2017届高考英语二轮复习热点限时训练：短文改错系列2

　　短文改错系列2

　　一、短文改错

　　1．假定英语课上老师要求同学之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/），并在该句下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　Dear Jim,

　　Thank you for your last letter telling me your recently news. I'd like to tell you something about our school sports meet. It was holding on Oct.20, which was a fine day. There were over 1,600 students and teachers attend it. Wang Lin, a student from my class won the 100-meter race. He finishes the race in 11.2 seconds and broke down the school record. They were all very excited. The sports meeting was great success. That was why we were all making every effort to our class honor. Although I was not one of the winner, I was proud of what we had done.

　　Looking forward to receiving your letter.

　　Yours,

　　Li Ping

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】recently改recent

　　holding改held

　　attend改attending

　　finishes改finished

　　去掉down

　　They改We

　　great前加a

　　why改because

　　to改for

　　winner改 winners

　　【小题1】后面是名词news，说明这里应该用形容词的形式。

　　【小题2】指运动会被举行，这里应该使用被动语态。

　　【小题3】现在分词短语attending it修饰students and teachers.

　　【小题4】文章讲述的是运动会上发生的事情，故使用过去时。

　　【小题5】break the school record破了学校记录。Break down崩溃，机器坏了。身体垮了。

　　【小题6】we指我们观看比赛的人。

　　【小题7】本句的success是一个可数名词，指一件成功的事情，或一个成功的人。

　　【小题8】That is because后面接的句子是表示原因的。

　　【小题9】for为了…表示目的。我们是在为班级而努力的。

　　【小题10】one of后面接复数名词，表示…之一。

　　2．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

　　注意：

　　1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　It has been years since the Chinese get plastic bags from supermarkets for free. China has banned free plastic bags at shops and supermarkets, but people have to pay for them. The Chinese once used about 300 million of plastic shopping bags a day, which has caused environmentally pollution because plastic bags are not easy to break down. So the Chinese is encouraged to take their own bags for shopping. Then what kind of shopping bag is the best to carry? Some student in Chongqing have a extraordinary idea. They use old clothes to make cloth bags, and then to ask their parents and friends to use these cloth bags instead of plastic ones. They do so because they think it is our duty to help protecting the environment.

　　【答案】

　　【题】get Got

　　【题】but and/so

　　【题】

　　【题】environmental

　　【题】is are

　　【题】student students

　　【题】

　　a an

　　【题】then

　　【题】our their

　　【题】protect Protect

　　【解析】

　　【题】

　　【题】

　　【题】

　　【题】

　　【题】

　　【题】

　　【题】

　　【题】T

　　【题】

　　【题】

　　3．下文中共有十处错误，每句中最多有两处，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2、只允许修改十处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

　　Dear Wang Ping，

　　I’m very glad to have received a letter you sent me two weeks before．I’ve been thinking about the question you ask me．In my opinion，you should come back after you finish your studies at abroad．For one reason，what you are studying is bad needed nowadays in China．It will be quite easy of you to find a good job．In fact，I know that a few big company in our city are hoping to hire people like you．For other reason，I think it will be much more convenient for you to look after your parents as we are getting old．Therefore，I think it’s a good idea for you to return．So what are you waiting?

　　Best wishes．

　　Yours，

　　Li Hua

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】a改为：the

　　【小题2】before改为：ago

　　【小题3】ask改为：asked

　　【小题4】at 去掉

　　【小题5】bad改为：badly

　　【小题6】of 改为：for

　　【小题7】company改为：companies

　　【小题8】other 改为：another

　　【小题9】we改为：they

　　【小题10】waiting 加入for

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】特指你寄给我的信

　　【小题2】两周前用two weeks ago表达

　　【小题3】你问我问题是过去发生的事情，使用用过去时。

　　【小题4】abroad是副词，前面不需要介词

　　【小题5】副词：迫切地

　　用badly表示。

　　【小题6】Easy不是表示性格特征的形容词，所以用for,不用of

　　【小题7】a few修饰可数名词复数形式

　　【小题8】后面给的是单数名词，所以用another:另外一个

　　【小题9】they指代your parents

　　【小题10】固定词组wait for等待。

　　4．下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。

　　注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

　　2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s tr ue what honesty is more important than money!

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】deep改成deeply

　　【小题2】in后面去掉the

　　【小题3】bad,改成 worse

　　【小题4】direction. Directions或all改成any

　　rush 改成rushed

　　【小题6】know 改成 knowing

　　【小题7】picked 后面加 up

　　【小题8】missed改成missing/lost

　　【小题9】your 改成our

　　【小题10】what t改成hat

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】修饰动词moved。故用deeply. 表示抽象意义的深深地。

　　【小题2】in the front of 表示里面的前面，in front of 就表示“在…的前面”

　　【小题3】固定短语：To make things worse, 更糟糕的是

　　【小题4】in all directions 或in any direnction

　　【小题5】讲述过去的事情，用过去时

　　【小题6】现在分词做伴随状

　　【小题7】pick up 捡起

　　【小题8】be missing/be lost表示不见了

　　【小题9】前面用的是my,故这里应用our

　　【小题10】it为形式主语，that引导主语从句,在从句中不充当任何成分

　　5．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用（＼）划掉；

　　修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1. 每处错误及修改仅限一词；

　　2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　I just come back from Britain last week. I was luckily enough to be one of the student from different countries to visit the UK from Feb. 16 to 28. We paid a visit to many places, like London, Oxford or the Lake District. I learned much about British culture and history in London, where was my favorite. I also liked Oxford, in which I saw much more old buildings. The Lake District was beautiful, but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there. The most excited thing for me in the Britain was that I made a lot of friends there.

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】come→ came

　　【小题2】luckily→ lucky

　　【小题3】student→ students

　　【小题4】or→ and

　　【小题5】where→ which

　　【小题6】much→ many

　　【小题7】在pity前加a;

　　they→ we

　　【小题9】excited→ exciting

　　【小题10】去掉Britain前的the

　　【小题1】（因为时间状语为last week

　　【小题2】 (lucky在be动词后面作表语

　　【小题3】one of the +名词复数

　　【小题4】这里表示“和”而不是“或者”

　　【小题5】先行词在定语从句中作主语，故用which

　　【小题6】修饰buildings用many

　　【小题7】固定句型：It was a pity that…

　　【小题8】整篇文章都是第一人称

　　【小题9】修饰物，用exciting

　　【小题10】地名前不加定冠词

　　6．此行多一个词把多余的词用斜线( )划掉在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ )在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词在错的词下划一横线在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：请在答题卡上作答。

　　’m a student in Senior Grade Three, study in a key

　　76._______________

　　school. Our life is busy and fairly boring. We often have to

　　77._______________

　　attend classes seven days a week with only one day is off

　　78._______________

　　each month. The extra class at weekends almost make

　　79._______________

　　us to break down. In addition to that, the examinations

　　80._______________

　　held once a month drive our mad. Hardly have we

　　81._______________

　　finish the last exam when the next one is just

　　82._______________

　　around the corner.

　　But it is really difficult to

　　83._______________

　　keep good state of mind.

　　I’m looking forward to

　　84._______________

　　June 7th next year, no matter which the result is.

　　85._______________

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】study--studying或study加and

　　fairly—rather

　　【小题3】去掉is

　　class—classes

　　【小题5】去掉第一个to

　　our—us

　　【小题7】finish—finished

　　【小题8】But—So

　　【小题9】good前加a

　　which—what

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】I’m 与study之间缺连词，故将study--studying或study加and

　　【小题2】boring是贬义词，修饰贬义词用rather，不用fairly。

　　【小题3】with 是介词后不能接谓语动词。去掉is。

　　【小题4】谓语动词是make，所以主语用classes。

　　【小题5】make sb do sth 使某人做某事。

　　【小题6】drive sb mad使某人发疯。drive后用宾格代词。

　　【小题7】与前面的have构成现在完成时。

　　【小题8】But 前后两句是因果关系，改用So。

　　【小题9】keep a good state of mind 保持好的心态。

　　【小题10】no matter what the result is不管结果是什么。

　　7．以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：请在答题卡上作答。

　　In my hometown there used to a temple with a 76.

　　history of more than four hundred years. It lies in a

　　77.

　　valley with green hills around it. It was such beautiful 78.

　　and famous that many tourists came visit it every day. 79.

　　They took photo; they wrote down their names on

　　80.

　　the walls; they were brought food and drink and left rubbish 81.

　　everywhere. One day some tourists did a fire to cook 82.

　　food near the temple. All of sudden, a strong wind 83.

　　blew. The wooden temple caught fire. Soon the wholly 84.

　　temple was burned out and only a little walls remained. 85.

　　The beautiful temple disappeared.

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】to后加

　　【小题2】lies→lay

　　【小题3】such→so

　　【小题4】came后加to

　　photo→photos

　　【小题6】去掉were

　　【小题7】did→made

　　【小题8】of后加a

　　wholly→whole

　　【小题10】little→few

　　【解析】

　　【小题1】 there used to be意为“过去曾经有”。

　　【小题3】修饰形容词应用so，不用such。

　　【小题4】come to do sth来做某事。

　　【小题5】take photos拍照。

　　【小题6】they是brought的执行者，应用主动语态。

　　【小题7】make a fire生火。

　　【小题8】all of a sudden 突然。

　　【小题9】修饰名词temple应用形容词。

　　【小题10】修饰可数名词复数用few；不用little。

　　8．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断；如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个钩（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在错的词下画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

　　注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　When my father bought me a computer as a birthday gift for

　　76. ________

　　me in last year, I felt very excited. As we all know, computers

　　77. ________

　　are getting more and more usefully now. Much information can

　　78. ________

　　be stored in them. We can also learn that has lately happened

　　79. ________

　　in the world on the Internet. In the past, people had to do lots of

　　80. ________

　　work which was very dangerous. Now, but, computers can do it

　　81. ________

　　instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises

　　82. ________

　　on my computer. Then it will correct it and tell me the right

　　83. ________

　　answers. In this way it is very convenient for me to prepare

　　84. ________

　　the exam than before. The computer has become my real friend.

　　85. ________

　　【答案】

　　【小题1】去掉me

　　去掉in

　　usefully— useful

　　【小题4】that —what

　　【小题5】正确

　　but—however

　　【小题7】did—do

　　【小题8】第二个it—them

　　very—more

　　【小题10】the前加for

　　【小题1】因为后面已经用了for me。

　　【小题2】last year直接做时间状语，不需要加in。

　　【小题3】get是连系动词，故用形容词useful。

　　【小题4】what引导宾语从句，在从句中充当主语。

　　【小题5】正确

　　【小题6】but后面不需要逗号，故改为however.

　　【小题7】前面是is coming，故这里应用现在时。

　　【小题8】此处代替的是exercises，故用them。

　　【小题9】这是比较级，故用more。

　　【小题10】prepare for为…做好准备。