2016届广东省高考英语二轮精华复习课件：基础写作

　　现象分析

　　现象分析的文章属说明文，一般先指出某地存在某种现象，然后说明这种现象产生的原因， 最后提出建议或呼吁杜绝这种现象。通常用一般现在时态。 晨读背诵

　　相关短语

　　1. stay up late 熬夜

　　2. play an important part 起重要作用 3. choose to do选择做……

　　4. owing to lack of money由于缺钱 5. feel sleepy感到困乏

　　6. tend to do sth. 易于/倾向做某事 7. as a result结果

　　8. improve the situation改善这种情况 9. take measures采取措施

　　10. stay slim 保持身材苗条 11. creative thinking创造性思维

　　12. 80% of the students百分之八十的学生 13. be keen on对……感兴趣

　　14. migrant schools农民工子弟学校 15. collect money筹集资金

　　16. pour more money into投入更多资金 17. the whole society全社会

　　18. donate books to them捐书给他们 19. show concern for关心

　　20. take up too much time占用太多的时间 21. grow tired of厌倦了……

　　22. do exercise锻炼；做运动 23. The worst thing is that… 最糟糕的是… 24. mean everything to sb.对某人来说意味

　　着一切

　　25. reform the current educational system

　　改革现行教育制度

　　26. the College Entrance Examinations大学

　　入学考试(高考) 1. 最近的调查表明, 中国青少年的健康大大下降了。 A latest survey shows that the health of Chinese youngsters has greatly declined.

　　2. 实际上, 早餐起着重要的作用, 因为它提供了一整天身体所需的能量的30%。 In fact, the morning meal plays an important part because it can provide 30 percent of the whole day’s energy. 相关句式 3. 结果，这些学生整天昏昏欲睡, 记忆力很差。 As a result, these students tend to feel sleepy all day and have bad memories.

　　4. 由于缺钱, 大多数民工学校没有现代设备, 没有操场, 没有图书馆, 甚者没有足够的师资。 Owing to lack of money, most migrant schools have no modern equipment, no playground, no libraries, and even not enough teachers. 5. 为了改善这种情况, 我们政府应当采取措施帮助他们。 In order to improve the situation, our government should take measures to help them.

　　［指出现象］Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet.

　　［分析原因］ For one thing,

　　it can provide them a colorful window to show their ideas

　　and for another,

　　it is a way for them to release their pressure.

　　However, many parents and teachers are worried about it. They fear that managing a blog will take a lot of time and energy,

　　which

　　will have a bad effect on their lessons. 经典范文

　　[作者观点] In my opinion, I do prefer this activity

　　because

　　the Internet is playing a more important and necessary part in our life and in the Information Age, we high school students have to learn and make the most of this useful tool to communicate and show ourselves.

　　●环境污染(2016佛山二模)

　　It’s an alarming phenomenon that with the increasingly serious air pollution, the air quality in cities is becoming worse and worse. The gases from cars and factories keep coming into the air without being absorbed by enough trees, because trees have been cut down in large quantities.

　　People’s health will be harmed once these gases are taken in, which may cause a series of diseases like lung cancer. To improve the situation, we suggest that the number of cars should be controlled and the factories should be prevented from pouring out wastes. And when we go out, we should try to walk or take public transportations rather than drive our own cars.

　　Recently the safety of school buses has become an increasingly serious problem, which has attracted more and more attention. In our class a discussion has been held on the cause and solutions. We think that the problem is mainly caused by overloading, speeding and weak safety awareness. As for the solutions, we reach the agreement that schools and kindergartens are requested to examine the safety of school buses and stop risky vehicles from being operated. Only if people attach great importance to safety education to raise safety awareness can traffic accidents decrease. ●校车安全问题 ●不吃早餐的习惯

　　I’m very much honored to give you a speech on healthy breakfast. As far as I know, some students in our class often go to school without having breakfast while others do have breakfast but not a well-balanced one. Consequently, their health and study efficiency are negatively affected.

　　According to my personal experience, a healthy and well-balanced breakfast should consist of whole grains, eggs and milk, fruits and vegetables because the grain which contains carbohydrates can provide the energy we need every day. Furthermore, eggs and milk can also supply protein, and fruits and vegetables are good for healthy digestion as well. Therefore, I strongly suggest that we should get up early and have a well-balanced breakfast before going to school. * * * * * *