/M Age(年龄) 18

　　Email Add. (电子邮件地址) lihua @ xinhuaschool.com

　　Statement

　　Of Application

　　(申请

　　陈述) I am a student from Xinhua Middle School

　　in Chongqing, China.__________________________ ____________________________________________

　　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　注意：

　　(1)请在答题卡规定区域内作答；

　　(2)词数100左右；

　　(3)“申请陈述”的第一句已经给出，不计入总词数。

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　参考范文：

　　I am a student from Xinhua Middle School in Chongqing, China. I would like to be a spokesman for animals to try my best to protect them.

　　I like animals very much and I have a loving heart for animals, especially polar bears. So I want to speak for polar bears. Nowadays, the balance of nature is being destroyed and the weather is getting warmer and warmer. What's worse, some people kill polar bears for their own sake. As a consequence, the number of polar bears is becoming smaller and smaller. So, in order to increase people's awareness of protecting polar bears, I apply for the spokesman for polar bears sincerely.

　　I do hope I can be chosen as a spokesman for polar bears.

　　2　(2011·天津)

　　假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排其在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith 先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。

　　上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等)；

　　中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等)；

　　下午与我校学生游览海河。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数不少于100；

　　2. 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

　　3. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　　参考词汇：

　　海河 the Haihe River

　　Dear Mr. Smith，

　　I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School._______________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua

　　参考范文：

　　Dear Mr Smith，

　　I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School.I'm honoured to make arrangements for you and your students on behalf of our school.In order to give the students from the two countries a good chance to understand each other better，we will have a talk about the school life，and the cultural differences in the morning.After

　　that, we'll have lunch together in the school dinning hall, where we can enjoy some traditional Chinese foods, such as dumplings, noodles and so on.I hope the students from America will have a better understanding of the Chinese culture.In the afternoon, we'll visit the Haihe River, which is the most beautiful river in our city.I'm sure you will be deeply struck by the beautiful scenery.

　　I'll be glad to follow it if you have any better advice on the arrangements.

　　Thank you.

　　Yours sincerely，

　　Li Hua