2015届高考一轮复习英语同步练习：短文改错练习（3）

　　2015高考英语：短文改错练习（3）及答案解析

　　【英语卷(解析)·2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试（201708）】A

　　Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no tomb.

　　【答案】【知识点】E1 短文改错记叙文

　　【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。

　　【答案解析】

　　7

　　77. her→him 前文讲述的a man，故此处用him。

　　78. say→said 并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过去时，故say改为said。

　　79. toilet前加the 此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。

　　80.passing→passed

　　句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为passed。

　　81. was told

　　tell后跟双宾的及物动词，tell sb that-clause，tell后无间接宾语，故用被动语态。

　　82.immediate→immediately。副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。

　　83.or→and。并列的不定式，表示肯定含义用and连接。

　　84. mile→miles 15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。

　　85. in→with。 在某人的帮助之下with one’s help或者with the help of sb。

　　【英语卷(解析)·2015届河北省唐山市高三9月模拟考试（201709）WORD版】

　　第一节短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）

　　假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

　　增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

　　删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

　　修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

　　注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。

　　2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

　　It was a year ago when Joshua got a bike for Christmas, but he rode it every day． One morning, he suddenly found the bike gone． Ran to his front yard, he saw

　　a man loading it into his car． He shouted, but the man drive off． As a devoted Christian, he told his dad he real forgave the thief． What's more, he wanted the thief know he was forgiven． So the next day, he posted the message on a poster-board and put it in the front yard． "To the person who stole my bike: You hurt my feeling． But I am a Christian and I forgive him!" When he left for home the next morning, at the end of the driveway, the bike was back with new brakes．

　　【文章综述】本文讲述一个善良的人用爱心感动盗贼的故事

　　【答案解析】

　　when –that

　　考查强调句。句意：一年前因为圣诞节周华得了一辆自行车。强调一年前。

　　but—and

　　考查连词。句意：一年前因为圣诞节周华得了一辆自行，并且每天都骑着它。两个句子之间是并列关系。

　　Ran—Running

　　考查非谓语动词。句意：他跑到前院，看到一个男人正在把他的自行车装到他的车上。两个句子共用一个主语，he与run之间是主动关系。

　　drive—drove

　　考查动词的时态。句意：他叫喊但那个男人开车跑了。But连接的两个句子时态保持一致。

　　real---really

　　考查副词 句意：作为一个虔诚的基督徒，他告诉父亲他真的原谅了那个小偷。

　　the thief后面加to 考查动词用法。Want sb to do 想让某人做某事。

　　the message—a

　　考查冠词。句意：因此第二天，他前院的海报上写一个短信；因为第一次提到故用a.

　　feeling---feelings 考查名词。句意：你伤害我的感情。Feelings表示感情。

　　him—you

　　考查代词。句意：但我是个基督徒，我原谅你。

　　left for 去掉for

　　考查动词。句意：当他第二天早上离开家时。Leave A for B 离开A地去B地。

　　短文改错

　　 I was a high school student then, from low-income

　　76. _______

　　family. So I have to work to support my family. My

　　77. __________

　　first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. __________

　　I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. __________

　　the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of

　　80. __________

　　losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. __________

　　my homework. And I came to understand that was not 82. __________

　　easy to earn money, and knowledge could change 83. __________

　　my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. __________

　　way, was much more important as what I earned.

　　85. __________

　　【参考答案】

　　I was a high school student then, from∧ low-income

　　76. ____a______

　　family. So I have to work to support my family. My

　　77. ___had ____

　　first one job was to clean tables in a small restaurant. 78. ____去掉one___

　　I still remember going there early and felt anxious about 79. ____feeling______

　　the new world. I worked harder because I was afraid of

　　80. ___hard_______

　　losing the job. At night, I was sometimes very tired to do 81. ____too______

　　my homework. And I came to understand that∧ was not 82. ____it______

　　easy to earn money, and∧ knowledge could change 83. ___that ____

　　my life. So what I learned from the job, in a hard 84. ____√______

　　way, was much more important as what I earned. 85. ___than____

　　短文改错

　　My cousin Xiao Hong and I went on trip to my uncle’s

　　76. _____________

　　last Sunday. We were riding along a hillside then suddenly

　　77. _____________

　　some big stones were rolled down and knocked us off our bikes.

　　78. _________

　　Xiao Hong’s legs got serious hurt and so did mine. We

　　79. _____________

　　couldn’t move a bit. Fortunately, I saw some farmers ahead.

　　80. ____________

　　Waving our hand, we cried for help like crazy. On hearing

　　81. ____________

　　us, they run to the spot as fast as they could. Thanks to

　　82___________

　　their help, we were all sent to a nearby hospital and received

　　83. ____________

　　medical treatment in time. Although we do not know about their

　　84. ________

　　names, we fell they like our dear big brothers and sisters.

　　85. _______

　　【参考答案】76.on︿ a

　　77. then →when

　　78 were去掉

　　79 serious → seriously

　　80.正确

　　81. hand→hands

　　82.run→ran

　　83.all→both

　　84.about 去掉

　　85.they︿are

　　One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as 76．_______________

　　the telephone rang. I went to answer immediately. 77．_______________

　　She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking 78．_______________

　　on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the 79．_______________

　　kitchen. The room full of smoke and beef was badly 80．_______________

　　burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the

　　81．_______________

　　windows, and then went out of the house. With my 82．_______________

　　surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I 83．_______________

　　was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it

　　84．_______________

　　was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 85．_______________

　　76．as→When

　　77．answer后加it 78．She→It

　　79．a→the

　　80． room后加was

　　81．opening→opened

　　82．With→To

　　83．√

　　84．去掉about

　　85．which→that

　　J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

　　此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

　　此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

　　此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。

　　George,

　　It's been a week after we left your family and we are now

　　76._______

　　back home. Thank you very much for showing them around

　　77.______

　　your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After

　　78._______

　　we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C.,

　　79._______

　　where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond

　　80._______

　　of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying

　　81．________

　　another couple of day. However, my father had to return to

　　82.________

　　work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It

　　83．________

　　was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to

　　84._______

　　our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide.

　　85._______

　　Yours,

　　Mike

　　【参考答案】

　　76.after---since

　　77.them---us

　　78.for---with

　　79.正确

　　80.去掉much

　　81.staying---stay

　　82.day----days

　　83.fly---flew

　　84.trip前a

　　85.better----more

　　(2017·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)

　　I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.

　　答案：

　　I'm a senior student from China,

　　seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With

　　interest, I'd like to apply for . I'm an outgoing girl who

　　communicating with others. I

　　speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over

　　world; for another, I expect to learn

　　more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make . The chance is so precious

　　I'm really looking forward to your approval.

　　短文改错

　　I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then

　　76.

　　in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home

　　77.

　　at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We

　　78.

　　had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However ,

　　79.

　　we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life .

　　80.

　　At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool

　　81.

　　or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat

　　82.

　　each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any

　　83.

　　difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out .

　　84.

　　It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories

　　85.

　　are as sweet as ever before .

　　【参考答案】

　　I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then

　　76.

　　yet

　　in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home

　　77.

　　were

　　at ∧early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We

　　78.

　　an

　　had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However ,

　　79.

　　ourselves

　　we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life .

　　80.

　　helpless

　　At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool

　　81.

　　swim

　　or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat

　　82.

　　treated

　　each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any

　　83.

　　√

　　difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out .

　　84.

　　others

　　It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories

　　85.

　　since

　　are as sweet as ever before .

　　短文改错

　　Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 76. _______

　　the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 77. _______

　　long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 78. _______

　　to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people

　　79. _______

　　like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words,

　　80. _______

　　they help to keep people strong and feel good . When people are 81. _______

　　playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 82. _______

　　for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy.

　　83. _______

　　Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American 84. _______

　　big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 85. _______

　　【参考答案】

　　76. and －but

　　77. woman－women

　　78.

　　called前加had 79. play- playing

　　80． 正确

　　81. feel-feeling

　　82. how-why

　　83. make-makes

　　84.去掉the

　　85. sell-buy